Kahan kho gaye hain hum.......!!!

by Talat on October 25, 2006, 04:02:25 PM
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #15 on: October 26, 2006, 06:06:32 PM »
wonderful   Shikha..........  Angel...........
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Talat
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«Reply #16 on: October 27, 2006, 08:58:58 AM »
Quote from: "Shikha12"

Talat... This really is an excellent work... =D> =D>
I Liked each and every line... :D

Also Beautiful work Jeet... Bahut achha likha hai aapne...
=D> =D>
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Thanks so much Shikha...I am really happy you liked it so much ! Usual Smile
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Talat
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«Reply #17 on: October 27, 2006, 08:59:27 AM »
Quote from: "Shikha12"


I think I should also try something over here...

[you]Just a Try from my side...[/you]



Mere dil ki sar zameen par,
Teri yaadon ka karvaan…
Udaas Udaas aasmaan par,
Jaisey chand ka deraa….

Zindagi phisal rahii,
Aur paanv uthtey nahin…
Muhabbat ney dekh teri,
Kya haal kar diya mera….

Hoth toh khule magar,
Pukaar niklii nahin….
Bebasi ka nakab kaise,
Bann gaya mera chehra…

Waqt ki maar sey magar,
Hauslaa toota nahin…
Beshak hume pyaar tera,
Zakhm de gaya gehra….

Jaane se kisi ke kabhi,
Waqt to thehrtaa nahin…
Phir lage yeh aaj kyon,
Tere jaane sey thera thera….


...and this one is really very vey nice !!
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purani_jeans_aur_guitar
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«Reply #18 on: October 27, 2006, 10:18:33 AM »
nicely written......talat ji angel ji & shikha ji u too.......


kya kahu kis kadar takdeer ne maara hai mujhe
dubi kashti jis pal meri,mila tab kinaara hai mujhe

roshni hasti rahi door se bekhudi ki shab per meri
bebasi ne is qadar jhakhmo se lalkaara hai mujhe
kya kahu kis kadar..................

do kadam ke faasle per kahdi rahi zindagi lekin
ek karvat lena bhi us taraf na  gawaara hai mujhe
kya kahu kis kadar...............

zindagi bhar jeena mujhe khalta raha sine mai
mar bhi naa paaya ki na maut ka sahara hai mujhe
kya kahu kis kadar.................

dard ko hum yu 'fahi',haskar gale lagaate rahe
jo chubhe aankhon mai pasand wahi sitaara hai mujhe

..........................@fahi@..............................
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Talat
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«Reply #19 on: October 27, 2006, 10:33:07 AM »
Thanks Fahi, Good one from you !!
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Shikha12
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«Reply #20 on: October 27, 2006, 02:00:46 PM »
Thanks a lot Talat and Fahi...

Fahi... Very nice effort... =D> =D> =D>
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angel4u
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«Reply #21 on: October 27, 2006, 05:27:09 PM »
Nice one fahi...


Mera Dil Bahut Udaas Hai,
Ye Raatein Be-Sukoon Hai,
Ye Din Be-AraaM Hai,
Mujhe Mohabbat Ki Pyaas Hai,
Mera Dil Bahut Udaas Hai...

Ab Jo Tu Mujhse Bichhad Gaya,
Mera Chain Bhi Mujhse Kho Gaya,
Na Jane Kyon Phir Teri Aas Hai,
Mera Dil Bahut Udaas Hai...

Tujhe Bhulneki Jab Koshish Kari,
Haqeeqat Ko SaMajhneki Koshish Kari,
Yun Laga Tu Kahin Aas Paas Hai,
Mera Dil Bahut Udaas Hai...

Zindagi Aise Daurahe Par Aayi Hia,
Ke Sirf Main Aur Meri Tanhayi Hia,
Na Jaane Ye Kaisa Ajeeb Ehsaas Hai,
Mera Dil Bahut Udaas Hai...
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purani_jeans_aur_guitar
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«Reply #22 on: October 30, 2006, 05:08:29 PM »
sukriya & nice 1 too angel ji...............

kya kahu kis qadar tabha ye zamaana nikla
dil tha khaali mera khaali hi paimaana nikla

samajhkar rehnuma hum jiske sang rehne lage
dil mera aakhir unka bhi nishaana nikla

kisse karu main sikwa ab kisse fariyaad karu
ghar mera hi mere dushmano ka thikhaana nikla

socha khuda se karu main us hasee ke julm bayan
per khuda bhi sayad us sitamgar ka deewana nikla

main sambhalta bhi to kaise ye chot khane se 'fahi'
jhakhm bharkar marna hi jeene ka bahana nikla

...........................@fahi@.........................
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angel4u
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«Reply #23 on: October 30, 2006, 05:11:40 PM »
Thanks fahi...
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purani_jeans_aur_guitar
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«Reply #24 on: November 02, 2006, 12:53:25 PM »
pleasure...........

mere dil ko gumo mai dubaane se pehle
aankhon ki nami ko ashk banane se pehle
ek baar apna muskurata chehra dhikha jaa
fiza mai sard tanhaayi phir aane se pehle

........................@fahi@.........................
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angel4u
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«Reply #25 on: November 02, 2006, 05:36:54 PM »
Nice one fahi...
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purani_jeans_aur_guitar
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«Reply #26 on: November 04, 2006, 03:28:52 AM »
sukriya.............

kar gaya unke har sitam ka aadi hame
deker dard, woh haal-e-dil  puchna unka

.......................@fahi@......................
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angel4u
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«Reply #27 on: November 04, 2006, 05:45:06 AM »

HaMein Khabar Hi Nahi Kuch TuMhare Aane Tak,
Ke Dil Ko Chain Na Aayega Ek ZaMane Tak,

Jo HuM Yaqeen Bhi Kar Lein TuMhare Waadon Ka,
Jiyega Kaun TuMhare Palat Ke Aane Tak,

GuMaan Bhi Nahi Hota Hai Sunnewalon Ko,
Ke Waqeya Hi Badal Jaata Hai Sunane Tak,

Guzar Gayi Hai Isi DarMiyan Saari UMar,
Sawal Karne Se Le Kar Jawab Aane Tak,

Har Ek Chaal Agarche Bahut Hi Mushkil Thi,
Main Aa Chuki Hoon Magar Jeetne Ke Khaane Tak,

TuMhe Kuch Unke Dilon Ki Khabar Bhi Hai Ke Nahi,
Pahuch Sake Na Parinde Jo Aashiyane Tak,

Har Ek Mehaz Pe Hara Hi Hai Mera DushMan,
Theher Saka Hi Nahi Aakhri Nishane Tak,

Mujhe Ye Dar Hai Ke Mere Munafiq Dost,
SaMet De Na Mera Kafan Mujhe Dafnane Tak...
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purani_jeans_aur_guitar
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«Reply #28 on: November 19, 2006, 05:54:46 AM »
very nice angel ji............accha lagta hai aisi soch padkar......
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Talat
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«Reply #29 on: November 19, 2006, 06:39:49 PM »
Nice one !
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