kabhi ubhre to kabhi doob gaye...:Shayri-E-Dard

Pooja

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Bahoot koshish karati hu ki dard-e-shayri main na likhu.... magar jab bhi kabhi is section mai aoro ko padne atti hu... kalam khud-b-khud mere dil ki tarah mujhse bewafa ho jaati hai...

Ajj kuch man mai ayya hai... jo app sabki najar hai:

Ashako ke sagar main kabhi ubhre to kabhi doob gaye
Kabhi paya tumko humne, aor kabhi sabhi sahare toot gaye

Dard se buni kavitaye, ashko main din beet gaye
Chumchum karati baji kabhi payal, kabhi sare ghungroo toot gaye

Jeevan ki sargum main, ek ek kar ke sur ruth gaye
Dhadkano ki is sargam main, ek ek kar ke sapne toot gaye….

Ashako ke sagar main kabhi ubhre to kabhi doob gaye...


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Re: kabhi ubhre to kabhi doob gaye...

«Reply #1 on: November 25, 2008, 08:13:46 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on November 24, 2008, 09:36:49 PM

Dard se buni kavitaye, ashko main din beet gaye
Chumchum karati baji kabhi payal, kabhi sare ghungroo toot gaye

Jeevan ki sargum main, ek ek kar ke sur ruth gaye
Dhadkano ki is sargam main, ek ek kar ke sapne toot gaye….

Bahut khoob Pooja ji!
- abd bundeli


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Shikha12

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Re: kabhi ubhre to kabhi doob gaye...

«Reply #2 on: November 25, 2008, 09:54:58 AM »

Bahut achha likha hai Pooja di.. notworthy


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Pooja

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Re: kabhi ubhre to kabhi doob gaye...

«Reply #3 on: November 25, 2008, 04:04:11 PM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on November 25, 2008, 08:13:46 AM

Bahut khoob Pooja ji!
- abd bundeli

Shukaria Abd ji... acha lagta hai jab comments ke sath Yo-sathi yah bhi batate hai ki unhe kon se lines jayada achi lagi.. apne parra aor bataya iske liye main apki abhari hu Usual Smile


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Pooja

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Re: kabhi ubhre to kabhi doob gaye...

«Reply #4 on: November 25, 2008, 04:04:43 PM »

Quote from: Mahiya on November 25, 2008, 09:54:58 AM

Bahut achha likha hai Pooja di.. notworthy

Thank you so much Mahiya!!


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Re: kabhi ubhre to kabhi doob gaye...

«Reply #5 on: November 26, 2008, 09:08:12 AM »

Bahot Achcha Likha Hai Pooja Didi,.
Nice One,.


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Pooja

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Re: kabhi ubhre to kabhi doob gaye...

«Reply #6 on: December 31, 2008, 07:06:43 PM »

shukaria Lil bro


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Re: kabhi ubhre to kabhi doob gaye...

«Reply #7 on: December 31, 2008, 11:57:23 PM »

You Are Always Welcome Didi,.

Apni Zindagi Mein, Aksar Koi Aata Kyun Hai,.
Khwaab Dikhaakar Hume, Wo Tord Jaata Kyun Hai,.

Guzaar To Rahe The, Hum Zindagi Ko Tanhaa Hi,.
Phir Koi Kareeb Aakar, Tanhaai Ka Ehsaas Dilaata Kyun Hai,.

Yun To Darr Lagta Hai Sabko, Aag Ki Garmi Se "Azeem',.
Phir Koi Dil Ke Andaar Hi Aag Lagaata Kyun Hai,.

Kya Ajeeb Dastoor Hai Mohabbat Ka Bhi, "Doston,.
Ek Karta Hai Bewafaai, To Dusra Wafaa Nibhaata Kyun Hai,.

Ab Chal "Azeem" Tu Bhi, Ye "YOINDIA" Tera Nahi,.
Jab Koi Tere Dard Ko Samjha Nahi, Phir Dard Dikhaata Kyun Hai,.

____________________________________-Jaanasheen-
Dilse,.


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Pooja

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Re: kabhi ubhre to kabhi doob gaye...

«Reply #8 on: December 31, 2008, 11:58:24 PM »

bahoot sahi kaha aor bahoot dil se kaha lil bro.. Good one


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Re: kabhi ubhre to kabhi doob gaye...

«Reply #9 on: January 01, 2009, 12:05:03 AM »

Shukriya Didijaan,.

Kabhi Kabhi Teri Nazron Mein Jhil Milaaoon Main,.
Tu Kare Intezaar, Aur Na Aaaoon Main,.

Samander Pe Le Jaake, "Fareb Na Karna "Aye Dost,.
Tu Kahe To Kinaare Bhi Ho Doob Jaaoon Main,.

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Re: kabhi ubhre to kabhi doob gaye...

«Reply #10 on: February 09, 2009, 05:26:36 AM »

nice sharing lil bro


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