kaisa ye faasla... Intezar !

by Intezar on April 08, 2012, 01:02:43 PM
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aashiyan banaaya dil me, phir viraaN kar diya
kaisa ye ajab faasla, tumne darmayaaN kar diya

jaane kis adaa se nibhaayi hai tumne rasme ulfat
shahar muhabbat ka jalaakar sab dhuaaN kar diya

muhabbat me karke faisla tark ka mujhse aye jaan
meri saari hasratoN ko tumne raa’egaaN kar diya

sochte the kahin to panaah mil jaayegi aansuo ko
lagaa kar ilzaam, gunaahon ka kaarwaaN kar diya

bade khamosh the kabhi tum mere har sawal par
aaj bin puchhe sab ek khanjar se bayaaN kar diya

aaj fursat mili hai lahad me aakar to sochta hun
kiske Intezar me humne kisko rehnumaaN kar diya…!


Shukriya
Intezar !
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«Reply #1 on: April 08, 2012, 01:05:53 PM »


aashiyan banaaya dil me, phir viraaN kar diya
kaisa ye ajab faasla, tumne darmayaaN kar diya

jaane kis adaa se nibhaayi hai tumne rasme ulfat
shahar muhabbat ka jalaakar sab dhuaaN kar diya

muhabbat me karke faisla tark ka mujhse aye jaan
meri saari hasratoN ko tumne raa’egaaN kar diya

sochte the kahin to panaah mil jaayegi aansuo ko
lagaa kar ilzaam, gunaahon ka kaarwaaN kar diya

bade khamosh the kabhi tum mere har sawal par
aaj bin puchhe sab ek khanjar se bayaaN kar diya

aaj fursat mili hai lahad me aakar to sochta hun
kiske Intezar me humne kisko rehnumaaN kar diya…! icon_scratch icon_scratch


Shukriya
Intezar !

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«Reply #2 on: April 08, 2012, 02:11:18 PM »
bahut khoob intezaarji... Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: April 08, 2012, 02:16:10 PM »
Sitaab Sahaab Aadaab!

Janaab bade lambe arse baad aapne bazm meiN
waapsi ki khairiyat toH hai naa ?

Aapki kalaam behad khoob hai janaab... aapke ahsaas o
khayaaloN meiN pinaaH dard khoob ayaaN huaa hai... Usual Smile

Behad khoob janab behad achchi kalaam rahi yeH...
Sabhi ashaar behad khoob aur umda rahe...

Humari dili daad o mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile
Likhte rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad o aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile









aashiyan banaaya dil me, phir viraaN kar diya
kaisa ye ajab faasla, tumne darmayaaN kar diya

jaane kis adaa se nibhaayi hai tumne rasme ulfat
shahar muhabbat ka jalaakar sab dhuaaN kar diya

muhabbat me karke faisla tark ka mujhse aye jaan
meri saari hasratoN ko tumne raa’egaaN kar diya

sochte the kahin to panaah mil jaayegi aansuo ko
lagaa kar ilzaam, gunaahon ka kaarwaaN kar diya

bade khamosh the kabhi tum mere har sawal par
aaj bin puchhe sab ek khanjar se bayaaN kar diya

aaj fursat mili hai lahad me aakar to sochta hun
kiske Intezar me humne kisko rehnumaaN kar diya…!


Shukriya
Intezar !
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«Reply #4 on: April 08, 2012, 04:57:54 PM »
bahut bahut khoob daad haazir hai janaab
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«Reply #5 on: April 08, 2012, 05:03:12 PM »
bohut khub janab
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«Reply #6 on: April 08, 2012, 06:55:08 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: April 08, 2012, 07:36:07 PM »


aashiyan banaaya dil me, phir viraaN kar diya
kaisa ye ajab faasla, tumne darmayaaN kar diya
koi to majboori hogi.tumne samajhne aur daryaaft karne ki koshish bhi to na ki icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
jaane kis adaa se nibhaayi hai tumne rasme ulfat
shahar muhabbat ka jalaakar sab dhuaaN kar diya
kya ye sirf meri hi khata sehua. zara apne girebaan mein jhaank kar deko . Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Applause Applause Applause Applause
muhabbat me karke faisla tark ka mujhse aye jaan
meri saari hasratoN ko tumne raa’egaaN kar diya
hasrat meri bhi to thi. per kahaan tumne unka dhyaan rakha.equal respect aur concern ki main bhi haqdaar hoon ji Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
sochte the kahin to panaah mil jaayegi aansuo ko
lagaa kar ilzaam, gunaahon ka kaarwaaN kar diya
dekho ji, mujh pe ye tohmat mat hi lagaao. khud chalna aataa nahin aur raaste ko badnaam karte ho. icon_scratch icon_scratch Applause Applause Applause
bade khamosh the kabhi tum mere har sawal par
aaj bin puchhe sab ek khanjar se bayaaN kar diya
tumhaari shakki mizaaj se main to pareshaan ho chuki hoon. isi liye aisa hua sad10 sad10 Applause Applause Applause Applause
aaj fursat mili hai lahad me aakar to sochta hun
kiske Intezar me humne kisko rehnumaaN kar diya…!
kisi ke intezaar mein hamne nazar ko pareshaan kar diya..! Applause Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya
Intezar !

nice intezar...........!
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«Reply #8 on: April 09, 2012, 10:08:43 AM »
bahut khoob.....achi peshkash....
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Intezar
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«Reply #9 on: April 10, 2012, 12:11:42 PM »
Shukriya Qalb ji aur theyash ji aapne pasand kiya bahut bahut shukriya !

Intezar !
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«Reply #10 on: April 10, 2012, 12:13:23 PM »
Sksaini ji, saahill ji aur atish ji aapka shukriya bahut bahut shukriya aap sabhi ne pasand kiya meri koshish ko... !

Intezar !
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«Reply #11 on: April 10, 2012, 12:15:39 PM »
aadaab parwaaz sahab
hum bilkul khairiyat se hain aur yahi dua karte hai ki aap bhi khush honge...
hamari koshish ko pasand farmaya aapne bahut bahut shukriya... aur aap to ab milte hi nahi kya bataayen... bas isi tarah saath dete rahiye yahi chahte hain... apna khayal rakhiyega..

Intezar !
Sitaab Sahaab Aadaab!

Janaab bade lambe arse baad aapne bazm meiN
waapsi ki khairiyat toH hai naa ?

Aapki kalaam behad khoob hai janaab... aapke ahsaas o
khayaaloN meiN pinaaH dard khoob ayaaN huaa hai... Usual Smile

Behad khoob janab behad achchi kalaam rahi yeH...
Sabhi ashaar behad khoob aur umda rahe...

Humari dili daad o mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile
Likhte rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad o aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile







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«Reply #12 on: April 10, 2012, 12:19:44 PM »
Sheba ji Shukriya for your nice reply aur bahut bahut shukriya aapne pasand kiya aur khubsurat jawab diya... bas yuhi saath rahiyega... apna khayal rakhiyega... !

Intezar !

nice intezar...........!
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«Reply #13 on: April 10, 2012, 12:32:36 PM »
Intezar Ji beautiful Poetic Expressions..

Bahuttttttt bahuttttt Khooob!!!

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«Reply #14 on: April 11, 2012, 10:30:57 AM »
aadaab parwaaz sahab
hum bilkul khairiyat se hain aur yahi dua karte hai ki aap bhi khush honge...
hamari koshish ko pasand farmaya aapne bahut bahut shukriya... aur aap to ab milte hi nahi kya bataayen... bas isi tarah saath dete rahiye yahi chahte hain... apna khayal rakhiyega..

Intezar !

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