Kar khoon apne khoon’ ka,gairon ke waste-Beete palon ke saye- 1989

by Ram Saraswat on July 12, 2013, 12:50:31 AM
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«Reply #15 on: July 12, 2013, 02:33:11 PM »
Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on July 12, 2013, 02:22:37 PM
bahut khubsurat ghazal hai , saraswatji.bahut mubarakbad
Bahut bahut shukriya Siddiqui saheb

Apko aur sabhi sathiyon ko RAMZAN KARIM  Mubarak
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«Reply #16 on: July 12, 2013, 02:48:04 PM »
Behatareen peshkash hai ram saraswat jee..dhero daad rau ke sath qubool kare..happy9
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«Reply #17 on: July 12, 2013, 03:21:58 PM »
Quote from: nashwani on July 12, 2013, 02:48:04 PM
Behatareen peshkash hai ram saraswat jee..dhero daad rau ke sath qubool kare..happy9
Bahut bahut Shukriya
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«Reply #18 on: July 12, 2013, 03:42:39 PM »
Bahut khobsurat ghazal hai Sir
Par is sher ki adaaygi ki khaas taaref karni hogi.
Jeetein    hain   wo     to  raat   din, jannat  ki zindagi,
un   ki   balla  se   chaahe,  jahannum  mein  jayen hum.
anginat bhaav chipe hai is sher meN.
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«Reply #19 on: July 12, 2013, 04:32:15 PM »
Bahut bahut Shukriya MKVji
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«Reply #20 on: July 12, 2013, 06:13:25 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut achchi ghazal kahi hai aapne ram saraswat ji. bahut achche khayalon se saji hui hai sabhi ashaar. aapko is khoobsurat kalam par dheron daad.

Kar     khoon   ‘apne   khoon’    ka,   gairon   ke    waste,
ab    ro   rahe   hain  kah  ke,  kasam  kis  ki khaayen hum.


Ham    ne   chuppa  rakha tha  gham,   dunia   se   aj   tak,
per    bahte    ansuon   ko    ab,    kaise  chhipayen   hum.
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«Reply #21 on: July 12, 2013, 06:37:45 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Ram ji apni achchi achchi rachnaaon ko hamaare saath share karne ke liye... yunhi apni rachnaayein yahaan YO pe share karte rahiye and humein unkaa aanand lete rehne dijiye...!!!

aur aapki yeh rachna bahut bahut pyaari hai...!!!

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«Reply #22 on: July 12, 2013, 07:52:20 PM »
Quote from: aqsh on July 12, 2013, 06:13:25 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut achchi ghazal kahi hai aapne ram saraswat ji. bahut achche khayalon se saji hui hai sabhi ashaar. aapko is khoobsurat kalam par dheron daad.

Kar     khoon   ‘apne   khoon’    ka,   gairon   ke    waste,
ab    ro   rahe   hain  kah  ke,  kasam  kis  ki khaayen hum.


Ham    ne   chuppa  rakha tha  gham,   dunia   se   aj   tak,
per    bahte    ansuon   ko    ab,    kaise  chhipayen   hum.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Bahut bahut Shukriya aqshji
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«Reply #23 on: July 12, 2013, 07:58:33 PM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on July 12, 2013, 06:37:45 PM
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Ram ji apni achchi achchi rachnaaon ko hamaare saath share karne ke liye... yunhi apni rachnaayein yahaan YO pe share karte rahiye and humein unkaa aanand lete rehne dijiye...!!!

aur aapki yeh rachna bahut bahut pyaari hai...!!!

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Bahut bahut shukriya Hridayji
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«Reply #24 on: July 13, 2013, 12:24:29 AM »
waah waah Sir bahut hi khoob.
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«Reply #25 on: July 13, 2013, 07:25:13 PM »
Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on July 13, 2013, 12:24:29 AM
waah waah Sir bahut hi khoob.
Bahut bahut shukriya Iftikharji
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«Reply #26 on: July 13, 2013, 09:38:13 PM »
bahut khoob...
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«Reply #27 on: July 14, 2013, 12:13:39 AM »
Quote from: theyash on July 13, 2013, 09:38:13 PM
bahut khoob...
Bahut Bahut Shukriya
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«Reply #28 on: August 24, 2013, 05:21:31 PM »
bahut khoob likha hai aapne  Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #29 on: August 24, 2013, 11:08:28 PM »
Quote from: BANSI DHAMEJA on August 24, 2013, 05:21:31 PM
bahut khoob likha hai aapne  Applause Applause Applause Applause

Quote from: BANSI DHAMEJA on August 24, 2013, 05:21:31 PM
bahut khoob likha hai aapne  Applause Applause Applause Applause

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