Kami hain tumhari...

by Ravi_Dave on March 08, 2007, 08:45:03 PM
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Kami hain tumhari, hum haal kisse bayaan kare,
tanhai ki ab baatein, kaise bataaya kare,

Khamosh yeh raat, behosh yeh jahaan,
muntazir yeh aankhein, kis se milaaya kare,

Mehak rahi hain hawa, badalta yeh samaan,
tere yaad mein kitni raatein, hum aansoon bahaaya kare,

Teri khushboo yahaan, tu magar hain kahaan,
dil mein choopi yaadein, kaise dohraaya kare,

Umeed hain ungeenat, rooh mein basey kahin armaan,
nahi hoti mulaqaatein, kaise yeh boojti shamaa hum jalaaya kare (2)!
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Sahiba Zehra
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«Reply #1 on: August 02, 2007, 01:38:35 PM »
wah wha ravi ji
kitna acha likha hai apne
mujhe nahi samajh aya ki kaise ise undekha kiya gaya.
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Shikha12
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«Reply #2 on: August 02, 2007, 02:51:29 PM »
Quote from: "Sahiba Zehra"
wah wha ravi ji
kitna acha likha hai apne
mujhe nahi samajh aya ki kaise ise undekha kiya gaya.


Haan.. Mujhe bhi Samajh nahin aaya ki isey kaise undekha kiya gaya.... Puzzled !

Quote from: "Ravi_Dave"

Kami hain tumhari, hum haal kisse bayaan kare,
tanhai ki ab baatein, kaise bataaya kare,

Khamosh yeh raat, behosh yeh jahaan,
muntazir yeh aankhein, kis se milaaya kare,

Mehak rahi hain hawa, badalta yeh samaan,
tere yaad mein kitni raatein, hum aansoon bahaaya kare,

Teri khushboo yahaan, tu magar hain kahaan,
dil mein choopi yaadein, kaise dohraaya kare,

Umeed hain ungeenat, rooh mein basey kahin armaan,
nahi hoti mulaqaatein, kaise yeh boojti shamaa hum jalaaya kare (2)!


Its Really Very Beautiful.. Very Touching Lines..  Ravi =D>
Keep Writing...
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Talat
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«Reply #3 on: August 02, 2007, 03:07:19 PM »
Very nice Ravi....bohot din baad aap ka likha parha.....as before just written beautiful !!

Kami hai teri, magar ab koi intezaar nahin
Ankhon main wo pehla sa khumaar nahin

Zindagi ne karwatain li hain kuch is tarah
Chubhan hai magar ye dil beqarar nahin !!
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Shikha12
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«Reply #4 on: August 02, 2007, 03:14:10 PM »
Good One Talat... Really Nice...


Here's From My Side...


Kami hai Tumhaari, Hai Mujhko Ab Tak Intezaar Bhi,
Ajnabi si hai Khushian, Aur Ajnabi se hai Halaat Bhi...

Main phir se badhna chahti hoon Tere Zaanib Sanam,
Aankhon mein hai Nami, Aur Bikhre hai Zazbaat Bhi...

Hai Gum mein doobe hue, Hai Ashko ki bharmaar bhi,
Khauff hai Duniya ka, Aur Khwaaish-e-Mulakaat Bhi...
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: August 02, 2007, 03:25:16 PM »
Thanks Shikha....That was a good one.....!!

Ankhon main ab nami nahin, behti theen kabhi har pal,
Nayi ravish pe hai zindagi, bhula rahi hoon beeta kal,

Ashkon ne mere beh kar dhundla diya hai yaadon ko,
Mita rahi hoon chupchaap, bache hain abhi jo naqsh dil par !!
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Aryaan
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«Reply #6 on: August 02, 2007, 03:45:31 PM »
Very Nice Ravi, Shikha & Talat...
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Talat
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«Reply #7 on: August 02, 2007, 04:05:07 PM »
Thanks a lot Aryaan Usual Smile
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Ravi_Dave
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«Reply #8 on: September 17, 2007, 12:56:01 PM »
Shukriya Zehra, Shikha, Talat, Aryaan

Bohat accha laga ke aap sabne pada aur umeed hain age se bhi aap mera kalaam padte rahenge...

Kya khoob likha hain Talat Aur Shikha...Bohat Khoob!
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Talat
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«Reply #9 on: September 17, 2007, 12:57:13 PM »
Thanks Ravi..Its nice to see you after a long time Usual Smile
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