kaise mile saahil mujhe... Intezar !

by Intezar on October 20, 2010, 07:58:28 PM
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Tohfa-e-gham use main kya deta yaar
meri hasti khud hi jo mita kar chala gaya,

Hai ab bhi khwaab baaki adhura sa hi sahi
Jaane  kaisa wo khwaab dikha kar chala gaya,

Kaise mile saahil mujhe, ab to raha nahin wo dariya bhi
Beech majdhar mein jiski wo kashti dooba kar chala gaya,

Tha haunsla bahut  mujhe meri bebasi se nikalne ka
Koshish to ki lekin har baar wo rulaa kar chala gaya,

Main to uski wajah se jindagi bhar rota raha is tarah
jaane use kya dard tha jo aaj wo aansu baha kar chala gaya

Kaash k juda hote dekh paate usay ek baar kareeb se hum
wo aaya bhi to bas chehre se kafan hata kar chala gaya,

Kya jaane uske dil mein kya aaya hoga mujhe dekh kar
Laut kar aaya aur bas Intezar ko dafna kar chala gaya… !

                                       Shukriya
                                       Intezar !
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«Reply #1 on: October 20, 2010, 08:22:54 PM »
Wah bahut khoob Intezar ji,mujhe bahut pasand aayi aapke kavita.heart touching creation.great work.excellent,hats off icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: October 20, 2010, 08:35:40 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya madhuwesh ji... koshish kiye jaa raha hun bas aap log ki duaayein hain... waise aapne comment ek baar shuru mein diya tha aur ek aaj... bahut bahut shukriya har baar ke liye.. !

Shukriya
Intezar !
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«Reply #3 on: October 23, 2010, 09:53:02 AM »
bhai jawaab nahi aapki lekhni ke... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne... too good brother...!!!
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«Reply #4 on: October 23, 2010, 01:42:33 PM »
Shukriya kapil bhai... bahut bahut shukriya !

Intezar !
bhai jawaab nahi aapki lekhni ke... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne... too good brother...!!!
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