- Kanch Ki Duniya -

by Meena on July 13, 2005, 05:21:20 PM

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Meena

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«Reply #15 on: July 15, 2005, 05:01:09 PM »

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wah meena,bohat dard bhara,bohat khoob likha hai.

thank u nidhi!!! where have u been? Huh?


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«Reply #16 on: July 18, 2005, 12:44:19 PM »

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waah waah .. bhoot khoob likha hai Meena ji !!!
shukriya ji shukriya!!!

mere shayari pe wah wah karne wale zara rukho tum,
hal-e-dil bayan karne ke liye likhni abhi kitab baki hai!!

acha ji .. likh ke SMS ker dijiyega .. mein pad lunga
filhal yeh padiye !!

yeh kya ke abhi to aaye ho aur abhi kehte ho "alwida, chalti hoon"
zra rukho sitamgar abhi karna peechli mulakaat ka hisaab baqi hai !!


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«Reply #17 on: July 18, 2005, 01:02:14 PM »

Quote from: "Meena"

Some feelings.....

Kanch ki hoti hai sapno ki duniya, jo pal bar me toot jati hai,
Jab kadam rakh hi liya is raha me aab, to aab gabrane se kya?

Koshish agar karoge, sheeshe me haqiqat ke rang dhalne ki,
Toot kar chubne lagega ankhon me sapna, phir ashk bahane se kya?

Dil pe jo chot lagegi to koon-e-arman bahega,
Bhar na sakhe jo zakhm unpe marham lagane se kya?

Phenk de in tukdon ko “Meena”, jo bikre hai tere daman me aab,
Toote kanch ki is dhul ko aab seene se lagane se kye?

bahut achha Meena sis.......................quite meaningful........


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«Reply #18 on: July 18, 2005, 01:52:56 PM »

Quote from: "Meena"

Meena di......... Bohat KhuuB........

dil ko chhu gaye yeh shair aapke


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- Kanch Ki Duniya -

«Reply #19 on: July 18, 2005, 03:54:01 PM »

lol humtum ji.... kaho to puri kitab na bej doon? :lol:

dolly and saba saba ji.....shukriya ji meri poem ko padne ka aur pasand karne ka!!!!!!

:D


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«Reply #20 on: July 28, 2005, 12:02:44 PM »

Meena ji .. abhi tak aap ki kitab nhi mili !!!!

nazrien bichaye batihey rehtey hai apne latter box pe
kyun ki aane ko Meena ji ki dard pe likhi kitaab baqi hai
jane kuan se pal aa jaye dakiya le ke uss kitab ko
thodi der aur intzaar ker "HumTum" abhi to sari raat baqi hai !!!


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Meena

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«Reply #21 on: July 28, 2005, 04:29:34 PM »

lollllllll acha u still waiting :lol:

kya karoge pad ke us kitab ko,
jiske har panne pe sab shabd hi dhule ho,
mat kar intezaar bahar ka "humtum",
jiske chaman me na kabhi koi phool khile ho!


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- Kanch Ki Duniya -

«Reply #22 on: July 28, 2005, 04:34:16 PM »

lo ji .. husn wale tera jawab nhi !!! ab itni wait karwa ke keh rhey ho ke kya krogey kitaab ko padh ke !!! badey hi zarf ki baat hai Meena ji ... yun to na theinga ( thumb) dikha ke jaiye !!!

muntzir hai hum aap ki kitab padne ko
aap ke sher har gazal ke nazar hai hum
intzaar karwa ke theinga dhikana buri baat hai
ab apne ahishq pe farma bhi do kuch karam !!


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Meena

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«Reply #23 on: July 28, 2005, 04:39:16 PM »

lollllllll humtum ji..acha i will try to write a poem abt my life :wink:

kuch raaz kul jayenge, kuch log ruswa ho jayenge,
ajeeb si baat hai, kuch lafz hi ankhon me moti piro jayenge!