Kaise Chupta Woh Zakhm Jo Dil Se Kabhi Mita Naa Tha....

by khwaish on April 12, 2009, 06:50:00 AM
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«Reply #15 on: April 24, 2009, 03:41:28 PM »
Quote from: Tanha(Saurabh) on April 16, 2009, 03:03:42 PM
bohat khoob khwaish ji, bohat pyaara.
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thankyou so much saurabhji..
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«Reply #16 on: April 24, 2009, 03:48:34 PM »
Quote from: poppoetry on April 16, 2009, 03:54:45 PM
bahut khub khwaish ji....

          Tere lafjo ne dil ko aisa chua h
          K pal me hi sb khuch gamgin hua h
          Anayas hi aankho se barasne lge aansu
          Jaise koi gehra zakhm phr se taja hua h

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Poppoetry ji..Izzat-afsaai ke liye teh dil se shukar guzaar hoon aapka..

aur bahut bahut khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #17 on: April 25, 2009, 03:43:25 AM »
Khawish Ji.. Lajawab Likha Hai aapne.. Dard Ko Bakhoobi Bayaan Kiya Hai aapne.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooooooooob.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #18 on: April 25, 2009, 04:03:37 AM »
bahut hi khoob khwaish ji..it was so touching... Applause
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«Reply #19 on: May 06, 2009, 04:07:01 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on April 22, 2009, 05:17:12 AM
wah wah wah kaya baat hai Khwaish ji....

Nice lines Angels and Poppoetry

Thankyou Sooo Much Pooja...
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«Reply #20 on: May 06, 2009, 04:09:16 PM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 22, 2009, 06:19:59 AM
U are welcome Khwaish.....as i have always said u have a very different way of expressing your thoughts its always intresting to read you.

Thankyou so much once again for your kind words..
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«Reply #21 on: May 06, 2009, 04:11:41 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on April 12, 2009, 06:50:00 AM
Door Tak Mujhe Kisi Manzil Ka Pata Naa Tha,
Main Jis Taraf Chal Pada,Waha Raasta Naa Tha....

Mere Kadmon Ke Nishaan Ko Dhoondhte Rahe Woh Rehguzar!!
Unhe Kya Pata,Mere Ashko Ke Siva Uss Zameen Par,
 Kuch Aur Bikhra Naa Tha....

Tanhaiyon Mein Rone Walo Ko Kabhi Naa Puchna Uske Dard-o-Gham Ki Dastaan!!
Sharik Uske Gham Mein Kabhi Uske Ilaava Koi Naa Tha....

Hairaan Hoon Main Iss Baat par Ke Usse Mere Jazbaaton Ka Kuch Pata Nahi!!
JabKi Inn Aankhon Mein Ashko Ke Siva Kuch Bhi Naa Tha...

Loota Deta "Khwaish" Khud Ko Tere Har Ek Muskaan Ke Piche,
Par Zindagi Ke Kisi Bazaar Mein Khushiyon Ko Koi Khareed Nahi Sakta!!!!
Iss Baat Ka "Khwaish" Ko Kuch Pata Naa Tha....

Taaujub Hai Mujhe,Mere Lakh Koshisho Ke baad Bhi,
Usne Mere Dard Ko Pehchaan Liya!!!

Kaise Chupta Woh Zakhm "Khwaish",
Jo tere Dil Se Kabhi Mita Naa Tha....

Phir Bhi Bahut Ehsaan-Mand Hoon Main Tera, Eh Mere Dil-o-Jaan,
Tere Aane Se Zindagi Mein Mere Nayi Bahaarein Aayi Hai!!!
Varna Bin Tere,Ek Patta Bhi Yahan Se Wahan Hila Na Thaa....

                   ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

Sorry Dost ye khoobsurat peshkash main dekh nahin paayi pehle........Bohot hi khoob...Bohot hi khoobsurat...Humesha ki tarah dil main utar jaane waali !
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«Reply #22 on: May 06, 2009, 04:20:38 PM »
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Mere Kadmon Ke Nishaan Ko Dhoondhte Rahe Woh Rehguzar!!
Unhe Kya Pata,Mere Ashko Ke Siva Uss Zameen Par,
 Kuch Aur Bikhra Naa Tha....

Tanhaiyon Mein Rone Walo Ko Kabhi Naa Puchna Uske Dard-o-Gham Ki Dastaan!!
Sharik Uske Gham Mein Kabhi Uske Ilaava Koi Naa Tha....

Bahut khoob likha hai aapne Bhaiya.. Daad hazir hai
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«Reply #23 on: May 06, 2009, 04:55:52 PM »
Quote from: Azeem on April 22, 2009, 01:53:45 PM
Bohat Achche, Kamaal Ka Likha Hai K:hwaish Bhai, Yunhi Likhte rahiye,.
Hume Seekhne Ka Maukha Milega,.



Bahut Bahut Shukriya Azeem..Aapne Hamesha se Mujhe Himmat Bakshi hai..tahnkyou so much..
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«Reply #24 on: May 06, 2009, 07:08:44 PM »
Quote from: Mann on April 25, 2009, 03:43:25 AM
Khawish Ji.. Lajawab Likha Hai aapne.. Dard Ko Bakhoobi Bayaan Kiya Hai aapne.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooooooooob.. Applause Applause


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Bahut Bahut Shukriya Mannji... Usual Smile
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«Reply #25 on: May 06, 2009, 07:17:34 PM »
Quote from: fairy2633 on April 25, 2009, 04:03:37 AM
bahut hi khoob khwaish ji..it was so touching... Applause

Thankyou Soooo  Much Fairy!!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #26 on: May 06, 2009, 07:22:12 PM »
Very Nice Khwaishji  Applause Applause Applause
Dil ko Chu liya
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«Reply #27 on: May 08, 2009, 06:31:26 PM »
Quote from: Celmira on May 06, 2009, 04:11:41 PM
Sorry Dost ye khoobsurat peshkash main dekh nahin paayi pehle........Bohot hi khoob...Bohot hi khoobsurat...Humesha ki tarah dil main utar jaane waali !

Sorry Kis Baat Ka!!! Aapki Nazar Padhi Iss Kalm Par Humare Liye Yehi Bahut hai Dost!!!

Teh Dil Se Shukriya Aapka.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #28 on: May 08, 2009, 06:33:03 PM »
Quote from: Roja on May 06, 2009, 04:20:38 PM
Bahut khoob likha hai aapne Bhaiya.. Daad hazir hai

Thankyou Soooo Much behna!!! icon_salut Usual Smile
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«Reply #29 on: May 08, 2009, 06:36:13 PM »
Quote from: @kaash on May 06, 2009, 04:27:16 PM
Bahot hi acha kalaam Khwaish Ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley i read u often n i think abhi tak maine jitne padhe i rate it in top five...jazbaaton pe behad gahri pakad hai aapki..bahot acha likha hai aapne..

Izzat-Afsaai Ke Liye Bahut Bahut Shukriya Kaashji..

Aapne Iss Kalam Ko Itni Izzat Bakhsi..Teh Dil Se Main Shukarguzaar Hoon Aapka..
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