*****kahin koi udaas betha hai***** -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

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«Reply #15 on: July 11, 2008, 08:42:50 AM »

Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on July 10, 2008, 05:40:34 AM

hawaaon ka rukh ye kehta hai
kahin koi udaas betha hai

gar nahi hai hasi mere labon pe to
kahin koi aur bhi khamosh beta hai

hawaaon ka rukh ..................

ye jo tez tufaan sa uth raha hai
lagta hai kahin koi tadap raha hai

be-waqt ye jo barsaat ho rahi hai
lag raha hai kahin koi ro raha hai

hawaaon ka rukh ..................

kisi ka ehsaas karati hain hawaayein
shayad koi hai jo mujhse bichad gaya hai

lagi hoon sochne fir aaj "bhawna"
kaun hai jo mujhse kuch juda hai

hawaaon ka rukh ...................

kuch chand sawaal jo meine khud se hain puche
kyu kar rahi hoon yaad use jo bewafaa hai?

kya wo aaj sach mei nibhayega mujhse wafaa
jo aaj har lamha mere liye tadap raha hai?

hawaaon ka rukh .....................

Bahut Bahut Khoob BHAWNA.. Dil se Nikle yeh alfaaz Behad khubsoorati se
alfaazon me Me Pesh kiye Hain aapne.. Really Great..!! Clapping Smiley

**~** Mann **~**


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: *****kahin koi udaas betha hai*****

«Reply #16 on: July 11, 2008, 09:56:07 AM »

thnx mann ji


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Re: *****kahin koi udaas betha hai*****

«Reply #17 on: July 11, 2008, 05:29:51 PM »

nice bhawna and sanjeev


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Re: *****kahin koi udaas betha hai*****

«Reply #18 on: November 17, 2008, 04:37:08 AM »

Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on July 10, 2008, 05:40:34 AM

Excellent, Boht khoob


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kaushikbhawna008

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«Reply #19 on: November 18, 2008, 05:46:22 AM »

shukriya pooja ji
shukriya zaraab ji


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Re: *****kahin koi udaas betha hai*****

«Reply #20 on: November 18, 2008, 06:02:23 AM »

Bahut hi khoob
bahut hi badia bhawna ji

Baadal


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: *****kahin koi udaas betha hai*****

«Reply #21 on: November 18, 2008, 06:36:39 AM »

ji shukriya baadal ji

der se hi sahi par aapki najar padi to sahi thread par tongue3


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Re: *****kahin koi udaas betha hai*****

«Reply #22 on: November 18, 2008, 01:06:35 PM »

Nice One Bhawna,.


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«Reply #23 on: November 19, 2008, 05:04:17 AM »

ji shukriya janasheen ji notworthy


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Re: *****kahin koi udaas betha hai*****

«Reply #24 on: November 23, 2008, 03:54:15 PM »

U Are Welcome./

Dil Mein Mere Udaasi Hai,.
Kisi Ki Mehfil Kya Sajaaoon Main,.

Khud Ka Ghar Bachaa Na Saka Mohabbat Ki Aag Se,.
Kisi Ka Ghar Yahaan, Kya Basaaoon Main,.

___________________________-Jaanasheen-


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«Reply #25 on: November 24, 2008, 04:44:07 AM »

Quote from: Jaanasheen on November 23, 2008, 03:54:15 PM

wonderful janasheen ji Applause


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«Reply #26 on: November 24, 2008, 04:47:26 AM »

nice work lil bro


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«Reply #27 on: November 26, 2008, 01:06:01 PM »

Shukriya Bhawna Ji,.
And Pooja Didi./
Aap Bhi Kuch Likh Kar Jaate To Silsila Bardta,.


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Re: *****kahin koi udaas betha hai*****

«Reply #28 on: November 26, 2008, 01:08:56 PM »

Kaise Khabar Hui Zamaane Ko, Mere Dard Ki,.
Maine To Apne Saaye Se Bhi Haal Apna Chupaaya Tha,.

Shayad Wo Aankhon Ki Zubaan Samajh Gaye,.
Jinhe Kabhi Is Zabaan Ko Humne Seekhaaya Tha,.

_________________________-Jaanasheen-


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Re: *****kahin koi udaas betha hai*****

«Reply #29 on: November 26, 2008, 01:16:31 PM »

BAHUT KHOOB BHAWANA JI BAHUT HI ACHA HAI LIKHA HAI AAPNE MUJHE BEHAD PASSAND AAYA OR JO AAPNE APNE DIL KI AWAZ NIKALI WAHI BAAT MUJHE PASSNAD AND JANASHEEN VERY NICE YOUR WORK UR PESHKASH

JAB bhi koi naraz hota
toh dil ussay puch baitha
jab bhi koi udas hota
toh zuban ussey puch baithti
jab bhi koi ehsas hota
toh main hawao se puch baithti.. ye kaisa ehsas ..ye kaisa haal hai...kya kahein is zindagi ko ...ye kaisa sawal hai....kahin koi udass baitha hai...lagta hai dil udas baitha hai..lagta hai zindagi udas baithi hai ..lagta hai ehsaas jaag utha hai or derd de raha hai bada sata raha hai or bahut rula raha hai...........

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