Kanton bhari bagiya mein

by risky on June 07, 2007, 07:24:43 AM
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Kanton bhari bagiya mein
Fool choenai ke tayari mein
Pata nahi kitena royai
Hashenai ke tayri mein

SapenoN ke wo satrangi duniya
Janai kaha goom hue
Badela hawaon ne rukh
Andhi anai ke tayari mein

Dil ke hasheratai sab
Dil mein he daffen ho gayee
Andhera kitena bar chala
Raat honai ke tayari mein

Vidhi ka vidhan bhala
Kiski samenj mein aaya hai
Aaj ka astitav mit chala
Kal Risky honai ke tayari mein
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«Reply #1 on: June 07, 2007, 08:09:23 AM »
Quote from: "risky"
Vidhi ka vidhan bhala
Kiski samenj mein aaya hai
Aaj ka astitav mit chala
Kal Risky honai ke tayari mein



Kya baat hai... Bahut hi achha likha hai Risky...
Sach ko bahut khoobsoorti se bayaan kiya aapne...
Yun hi likhte rahiye....

Aapka Yoindia par bahut bahut Swagat hai... :flower:
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«Reply #2 on: June 07, 2007, 10:30:07 AM »
Achha andaaz hai !

He is member for almost 2 years.. so welcome back !
Aur bhi padhna chahenge !
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: June 07, 2007, 03:20:55 PM »
bahoot khoob risky ji... good work!!

Welcome back Usual Smile!!
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«Reply #4 on: June 08, 2007, 02:57:28 AM »
Quote from: "Shikha12"
Quote from: "risky"
Vidhi ka vidhan bhala
Kiski samenj mein aaya hai
Aaj ka astitav mit chala
Kal Risky honai ke tayari mein



Kya baat hai... Bahut hi achha likha hai Risky...
Sach ko bahut khoobsoorti se bayaan kiya aapne...
Yun hi likhte rahiye....

Aapka Yoindia par bahut bahut Swagat hai... :flower:


shukeriya shika je mein bas jo dil mein hota hai ushai likh daita hoon aap ko muj na cheez ke kalam passend ayee yah mere liayai bahoot achi baat hai
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risky
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«Reply #5 on: June 08, 2007, 03:04:49 AM »
Quote from: "Ricky"
Achha andaaz hai !

He is member for almost 2 years.. so welcome back !
Aur bhi padhna chahenge !


shukeriya janaw ricky shab mein bahoot phalai aaya thaa mager kabhi posting na kar saka kuch mein or forums mein busy raheta thaa mager yahan ke ummenda shayar or shayaron ko parenai kai liyai fer bhi waqt nikal kar aata thaa yah ek yaisa sager hai jahan muj jaise na cheez baas aap jaise doston ke umenda kalam par kar kuch na kuch shik saketa hai
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risky
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«Reply #6 on: June 08, 2007, 03:07:00 AM »
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bahoot khoob risky ji... good work!!

Welcome back Usual Smile!!


bahoot bahoot shukeriya pooja ji
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