Kaise Shab Guzree

by Alam Qazi on April 05, 2012, 07:22:47 PM
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Kuch Uske Jamaal Ka Charchaa Sar-E-Mehfil Rahaa
Kuch Meri Bewafai Ka Mauzu Bhi Uth_ta Rahaa

Gardish-E-Ishk Mat Puch.... Kaisey Shab Guzree
Kabhi Wo Ruswaa Tou Kabhi Alam Badnaam Rahaa



____Alam



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«Reply #1 on: April 05, 2012, 07:28:58 PM »

Kuch Uske Jamaal Ka Charchaa Sar-E-Mehfil Rahaa
Kuch Meri Bewafai Ka Mauzu Bhi Uth_ta Rahaa

Gardish-E-Ishk Mat Puch.... Kaisey Shab Guzree
Kabhi Wo Ruswaa Tou Kabhi Alam Badnaam Rahaa



____Alam





alam sahab , adaab ..janaab mujhe aap se shikayat hai. kya khoob likhte ho phir moqammal ghazal likhne se parhez kyon hai aap ko.
               kisi se koi aisa wada kiya hua hai ki ghazal nahin likho ge.
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«Reply #2 on: April 05, 2012, 07:37:45 PM »
Applause Applause Applause bahut bahut khoob Alam ji...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: April 05, 2012, 07:47:02 PM »
alam sahab , adaab ..janaab mujhe aap se shikayat hai. kya khoob likhte ho phir moqammal ghazal likhne se parhez kyon hai aap ko.
               kisi se koi aisa wada kiya hua hai ki ghazal nahin likho ge.


sabse pehle !!! shukriya ki aapne hamara likha pasand farmaya.... aur rahi dusri waade ki baat tou janaab aisa koi waada nahi kiya hai ki hum sher ko mukammal ghazal ka pehnaawa nahi pehnaenge....

bassss... aap logoN se dheere dheere seekh kar likhne ki koshish kar raha hoon mai... inshallah zindagi aur aap logoN ka saath raha tou zaroor mukammal ghazal bhi pesh hogi....

always yours
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«Reply #4 on: April 06, 2012, 02:59:27 AM »

Kuch Uske Jamaal Ka Charchaa Sar-E-Mehfil Rahaa
Kuch Meri Bewafai Ka Mauzu Bhi Uth_ta Rahaa

Gardish-E-Ishk Mat Puch.... Kaisey Shab Guzree
Kabhi Wo Ruswaa Tou Kabhi Alam Badnaam Rahaa



____Alam




waaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaah
bhut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: April 06, 2012, 03:08:51 AM »
boht khub janab daad kabool karein
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«Reply #6 on: April 06, 2012, 06:21:22 AM »
waaaah bahut khooooob.....
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«Reply #7 on: April 06, 2012, 07:26:48 AM »

Kuch Uske Jamaal Ka Charchaa Sar-E-Mehfil Rahaa
Kuch Meri Bewafai Ka Mauzu Bhi Uth_ta Rahaa

Gardish-E-Ishk Mat Puch.... Kaisey Shab Guzree
Kabhi Wo Ruswaa Tou Kabhi Alam Badnaam Rahaa



____Alam




Bahut khoooooooooooooooooob Alam ji
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«Reply #8 on: April 06, 2012, 12:58:44 PM »
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