kal dasht e talb kay kaasay main

by faiiz_76 on January 27, 2008, 01:44:49 PM
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kal dasht e talb kay kasay main ,daali jo roop ki bheek miyaan
iss wehshi ko to lagay hai yeh man sagar tu seep miyaan

aye kash juda ho jayin hum ,aika aisa  bhi theek nahin
iss saz e alam kay dohay ka hoon main mukhra tu teep miyaan

kuch ferq to hay go kuch bhi nahin ,tu jism main teri heek bana
per waqt kay kachay dhagay ka main aam sa saal tu leap miyaan

go haar gaya per kiya hara ,tu jeeta meri jeet hui
hoon ishq kay sachay sukhnoon ka main ik misra tu geet miyaan

lahasl duayin mangay hai yeh jazb e junoon aur peet meri
keh aik hi khak kay qalib main ,main man hoon aur tu meet miyaan

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faiiz_76
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«Reply #1 on: January 27, 2008, 01:54:19 PM »
dasht e talb ..jaisay pehlay bataya tha a desert of desire

doha .. folk music main ik sher kay do hissay hotay hain .mukhra be matlab be manni yani keh meaningless hota hai laiken teep main sara matlab sab meanings hotay hain .yani aisa sher jiska pehla misra meaningless ho aur doosre main aray jahan ke matlab aur meaning hon.
jism aur heek..her jism ki aik khas khushbu hoti hai .ussay heek kehtay hain
jazb e junoon ...ishq ka akhri merhala
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mehhekkk
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«Reply #2 on: January 27, 2008, 02:50:28 PM »
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