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saat ka pahada to door
saat tak ki ginti se pahle
mere saat phere ho gaye
saat samunder paar ke
saat rango wale sapne
mere liye satwa aasmaan ho gaye

gher gher khelte hue
khudka gher bas gaya
mitti se sane in haatho me
mahndi ka rang chad gaya

aankhe, jise dekh sab
kahte the sager si
wo sager hi ho gayi
kahani sunne ki umer me
zindagi khud kahani ho gayi

dekh ker dalo pe jhoola
bachpan yaad aata hai
per ye kokh ka palna
hindola cheen jata hai

aankho me kismat chounk ker
choolhe me deh ko foonkti hu
rishto se khud ko ponch ker
kadam apne dhoondti hu


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Talat

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kadam apne dhoondti hu( kam umer me shaadi)

«Reply #1 on: July 09, 2005, 07:27:34 PM »

Bohot achche Sam......... very meaningful ... !!!!!!!!!


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isha_verma7

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«Reply #2 on: July 09, 2005, 08:03:40 PM »

wah wah wah samnoj kya sachai likhi hai ladki ke life ka baraa main.......very meaninful!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #3 on: July 10, 2005, 12:58:22 PM »

beautiful sam......................... bohat khoob likha hai ..! Usual Smile


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«Reply #4 on: July 10, 2005, 02:09:56 PM »

very nice Samnoj......................intersting ..................


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«Reply #5 on: July 11, 2005, 10:08:41 AM »

nice one samnoj........................................... ........!!!


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kadam apne dhoondti hu( kam umer me shaadi)

«Reply #6 on: July 11, 2005, 01:15:15 PM »

thanx talat, isha, nishi, dolly , gunda n salma .............


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«Reply #7 on: July 11, 2005, 05:12:30 PM »

wah wah samnoj ji....really too gud!! its such an interesting topic!!

mehendi lag gayi haaton me,
jiska matlab bhi na jana tha,

chud gaya nata us insaan se,
jise kabhi apna bhi na mana tha,

bachpana chut gaya bachpan me hi,
jab rishto se humne farz nibana tha,

hasi chin jayegi humse us umar me,
jab auron ki tara humen bhi muskurana tha!!


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«Reply #8 on: July 12, 2005, 06:34:04 AM »

nice Samnoj and meena ji ............

Shaadi ko khel bana ke nani si jaan ko chonk diya usme
jo khushi banti kal uski aaj gum ban gaya hai


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«Reply #9 on: July 12, 2005, 09:19:13 PM »

bahoot khoob sanmoj, meena and sandhaya......................................

laut saku mai wapis, ajj khud ke kadam-e-nishan dhundati hu
shayad phir see jee saku ek baar, Zindagi-e-rahem dhundati hu!!!!


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«Reply #10 on: July 13, 2005, 05:24:02 AM »

Quote from: "samnoj"

Nice Sam..................very meaningful...


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kadam apne dhoondti hu( kam umer me shaadi)

«Reply #11 on: July 13, 2005, 07:54:48 AM »

thanx meena, sandhaya, pooja n khushi

bahut khoob meena, pooja n salma

chahat ka mayaar to kam hai, chahat ka izhaar bahut
jeevan aisa jungle hai jisme phal kum aur ashjaar bahut

mahroomi, nakami, zillat, ranj-o-aalam
mera dil khali makaan hai, jiske dawedaar bahut

koi tan ki chaandi mange, koi honto ka sona
chahat ki nagri me dekha, jism ke wyapaar bahut


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«Reply #12 on: July 13, 2005, 04:45:10 PM »

wah janab kaya baat hai.........bahoot khoob sanmoj ji..........


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kadam apne dhoondti hu( kam umer me shaadi)

«Reply #13 on: July 14, 2005, 11:03:58 AM »

thanx pooja ................................................. ..............


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Meena

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«Reply #14 on: July 14, 2005, 04:42:07 PM »

thank u everyone!! :D sandhaya ji aur pooja kuddiye..zabardast!!

samnoj ji...apki 2nd poem pe bih mai kuch lihk deti par mujeh itna samajh nahin aya sad5

apki poems ati hi bbohot kam samajh me mujhe Shocked


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