*****kahin koi udaas betha hai*****

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«Reply #30 on: November 27, 2008, 04:40:44 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on November 26, 2008, 01:08:56 PM
Kaise Khabar Hui Zamaane Ko, Mere Dard Ki,.
Maine To Apne Saaye Se Bhi Haal Apna Chupaaya Tha,.

Shayad Wo Aankhon Ki Zubaan Samajh Gaye,.
Jinhe Kabhi Is Zabaan Ko Humne Seekhaaya Tha,.

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bohut bohut shukriya jaansaheen ji
aapka reply padhkar hamei bohut acha laga
thnks a lot

milte hain fir bichad jaate hain
zindgi k rishte kuch isi tarah nibhaye jaate hain

koi paa kar kho deta hai kisi ko kuch mil jaata hai
par sach to yahi hai ek din sab kuch bikhar jaata hai

mera bhi haal kuch aisa hi hai doston
ab dard bhi mere aansuon mei behkar nikal jaata hai
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«Reply #31 on: November 27, 2008, 04:42:36 AM »
Quote from: muskan_bye on November 26, 2008, 01:16:31 PM
BAHUT KHOOB BHAWANA JI BAHUT HI ACHA HAI LIKHA HAI AAPNE MUJHE BEHAD PASSAND AAYA OR JO AAPNE APNE DIL KI AWAZ NIKALI WAHI BAAT MUJHE PASSNAD AND JANASHEEN VERY NICE YOUR WORK UR PESHKASH

JAB bhi koi naraz hota
toh dil ussay puch baitha
jab bhi koi udas hota
toh zuban ussey puch baithti
jab bhi koi ehsas hota
toh main hawao se puch baithti.. ye kaisa ehsas ..ye kaisa haal hai...kya kahein is zindagi ko ...ye kaisa sawal hai....kahin koi udass baitha hai...lagta hai dil udas baitha hai..lagta hai zindagi udas baithi hai ..lagta hai ehsaas jaag utha hai or derd de raha hai bada sata raha hai or bahut rula raha hai...........

*********************************MUSKAN************************


ji shukriya muskaan ji  notworthy
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«Reply #32 on: November 27, 2008, 04:55:24 AM »
nice work lil bro, bhawna and Muskan
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«Reply #33 on: November 27, 2008, 05:02:37 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on November 27, 2008, 04:55:24 AM
nice work lil bro, bhawna and Muskan

shukriya pooja ji 
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«Reply #34 on: December 01, 2008, 07:52:39 AM »
Quote from: muskan_bye on November 26, 2008, 01:16:31 PM
BAHUT KHOOB BHAWANA JI BAHUT HI ACHA HAI LIKHA HAI AAPNE MUJHE BEHAD PASSAND AAYA OR JO AAPNE APNE DIL KI AWAZ NIKALI WAHI BAAT MUJHE PASSNAD AND JANASHEEN VERY NICE YOUR WORK UR PESHKASH

JAB bhi koi naraz hota
toh dil ussay puch baitha
jab bhi koi udas hota
toh zuban ussey puch baithti
jab bhi koi ehsas hota
toh main hawao se puch baithti.. ye kaisa ehsas ..ye kaisa haal hai...kya kahein is zindagi ko ...ye kaisa sawal hai....kahin koi udass baitha hai...lagta hai dil udas baitha hai..lagta hai zindagi udas baithi hai ..lagta hai ehsaas jaag utha hai or derd de raha hai bada sata raha hai or bahut rula raha hai...........

*********************************MUSKAN************************

Shukriya Muskaan Ji,.
Aur Bohat Achcha LIkha Hai Aapne Bhi,.

Ye Teri Adaa Hai,.
Ke Auron Ki Udaasi Mein Apni Udaasi Dekhti Hai,.
Inki Khushiyon Mein, Tu Apni Khushi Dekhti Hai,.

Yun To Saamna Hua Mera Kuch Aisi Haseena Se "Muskaan",.
Jo Jalaakar Ghar Mera, Khud Ke Ghar Roshni Dekhti Hai,.

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«Reply #35 on: December 01, 2008, 07:59:09 AM »
Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on November 27, 2008, 04:40:44 AM

bohut bohut shukriya jaansaheen ji
aapka reply padhkar hamei bohut acha laga
thnks a lot

milte hain fir bichad jaate hain
zindgi k rishte kuch isi tarah nibhaye jaate hain

koi paa kar kho deta hai kisi ko kuch mil jaata hai
par sach to yahi hai ek din sab kuch bikhar jaata hai

mera bhi haal kuch aisa hi hai doston
ab dard bhi mere aansuon mei behkar nikal jaata hai

Shukriya And Nice One Again Bhawna Ji,.

Sach Kahaa Tune Dost, Mushkil Hai Yahaan Dil Lagaana,.
Akar Tere Shehar Mein, Yahaan Ke Logon Ka Haal Jaana,.

Sabke Dil Ghayal Hai, Aur Zakham Bhi Haare Lagte Hain,.
Sab Mohabbat Ke Maare Hain,Sab Ko Hai Mohabbat Mein Marjaana,.

Bataa Dengi Galiyaan Haal Tere Shehar Ka, "Bhawna,.
Tu Chup Hi Reh, Warna Aasoon Nikal Aayenge, Mushkil Hoga Phir Tujhe Samjhaana,.

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«Reply #36 on: December 01, 2008, 08:00:16 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on November 27, 2008, 04:55:24 AM
nice work lil bro, bhawna and Muskan

Shukriya Didi Jaan,.
Achcha Lagta aap Bhi Kuch Likhkar Jaate To,.
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«Reply #37 on: December 02, 2008, 07:03:07 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 01, 2008, 07:59:09 AM

Shukriya And Nice One Again Bhawna Ji,.

Sach Kahaa Tune Dost, Mushkil Hai Yahaan Dil Lagaana,.
Akar Tere Shehar Mein, Yahaan Ke Logon Ka Haal Jaana,.

Sabke Dil Ghayal Hai, Aur Zakham Bhi Haare Lagte Hain,.
Sab Mohabbat Ke Maare Hain,Sab Ko Hai Mohabbat Mein Marjaana,.

Bataa Dengi Galiyaan Haal Tere Shehar Ka, "Bhawna,.
Tu Chup Hi Reh, Warna Aasoon Nikal Aayenge, Mushkil Hoga Phir Tujhe Samjhaana,.

____________________________________-Jaanasheen-






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shukriya janasheen ji
bohut acha reply diya hai aapne
kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai umeed hai pasand aaygi aapko

tanha hoon nahi jab saath raat suhani hai
log kehte hain meri aankho mei paani hai

ye to marz apni aisi hai jo jaaygi nahi
warna doston dil mei zakhm ek tufani hai
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«Reply #38 on: December 02, 2008, 07:05:35 AM »
wah kaya baat hai bhawna... bahoot khoob likha
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«Reply #39 on: December 02, 2008, 07:09:55 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on December 02, 2008, 07:05:35 AM
wah kaya baat hai bhawna... bahoot khoob likha

shukriya pooja ji
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«Reply #40 on: December 02, 2008, 07:32:33 AM »
bhawna, azeem bahoot achcha likha hai dono ne
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«Reply #41 on: December 02, 2008, 08:39:06 AM »
ji shukriya sanjeev ji notworthy
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«Reply #42 on: December 02, 2008, 09:00:13 AM »
Nice Ghayel Ji
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«Reply #43 on: December 02, 2008, 09:07:34 AM »
Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on December 02, 2008, 07:03:07 AM


Applause  Applause 
shukriya janasheen ji
bohut acha reply diya hai aapne
kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai umeed hai pasand aaygi aapko

tanha hoon nahi jab saath raat suhani hai
log kehte hain meri aankho mei paani hai

ye to marz apni aisi hai jo jaaygi nahi
warna doston dil mei zakhm ek tufani hai

NIce One Again Bhawna Ji,.

Zakhamon Ka Toofaan, Hum Dil Mein Basaa Kar Bhool Gaye,.
Jo Dil Jalta Hai, Nishaani Deta Hai, Wo Aag Lagaa Kar Bhool Gaye,.

Kya Hua Aaj Mere Kareeb Nahi Mera Saaya Bhi, "Doston",.
Wo Aaaye The Meri Basti Mein, Sab Mitaa Kar Bhool Gaye,.

Hum Unhe Yaad Karte Rahe, Umr Bhar "Bhawna,.
Wo Humse Dil Lagaa Kar Bhool Gaye,.

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«Reply #44 on: December 02, 2008, 09:14:20 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on December 02, 2008, 08:51:32 AM
Jis raat me mera sath nahi woh raat suhani kaise
Jo paththar ho chuki hain un aakho me pani kaise
Yeh agar marz hain to main iski dawa hu pagli
Tere zakhmo pe hoth rakh du apne, bata karu yeh nadani kaise

                             -sg-


Nice Reply Sajid Bhai,.

Jo Khud Ke Dard Na Sambhal Saka, Wo Auron Ke dard Kya Uthaayega,.
Tu Bhi "Dost Ek Din Mujhe, Yunhi Tanhaa Chord Jaayega,.

Ye Zamaana Hai Bewaafai Ka, Bewafaai Ek Fashion Hai,.
Tu Bhi Bol Mera, Saath Kahaan Tak Nibhaayega,.

Kamzor Kardenge, Log Tujhe, Taane Maar Maarke "Sajid",.
Tu Bhi Ek Din, "Azeem, Ko Bhool Jaayega,.

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