Kahaani Gulaab Ki,.

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Hai Doston Pata Nahi Ye Kalaam Dard Mein Likhna Sahi Hai Ya Mohabbat Pe,
Bas Isme Maine Do Chahne Waalon Ka Pyaar Ka Ehsaas, Gulaab Aur Kaante Ke Hawaale Se Bayaan Kiya Hai,.

Hope U Will Like It,.

-Azeem-


Ek Gulaab Kaantein Se Bichardke Roya Bohat Tha,.
Kaante Se Kaha Ke Tune Mujhe Sabse Bachaaya Bohat Tha,.

Aati Raho Dhoop, Barsaat Bhi Pardi Mujhpe,.
Teri Nazar, Teri Hifaazat Rahi Mujhpe,.

Ab Judaai Teri Main Kaise Sahoonga,.
Bin Tere Aye "Kaante" Ab Khila Kaise Rahoonga,.

Duniya Bedard Hai Milna Kisi Ka Dekhti Nahi,.
Kya Guzregi Chahne Waalon Pe Sochti Nahi,.

Ye Gulaab Tujhse Bichardke Sookh Jaayega,.
Tu Bhi Aye Yaar Yakheenan Toot Jaayega,.

Rab Hume Kaash Yunhi Milaake Rakhta,.
Hume Ek Dusre Ka Sadaa Banaake Rakhta,.

Kaash Hoti Meharbaan Khudaai Humpe,.
Kaash Hoti Na Sitamgar Judaai Humpe,.

-Azeem-
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«Reply #1 on: April 13, 2010, 01:45:18 PM »
wah bahut khoob Azeem -ji

wah wah Applause Applause

very nice keep it up!!!
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«Reply #2 on: April 13, 2010, 03:46:13 PM »
WAH WAH WAH AZEEMJI WAH WAH......... VERY BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN AND REALLY APPRECIATE THE POINTS YOU RAISED IN HERE .... ITS JUST SO SPLENDID ...


JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #3 on: April 13, 2010, 05:16:44 PM »
Achi poem likhi hai Azeem bhai. Hijr ko khoobsurti se bayaan kya hai.
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«Reply #4 on: April 13, 2010, 06:15:46 PM »
wah azeem , kya kahene tumhare to hamesha se lajawab kahete ho app .. bahoth qoob .. khush rahe hamesha ..


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«Reply #5 on: April 13, 2010, 06:23:49 PM »
Bahot khoob Azeem ji dil ka sara dard nikaal diya aapne is poem mein. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: April 13, 2010, 06:49:35 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahoooot khoob likha hai azeem..
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«Reply #7 on: April 13, 2010, 07:22:25 PM »
bahut hi lajwab kahani lagi azeem ji..bus ek khyal zehen mein aaya ki agar do teen sher aap aur iss kahani mein jod dete tou aur bhi acha lagta..yu laga padh k jaise is kahani ka ant adhura sa reh gya hai..maaf kijiyega padhke mujhe jaisa laga main apse keh diya..baaki apki lekhi hamesh ki tarah bahut badhiya hai....
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«Reply #8 on: April 13, 2010, 09:18:03 PM »
Wow Azeem bhai,marvelous and mindblowing creation.arey itna acha likha hai aap samajh mein nahi aati kaise tareef karu.keep it up. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: April 14, 2010, 10:45:42 AM »
bahut khoob  icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #10 on: April 14, 2010, 11:12:21 AM »
Quote from: pari001 on April 13, 2010, 01:45:18 PM
wah bahut khoob Azeem -ji

wah wah Applause Applause

very nice keep it up!!!


Shukriya Pari Ji, Duaa Ki Darkhwaast Hai,.
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«Reply #11 on: April 14, 2010, 11:19:59 AM »
Bohot Khoob Bhai Azeem...Bohot achcha likha hai aapne.....
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«Reply #12 on: April 15, 2010, 08:18:47 AM »
Quote from: jasbirsingh on April 13, 2010, 03:46:13 PM
WAH WAH WAH AZEEMJI WAH WAH......... VERY BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN AND REALLY APPRECIATE THE POINTS YOU RAISED IN HERE .... ITS JUST SO SPLENDID ...


JASBIR SINGH


Hausla Afzaai Ka Shukriya Jasbir Ji,.

Rab Khair Kare,.

-Azeem-
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«Reply #13 on: April 16, 2010, 05:15:25 AM »
Wah! Chote Bhai Bahut hi badiya likha hai aap ne
 
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«Reply #14 on: April 16, 2010, 07:10:58 PM »
Quote from: riyaz106 on April 13, 2010, 05:16:44 PM
Achi poem likhi hai Azeem bhai. Hijr ko khoobsurti se bayaan kya hai.

Shukriya Riyaz Bhai,.
Duaaon Ki Darkhwast Hai,.

Quote from: qadeer_junaid on April 13, 2010, 06:15:46 PM
wah azeem , kya kahene tumhare to hamesha se lajawab kahete ho app .. bahoth qoob .. khush rahe hamesha ..


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Shukriya Qadeer Bhaijaan,.
Aapne Hume Har Kadam Pe Saath Diya Hai..

Yunhi Saath Dete rahein,.

Shukriya,.
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