'kaise tujhko bhula du.n"

by aaina on June 09, 2009, 11:57:24 AM
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is section se bhut kam aashna hu.n, lakin kabhi kabhi dil yaa hallat wabstagi badhane ko majboor kar daite hain...ek choti si koshish pasnd aaye to duwaao.n se nawaaziyega, shukriya




Kaise tujhko bhula du.n bata de zara
Apni hasti mita du.n? bata de zara

Meine tujhko duwao.n mai nahi manga tha
Us ka tohfa lota du.n? bata de zara

Teri saanso se wabasta hain sanse meri
Inko sooli chdha du.n? bata de zara

Ye adhoore se khabo.n ki parchaaiyaa.n
Inse daamn Chura lu.n? bata de zara

Mein tujhko talatum mai lai aaya hu.n
Ab ye kashti duba du.n? bata de zara
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«Reply #1 on: June 09, 2009, 12:50:54 PM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohot hi khoob Aslam Ji....Bohot dard hai aap ki is ghazal main......Bohot pasand aayi....Khuda aap ko khush rakhe........yunhi likhte rahiyega..!!
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«Reply #2 on: June 09, 2009, 01:12:19 PM »
kya baat h Aaina ji.......bahut bdhiya.......har laf
j me dard Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: June 09, 2009, 04:25:19 PM »
Bahut hi dard hai aapki ye chhoti si koshish mein Usual Smile

Allah aapko khush rakhein hamesha.

Too good Applause
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«Reply #4 on: June 09, 2009, 04:27:21 PM »
Bahut Khoob Aslam Ji..

Bahut Acha Likhte Hai Aap Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: June 09, 2009, 04:30:49 PM »
Waah Waah. bahoot bahoot khoob Aslam ji.. keep writing.......Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: June 09, 2009, 05:21:02 PM »
Bahut khoob Aaina Ji
Achchha hua ki dard ne chauka diye mujhe
kuchh neend aa chali thi shab-e-intazar me
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #7 on: June 09, 2009, 08:51:51 PM »
Quote from: aaina on June 09, 2009, 11:57:24 AM
is section se bhut kam aashna hu.n, lakin kabhi kabhi dil yaa hallat wabstagi badhane ko majboor kar daite hain...ek choti si koshish pasnd aaye to duwaao.n se nawaaziyega, shukriya

Kaise tujhko bhula du.n bata de zara
Apni hasti mita du.n? bata de zara

Meine tujhko duwao.n mai nahi manga tha
Us ka tohfa lota du.n? bata de zara

Teri saanso se wabasta hain sanse meri
Inko sooli chdha du.n? bata de zara

Ye adhoore se khabo.n ki parchaaiyaa.n
Inse daamn Chura lu.n? bata de zara

Mein tujhko talatum mai lai aaya hu.n
Ab ye kashti duba du.n? bata de zara



Aslam Ji, aap bohot achcha likhte hain...aap ke saamne kuch likhne ki himmat nahin hoti...par aap ki iss ghazal ne kuch likhne ko majboor kar diya.....aap ke har sher ko nazar main rakhte hue jawab likhne ki koshish ki hai.....!!

Bhoolne Ke Siwa Raasta Aur Kya
Dil Dukhaane Ka Ab Faaida Aur Kya

Ye Milna Humara Tumhara Sanam
Kahen Ge Ise Haadsa Aur Kya

Rasta Bhi Nahin, Koi Manzil Nahin
Badhega Phir Ab Silsila Aur Kya

Khwaab To Khwaab Hain, Haqeeqat Nahin
Jagah Inki Band Aankhon Ke Siwa Aur Kya

Dubo De Ye Kashti, Mere Na-Khuda
Karun Ab Main Tujhse Gila Aur Kya !
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«Reply #8 on: June 09, 2009, 11:02:31 PM »
Wah wah Aslam ji,very very nice and touching.
Bahut acha likha aapne. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: June 10, 2009, 08:05:22 AM »
Subham_allah Aslam jitni tareef ki jaye kam hain aur Talat ke jawab ne aur bhi sama bandh diya.  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: June 10, 2009, 08:07:53 AM »
Quote from: aaina on June 09, 2009, 11:57:24 AM
is section se bhut kam aashna hu.n, lakin kabhi kabhi dil yaa hallat wabstagi badhane ko majboor kar daite hain...ek choti si koshish pasnd aaye to duwaao.n se nawaaziyega, shukriya




Kaise tujhko bhula du.n bata de zara
Apni hasti mita du.n? bata de zara

Meine tujhko duwao.n mai nahi manga tha
Us ka tohfa lota du.n? bata de zara

Teri saanso se wabasta hain sanse meri
Inko sooli chdha du.n? bata de zara

Ye adhoore se khabo.n ki parchaaiyaa.n
Inse daamn Chura lu.n? bata de zara

Mein tujhko talatum mai lai aaya hu.n
Ab ye kashti duba du.n? bata de zara

Bahut bahut khoob Aslam ji  Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: June 10, 2009, 08:09:06 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on June 09, 2009, 08:51:51 PM

Aslam Ji, aap bohot achcha likhte hain...aap ke saamne kuch likhne ki himmat nahin hoti...par aap ki iss ghazal ne kuch likhne ko majboor kar diya.....aap ke har sher ko nazar main rakhte hue jawab likhne ki koshish ki hai.....!!

Bhoolne Ke Siwa Raasta Aur Kya
Dil Dukhaane Ka Ab Faaida Aur Kya

Ye Milna Humara Tumhara Sanam
Kahen Ge Ise Haadsa Aur Kya

Rasta Bhi Nahin, Koi Manzil Nahin
Badhega Phir Ab Silsila Aur Kya

Khwaab To Khwaab Hain, Haqeeqat Nahin
Jagah Inki Band Aankhon Ke Siwa Aur Kya

Dubo De Ye Kashti, Mere Na-Khuda
Karun Ab Main Tujhse Gila Aur Kya !

Wah wah Talat sis equally Nice reply  Applause
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«Reply #12 on: June 10, 2009, 08:11:25 AM »
Waah, Bohat Achcha Likha Hai Aapne Aslam Bhai, Bohat Achche,.

And Nice One Talat Sis, Achcha Jawaab Diya Hai.,
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«Reply #13 on: June 10, 2009, 10:50:00 AM »
Bahut umda likha hai Aslam Bhai Applause Applause Applause
very nice...

aur Talat ji aapne bhi kamaal likha hai....
 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: June 12, 2009, 07:59:01 AM »
Quote from: poppoetry on June 09, 2009, 01:12:19 PM
kya baat h Aaina ji.......bahut bdhiya.......har laf
j me dard Applause Applause Applause

thnxxxxx so much poppoetry
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