::Kabhi to bata jaana::

by nidhi_yadein on April 02, 2006, 06:03:03 PM
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«Reply #15 on: April 04, 2006, 10:52:43 AM »
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"Kaash itna aasaan hota is dil ko samjhaana,
  kaash itna asaan hota beeti baaton ko bhulana,
  yaadein bankar jo mere dil pe aaj kaabiz hain,
  kaash itna asaan hota in yaadon ko mita paana,
  tera naam labon pe aaye isse pehle hi,
  shuru ho jaata hai ashqon ka janaaza,
  aakhir kya aisi baat hai tum-me......,
  kabhi waqt nikaalkar mujhe ye bata jaana,
  kyun ek tere sahare zindagi bitaa rahi hoon,
  na hai ab meri kismat me muskuraana,
  ek nazar sahi,aakar dekho to kabhi,
  kya haal aaj ban gaya hai apna,
  jo tumne kar li hoti mohabbat ye sweekar,
  zindagi ko meri aaj mil chuka hota kinara,
  bohat tadpi hoon main is chahat me,
  nasamajh kyun ban baitha dil ye deewana,
  na rakhi kabhi kami apni wafaaon me maine,
  kahan reh gayi kami is mohabbat me batana,
  kyun di mujhe tanhaai bhari zindagi tumne,
  kyun rulaya hai itna,kabhi to bata jaana."


Bohot achcha likha hai Nidhi...aisa laga tumne meri soch parh li ho sad5
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«Reply #16 on: April 04, 2006, 05:25:48 PM »
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Nidhiji Aap bahot acha likhti hai. Really very nic.........

Yah bhi bata de ki tujhe dil se bhulaun kaise
Teri yadon  ke chiragon ko bujhaun kaise


Thanx Raj Usual Smile and nice one.

"Shama mohabbat ki ek arse se jalaaye baithe hain,
      teri mohabbat me duniya bhulaaye baithe hain,
      aakar kabhi bata jaana kaise jiyun main tum bin,
      andheron me roshni ki aas lagaye baithe hain."
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«Reply #17 on: April 04, 2006, 05:31:43 PM »
Thanx a lot TaLaT Usual Smile .
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«Reply #18 on: April 04, 2006, 08:16:59 PM »
Buhat khoob! NIdhi!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #19 on: April 05, 2006, 02:16:41 PM »
nice work nidhi
quite sad u seem
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«Reply #20 on: April 05, 2006, 04:35:30 PM »
Thanx u neha sis(kitthe gayab ho jaati ho aap beech beech me Puzzled ! ) and thanx a lot harshit Usual Smile .
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«Reply #21 on: April 05, 2006, 04:38:59 PM »
oye kuddiye tumaritino poems badi wadiya hai!!!  :D  keep it up...hope to c u more often here  :D
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«Reply #22 on: April 06, 2006, 01:47:42 PM »
Thanx Nidhiji
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«Reply #23 on: April 06, 2006, 04:35:29 PM »
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oye kuddiye tumaritino poems badi wadiya hai!!!  :D  keep it up...hope to c you more often here  :D


Thanx a lot sis Usual Smile ,ya even i too hope 2 c myself more often here  :oops: lol .
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«Reply #24 on: April 06, 2006, 04:38:49 PM »
tujhe chahne ki galti iss dil ne ki
ismein hamari kya khata..kabhi fursat mein bata jaana
tujhe apna maana tumhari pooja ki...zara khata to samjha jaana
dil ke gharonde mein tujhe basaya hai... jagah buri lagi to bata jaana
mujhe intzaar hai tere jawaab ka...kabhi chup ka pehra toote to jawaab suna jaana
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«Reply #25 on: April 06, 2006, 04:49:53 PM »
Wow,wonderful sis Usual Smile .

"Dil me tumhe bhulaane k liye nahi basaya tha maine,
      ashq bahaane k liye pyaar nahi nibhaya tha maine,
      khata kya thi meri,itna to mujhe bata jaana tha na,
      chahaton ka meri bewafaai ki sahi,sila to dena tha na."
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«Reply #26 on: April 06, 2006, 04:53:35 PM »
wah wah nikki and nidhi....dono kuddiyon ne wadiya likha hai!!!  :D
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«Reply #27 on: April 06, 2006, 04:54:07 PM »
too gud Nidhi sis....n thanx a lot
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«Reply #28 on: April 06, 2006, 04:58:43 PM »
aaj mausam mein kuch nami si hai
mehsoos ho rahi kissi ki kami si hai
na jaane dil ko kaisa rog laga liya hai
woh chup hai..main bhi khamosh hun
magar fir bhi shikwe sunayi dete hain
hum jinka dil todne ki soch bhi nahi sakte
woh aaj kuch naraaz dikhayi dete hain

jaane kya galti dil kar baitha
khud ko to dukhi kiya hi
unse bhi jhagad baitha
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«Reply #29 on: April 06, 2006, 05:09:43 PM »
Thanx meena sis,aap bhi kuch kayamat dhaa jaatin to acha tha Winking and thanx nikki sis,ek baar fir aapne bohat acha likha hai Usual Smile .

"Waqt ke saath kabhi kabhi halaat aise hote hain,
      naraaz khud se aur gussa kisi aur se hote hain,
      reh nahi sakte jinke bin,unse jhagad baithte hain,
      akele me phir apne hi dil ko kyun koste hain."
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