kabhi ubhre to kabhi doob gaye...

by Pooja on November 24, 2008, 09:36:49 PM
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Bahoot koshish karati hu ki dard-e-shayri main na likhu.... magar jab bhi kabhi is section mai aoro ko padne atti hu... kalam khud-b-khud mere dil ki tarah mujhse bewafa ho jaati hai...

Ajj kuch man mai ayya hai... jo app sabki najar hai:

Ashako ke sagar main kabhi ubhre to kabhi doob gaye
Kabhi paya tumko humne, aor kabhi sabhi sahare toot gaye

Dard se buni kavitaye, ashko main din beet gaye
Chumchum karati baji kabhi payal, kabhi sare ghungroo toot gaye

Jeevan ki sargum main, ek ek  kar ke sur ruth gaye
Dhadkano ki is sargam main, ek ek kar ke sapne toot gaye….

Ashako ke sagar main kabhi ubhre to kabhi doob gaye...
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«Reply #1 on: November 25, 2008, 08:13:46 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on November 24, 2008, 09:36:49 PM

Dard se buni kavitaye, ashko main din beet gaye
Chumchum karati baji kabhi payal, kabhi sare ghungroo toot gaye

Jeevan ki sargum main, ek ek  kar ke sur ruth gaye
Dhadkano ki is sargam main, ek ek kar ke sapne toot gaye….

Bahut khoob Pooja ji!
         - abd bundeli
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«Reply #2 on: November 25, 2008, 09:54:58 AM »
Bahut achha likha hai Pooja di..  notworthy
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«Reply #3 on: November 25, 2008, 04:04:11 PM »
Quote from: abdbundeli on November 25, 2008, 08:13:46 AM
Bahut khoob Pooja ji!
         - abd bundeli

Shukaria Abd ji... acha lagta hai jab comments ke sath Yo-sathi yah bhi batate hai ki unhe kon se lines jayada achi lagi.. apne parra aor bataya iske liye main apki abhari hu Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: November 25, 2008, 04:04:43 PM »
Quote from: Mahiya on November 25, 2008, 09:54:58 AM
Bahut achha likha hai Pooja di..  notworthy

Thank you so much Mahiya!!
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«Reply #5 on: November 26, 2008, 09:08:12 AM »
Bahot Achcha Likha Hai Pooja Didi,.
Nice One,.
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«Reply #6 on: December 31, 2008, 07:06:43 PM »
shukaria Lil bro
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«Reply #7 on: December 31, 2008, 11:57:23 PM »
You Are Always Welcome Didi,.

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Yun To Darr Lagta Hai Sabko, Aag Ki Garmi Se "Azeem',.
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«Reply #8 on: December 31, 2008, 11:58:24 PM »
bahoot sahi kaha aor bahoot dil se kaha lil bro.. Good one
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«Reply #9 on: January 01, 2009, 12:05:03 AM »
Shukriya Didijaan,.

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Tu Kare Intezaar, Aur Na Aaaoon Main,.

Samander Pe Le Jaake, "Fareb Na Karna "Aye Dost,.
Tu Kahe To Kinaare Bhi Ho Doob Jaaoon Main,.

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«Reply #10 on: February 09, 2009, 05:26:36 AM »
nice sharing lil bro
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