kahin zakhm na gehra ho jaaye... Intezar !

by Intezar on October 23, 2010, 07:50:07 PM
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Jab tod hi diya hai mujhe to haath lagaate kya ho
In tukdoN ko zameen se tum ab  uthaate kya ho,

kahiN zakhm na gehra ho jaaye tumhaare dil me
in aashaaron ko apne seene se ab lagaate kya ho,

tumhe to roshni ye bahut hi pasand thi ab kya hua
mitaakar mujhe, in chiraago ko tum ab bujhaate kya ho,

jinhe tum baha na sake mujhe khud se juda karke
phir un aansoon ko is kadar tum ab bahaate kya ho,

mujhe de kar maut, diya tumne sukoon itna bahut
aakar meri kabra par mujhe tum ab bulaate kya ho,

ab usay kya aahat teri in kadmon ki sunaayi de waha
sulaa kar is gehree neend se use tum ab jagaate kya ho

kuch roz jee aaya hai aag ke dariyaa mein bhi “Intezar”
gunaahon ka hisaab dekar use tum ab daraate kya ho… !



                                    Shukriya
                                    Intezar !
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«Reply #1 on: October 24, 2010, 02:49:41 PM »
iss post pe reply isly nahin diya kyunki ispe kuch likh kar hi reply dena tha sirf comment nahin karna th aur kuch ban nahin raha tha..ab bana isly pesh hai ...

Dekar mujhe bewafa ka naam pukara hai tumne
Ab jab hum hain bewafa ,wafa ki umeed karte kya ho

Lahu luhaan hai dil mera tere diye har zakhm se
Ab kyun hai ye jism pareshan ye puchhte kya ho

Karte rahe jab hum intezaar tera din raat betaabi se
Tab gum the tum muflisi me ye aaj mujhe batate kya ho

Ab aaye ho tum jab  main ho chuki kisi aur ki jaaneman
Ab mere dar pe iss tarah pyaar ki duhai de sada lagate kya ho…!!!
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«Reply #2 on: October 24, 2010, 10:11:04 PM »
chhuriyaan chala rahe ho bhai aap.. dil ko itni gehraayi se cheer jaate ho tum apni shayari se ki kya kahun... is tarha chhoo jaate ho dil ko ki dil se behte huye poore sharir me fail jaaye ye dard... bahut bahut khoob likha hai bhai...!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


aur Kasak ji aapki kalam me abhi jang nahi laga hai ye reply padhke bharosa ho gaya. bas thoda sa touch miss ho raha tha kahin. Is reply ne aapka wo touch waapas la diya hai. kuch dino se meri bhi yahi haalat hai. Main apna touch kh chuka hoon. Kuch banta hi nahi aajkal mujhse.
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«Reply #3 on: October 25, 2010, 04:47:05 PM »
is dard ne hi to zinda rakha hai hume abhi tak...
aur kapil bhai bahut bahut shukriya jo is dard ko aapne mehsoos kiya..
aap bhi likhte rehiye... Khush rehiye...

Intezar !

chhuriyaan chala rahe ho bhai aap.. dil ko itni gehraayi se cheer jaate ho tum apni shayari se ki kya kahun... is tarha chhoo jaate ho dil ko ki dil se behte huye poore sharir me fail jaaye ye dard... bahut bahut khoob likha hai bhai...!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


aur Kasak ji aapki kalam me abhi jang nahi laga hai ye reply padhke bharosa ho gaya. bas thoda sa touch miss ho raha tha kahin. Is reply ne aapka wo touch waapas la diya hai. kuch dino se meri bhi yahi haalat hai. Main apna touch kh chuka hoon. Kuch banta hi nahi aajkal mujhse.
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