*****kahin koi udaas betha hai*****:Shayri-E-Dard

kaushikbhawna008

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hawaaon ka rukh ye kehta hai
kahin koi udaas betha hai

gar nahi hai hasi mere labon pe to
kahin koi aur bhi khamosh beta hai

hawaaon ka rukh ..................

ye jo tez tufaan sa uth raha hai
lagta hai kahin koi tadap raha hai

be-waqt ye jo barsaat ho rahi hai
lag raha hai kahin koi ro raha hai

hawaaon ka rukh ..................

kisi ka ehsaas karati hain hawaayein
shayad koi hai jo mujhse bichad gaya hai

lagi hoon sochne fir aaj "bhawna"
kaun hai jo mujhse kuch juda hai

hawaaon ka rukh ...................

kuch chand sawaal jo meine khud se hain puche
kyu kar rahi hoon yaad use jo bewafaa hai?

kya wo aaj sach mei nibhayega mujhse wafaa
jo aaj har lamha mere liye tadap raha hai?

hawaaon ka rukh .....................


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Muhammed

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Re: *****kahin koi udaas betha hai*****

«Reply #1 on: July 10, 2008, 05:47:49 AM »

kisi ka ehsaas karati hain hawaayein
shayad koi hai jo mujhse bichad gaya hai

lagi hoon sochne fir aaj "bhawna"
kaun hai jo mujhse kuch juda hai

Waah..Bahot Khoob Bhawnaji..
Badhiya Nazam..Hammesha KI Tarha......hawaaon ka rukh


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Rajbir

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Re: *****kahin koi udaas betha hai*****

«Reply #2 on: July 10, 2008, 05:51:54 AM »

Bhawna

Beautiful poem ! Applause

hawaaon ka rukh ....


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: *****kahin koi udaas betha hai*****

«Reply #3 on: July 10, 2008, 05:56:48 AM »

shukriya muhammed ji and rajbir ji

jab bhi ham kuch tanha hue
in hawaaon ne ehsaas unka kara dia
lage the sochne ki kaise jiyenge unse hokar juda
in hawaaon ne hamei unka sparsh bhi kara dia


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punam

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Re: *****kahin koi udaas betha hai*****

«Reply #4 on: July 10, 2008, 06:15:20 AM »

Bahot khoob kaushikbhawna ji simply beautiful...


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kiiller_1

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Re: *****kahin koi udaas betha hai*****

«Reply #5 on: July 10, 2008, 06:16:15 AM »

gar nahi hai hasi mere labon pe to
kahin koi aur bhi khamosh beta hai

ye jo tez tufaan sa uth raha hai
lagta hai kahin koi tadap raha hai

be-waqt ye jo barsaat ho rahi hai
lag raha hai kahin koi ro raha hai

aise sayri na kbhi padhi he
nahi sayad kabhi samne aayegi
gr8 job Applause

jeise dil ne sine meise bahar aake apni halat batai ho Clapping Smiley


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: *****kahin koi udaas betha hai*****

«Reply #6 on: July 10, 2008, 06:20:09 AM »

shukriya killer_1 ji and punam ji


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k.shael

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Re: *****kahin koi udaas betha hai*****

«Reply #7 on: July 10, 2008, 06:38:38 AM »

NICE KALAM AGAIN Applause

KAUSHIK,
KEEP GOING....
BY. K.SHAEL


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unlock ali

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Re: *****kahin koi udaas betha hai*****

«Reply #8 on: July 10, 2008, 08:44:27 AM »

be-waqt ye jo barsaat ho rahi hai
lag raha hai kahin koi ro raha hai

hawaaon ka rukh ..................

kisi ka ehsaas karati hain hawaayein
shayad koi hai jo mujhse bichad gaya hai,

bahut khoob bhawnaji. kya sanjeeda likhti hai aap.... dil ko ek tadpati hui khushi milti hai, aapka likha padhkar


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: *****kahin koi udaas betha hai*****

«Reply #9 on: July 11, 2008, 06:51:51 AM »

thnks ali ji


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Shikha12

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Re: *****kahin koi udaas betha hai*****

«Reply #10 on: July 11, 2008, 06:59:24 AM »

Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on July 10, 2008, 05:40:34 AM

Very Nice Work KaushikBhawna.. Applause


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Re: *****kahin koi udaas betha hai*****

«Reply #11 on: July 11, 2008, 07:14:48 AM »

bahoot khoob bhawna........... Applause

lakh chipaya duniya se....par chip nahi paaya,
kabhi hawaon ne kah diya, kabhi maousam ne bataya,
dono ne ek doosare se ashqon ko yun chipaya
tumne nazar churai aur mai bhi muskaraya


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Shikha12

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Re: *****kahin koi udaas betha hai*****

«Reply #12 on: July 11, 2008, 07:16:48 AM »

Quote from: bekarar on July 11, 2008, 07:14:48 AM

bahoot khoob bhawna........... Applause

lakh chipaya duniya se....par chip nahi paaya,
kabhi hawaon ne kah diya, kabhi maousam ne bataya,
dono ne ek doosare se ashqon ko yun chipaya
tumne nazar churai aur mai bhi muskaraya

Waah... Too Good Reply.. Applause

Sanjeev..


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: *****kahin koi udaas betha hai*****

«Reply #13 on: July 11, 2008, 08:17:21 AM »

Quote from: bekarar on July 11, 2008, 07:14:48 AM

bahoot khoob bhawna........... Applause

lakh chipaya duniya se....par chip nahi paaya,
kabhi hawaon ne kah diya, kabhi maousam ne bataya,
dono ne ek doosare se ashqon ko yun chipaya
tumne nazar churai aur mai bhi muskaraya

shukriya bekarar ji

yu dard mei muskurana ka andaaz apna apna hai
wo ho jaayein kabhi mere bas khwab yahi adhura hai
nahi hai khwahish k wo dekh ansu mere khud bhi rone lagein
bas wo dard apna na chupayein bas yahi unse kehna hai


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: *****kahin koi udaas betha hai*****

«Reply #14 on: July 11, 2008, 08:19:52 AM »

shukriya mahiya ji


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