~~"KAISE FAKIROON WALA HAAL HUA"~~

by k.shael on April 06, 2009, 10:06:21 AM
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Sun ke uski madmast bhari baatoon ko dil mar mitne ko
Tayaar hua, maine uske deewanepan me har pal bitaya aur
Wo ta-umar ke liye kisi aur ka shingaar hua.

Nazar-e-yaar itni katil thi ki dil saans ke hote hue bhi dil
bejaar Hua, kadmo ko rokne ki koshish bahut ki par har koshish
pe khud hi mein nakam hua,

Jaakar beth gaye uske darr pe iss tarah ki wo khud bhi dekh ke
Hairaan hua, Hasta hai aur kehta hai janaab kaise ye aapka
Fakiro wala haal hua,

Do mulaqatein bhi na ki unse aur kehta hai dil beshumaar pyaar
Hua, koi batlaye to zara naadan-e-dil ko ki ishq me tera bhi
Deewano jaisa haal hua,
 
uske ki beruqi ne bhi kya jadoo kiya hai "Shally"
kal tak jise zindagi ki hasrath thi aaj maut ka talabgaar hua !!

Shally.
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #1 on: April 06, 2009, 10:09:17 AM »
Wah wah kya baat hai shally
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #2 on: April 06, 2009, 10:13:50 AM »
Nice Work Shally...
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k.shael
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«Reply #3 on: April 06, 2009, 10:29:20 AM »
Wah wah kya baat hai shally

Shukriya Sophi Dear,

Shally.
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k.shael
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«Reply #4 on: April 06, 2009, 10:29:51 AM »
Nice Work Shally...

Shukriya Sajid Ji,

Shally.
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Muhammed
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«Reply #5 on: April 06, 2009, 10:50:56 AM »
Sun ke uski madmast bhari baatoon ko dil mar mitne ko
Tayaar hua, maine uske deewanepan me har pal bitaya aur
Wo ta-umar ke liye kisi aur ka shingaar hua.

Nazar-e-yaar itni katil thi ki dil saans ke hote hue bhi dil
bejaar Hua, kadmo ko rokne ki koshish bahut ki par har koshish
pe khud hi mein nakam hua,

Jaakar beth gaye uske darr pe iss tarah ki wo khud bhi dekh ke
Hairaan hua, Hasta hai aur kehta hai janaab kaise ye aapka
Fakiro wala haal hua,

Do mulaqatein bhi na ki unse aur kehta hai dil beshumaar pyaar
Hua, koi batlaye to zara naadan-e-dil ko ki ishq me tera bhi
Deewano jaisa haal hua,
 
Zikar-e-mohabbat karma bura to nahi par kiya jo hamne to
zara-zara parehshaan hua, hamne mohabbat ki bhi to iss shidatt
se ki lamha-lamha karjdaar hua.

Shally.


Bass,,Oye Shally Tu Likhti Jaa,,Main Taarif karta Chalun...
Kamaal Ismein Yeh Hai ki Jo Lafzon ko Tarteeb diya Hai,,waqaee bahot hi Mushqeel Kaam hota Hai Taweel Nazm ko Likhne Me..Lekin Asaan Hota Hai ik Saahib e Fann k Liye...Bahot badhiya..khoob

Waise Urdu to Mujhse Kafi achi aati Hai Tumhe
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #6 on: April 06, 2009, 10:53:16 AM »
Bahut Khoob Shally Ji
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diya786
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«Reply #7 on: April 06, 2009, 11:46:37 AM »
really nice post Shally dear
bahut accha likha hai aapne Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Tere ishq mein yehi mera haal hai
ajeeb bechaini ka dil mein shor hua
tumko yaad dila sakoon apni
aisi nakaam si koshish ka bhi zor hua
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dead heart
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«Reply #8 on: April 06, 2009, 09:22:31 PM »
Applause Applause Bahaut khoob Shally jee..
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«Reply #9 on: April 08, 2009, 08:10:35 AM »
Bohart Achche Shally Behan,.
And Nice One,.
Kashish JI,.
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