Kahan ki sharafat hai

by tamanna.pt on April 18, 2010, 05:05:01 PM
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           Bharte zakhmo ko uksaana,kahan ki sharafat hai,
            Band khatoon ko fir khulvaana,kahan ki sharafat hai,
       
            Bujha aaye the jis raah k charaag hum apne haathoon se,
            Unko suboh-shaam jalaana,kahan ki sharafat hai,
 
            Waqt dekar sanwarti hain ye uljhi zulf zindagi ki,
            Suljhe masloon ko uljhaana,kahan ki sharafat hai,
 
            Dheere se bhi na kaha gaya jo fasana kabhi humse,
            Usko sare-aam batlana,kahan ki sharafat hai,

            Lateefon se bhi chot khayien ab aise tang dil bhi nahi hum,
            Par chot ko lateefa batlana,kahan ki sharafat hai.


                         
                           ----Tamanna----

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«Reply #1 on: April 18, 2010, 05:18:28 PM »
wah tammana saheba bahoth qoob ,ye ghame hijr ki sharafart maloom hoti hai , waise dad hazir hai qubool karen ..

gham-a-hijr me ashqon ke moti piroya
muddath howi mujhe mai na jaga na soya


mubarak baad eak achi taqleeq per ..

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«Reply #2 on: April 18, 2010, 05:26:13 PM »

        Bahut Shukriya qadeer ji kalaam ko padhne or pasand karne k liy or aapne bhi hamesha ki tarah behatareen likha hai.
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«Reply #3 on: April 18, 2010, 06:43:01 PM »
bahut khoob likha hai aaapne Tamanna ji....!!!
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«Reply #4 on: April 18, 2010, 07:47:16 PM »
bohut khub tammna n qabeer bhai
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«Reply #5 on: April 19, 2010, 02:52:55 AM »
Wah kya baat hai          Tamanaa.pt ji......

Na khushi de sakhte ho toh na sahi
par bar bar mere gam mujhe yaad dilana
Kahan ki sharafat hai..........
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«Reply #6 on: April 19, 2010, 06:47:19 AM »
Tamanna ji aapne to kamaal kar diya. Ek dam naye qism ka aur purkashish kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne. Marhaba, afreen.
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«Reply #7 on: April 19, 2010, 10:23:22 AM »
Waah Waah Waah...

bahut Bahut Khoob Tamanaaji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: April 19, 2010, 11:04:15 AM »
   

    Bahut shukriya shihaab ji,meri likhi koshish ko pasand karne k liy.
Bahut Khub Tamanna Ji...


Khush Rahiye...


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«Reply #9 on: April 19, 2010, 11:08:41 AM »
   
   Bahut shukriya cara ji.
Wah kya baat hai          Tamanaa.pt ji......

Na khushi de sakhte ho toh na sahi
par bar bar mere gam mujhe yaad dilana
Kahan ki sharafat hai..........
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«Reply #10 on: April 19, 2010, 11:12:52 AM »
 Bahut shukriya riyaz ji ,aap sab yu hi mera hausla badhate rahiyega main aage bhi achha likhne koshish karti rahungi.
Tamanna ji aapne to kamaal kar diya. Ek dam naye qism ka aur purkashish kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne. Marhaba, afreen.
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«Reply #11 on: April 19, 2010, 11:15:50 AM »
    Tahe-dil se Shukriya khwaish ji.
Waah Waah Waah...

bahut Bahut Khoob Tamanaaji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

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«Reply #12 on: April 19, 2010, 11:20:07 AM »
    Aapne mere kalaam ko pasand kiya iska bahut-bahut shukriya klaskar ji.
bahut khoob likha hai aaapne Tamanna ji....!!!
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«Reply #13 on: April 19, 2010, 11:22:07 AM »
    Waqt dene or kalaam ko pasand karne ka shukriya rayees ji.
bohut khub tammna n qabeer bhai
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«Reply #14 on: April 20, 2010, 12:10:21 AM »
WAh WAh!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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