kal raat

by ranjana on May 10, 2006, 02:26:59 AM
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«Reply #1 on: May 10, 2006, 04:45:06 AM »
good Ranju.......


Sapne ko kaya hai aate hai chale jaate hai.
hum yatharth ki bhumi pe man mos khade rehte hai
sapnil sapne suhane sapne kisi ki parchayee liye
man mai ajeeb se gudgudi kabhi ajeeb se bechani jaga jaate hai......
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hi
«Reply #2 on: May 10, 2006, 06:17:54 AM »
hi ranju ji ap ki poetry din b din nikharati jaa rahi hai, kya baat hai,  koi jaaadui kalam hath mai to nahi aa gaya na, hai.
bahut khoob likha hai.

ye do lines to ghazab hai
subah hote hi ek kahwab ki treah bikhar gaya thaa tu....
aur apne tute hue dil ke jhakmo ko fir si liya thaa maine!!!

aise hi likhte rahiye
regards
manu
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ranjana
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«Reply #3 on: May 10, 2006, 06:59:29 AM »
shukriya manu ...........aapko mera likha hua pasand aane laga ....... Usual Smile
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ranjana
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«Reply #4 on: May 10, 2006, 07:04:59 AM »
Quote from: "vikas2210"
good Ranju.......


Sapne ko kaya hai aate hai chale jaate hai.
hum yatharth ki bhumi pe man mos khade rehte hai
sapnil sapne suhane sapne kisi ki parchayee liye
man mai ajeeb se gudgudi kabhi ajeeb se bechani jaga jaate hai......


shukriya vikas aur bahut khub likha aapne.........

sapne bhi samaye ki tarah beet jaate hain.....
par tujse jude hue sapne ham bhul nahi paate hain.
din main khuli aakkho mein bhi yahi sapne ........
tere pass hone ka ehasas kaarte hain...........
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #5 on: May 10, 2006, 01:21:55 PM »
bahut khoob ranju
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #6 on: May 10, 2006, 01:25:55 PM »
kal rat aur khwab aur tum main kya likhun..
likhne ki nahi baat tum kaho ki kya likhun...
tumne kaha tha jo mujhe kya sab se main kahun?
maine suna tha jo vo kaho kaise bol dun?
 kal raat aur khwab aur tum main kya likhun...
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ranjana
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«Reply #7 on: May 10, 2006, 02:50:41 PM »
Quote from: "tabassum shakeel"
kal rat aur khwab aur tum main kya likhun..
likhne ki nahi baat tum kaho ki kya likhun...
tumne kaha tha jo mujhe kya sab se main kahun?
maine suna tha jo vo kaho kaise bol dun?
 kal raat aur khwab aur tum main kya likhun...


bahut khub tabassum ji............shukriya .........

kal raat ka nasha aaankho mein hai ...
kal raat ka fasana meri baato mein hai....
kal raat jo beeta woh kaya batau main  tujhe .....
kyuki kal raat ka afasana bas khwabo  mein hai...........
aur khawabo ka sa sach hona sirf kitaabo mein hai..........
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #8 on: May 11, 2006, 06:23:43 AM »
bahut khoob ranju
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ranjana
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«Reply #9 on: May 13, 2006, 02:05:12 AM »
shukriya tabassum.................. Usual Smile
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