Kar liya maine apni galti ka ahsas ab to aa jao - " By Betaab".

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Kar liya maine apni galti ka ahsas ab to aa jao,
Bheeg gayee ashqon se mere dil ki kitab ab to aa jao.

Shab ko Chand aur tare mujhko taana dete hain,
Kab tak kategi  yoonhi Tanha raat ab to aa jaao.

Kasid mera Koi bhi payam Untak Pahunchata nahin,
Karlo khud hi meri Bechaini ka ahsas ab to aa jao.

Tere intezar mein pathra gayee meri aankhen,
Chhoot jaane ko hai antim saans ab to aa jao.

Baad marne ke meri ruh chain kahan payegi,
zanaje ko do phool chadhane ki hai baat ab to aa jao.

                Composed by D K Saxena " Betaab".
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«Reply #1 on: November 05, 2013, 12:46:30 AM »
Quote from: dksaxenabsnl on November 05, 2013, 12:30:01 AM
Kar liya maine apni galti ka ahsas ab to aa jao,
Bheeg gayee ashqon se mere dil ki kitab ab to aa jao.

Shab ko Chand aur tare mujhko taana dete hain,
Kab tak kategi  yoonhi Tanha raat ab to aa jaao.

Kasid mera Koi bhi payam Untak Pahunchata nahin,
Karlo khud hi meri Bechaini ka ahsas ab to aa jao.

Tere intezar mein pathra gayee meri aankhen,
Chhoot jaane ko hai antim saans ab to aa jao.

Baad marne ke meri ruh chain kahan payegi,
zanaje ko do phool chadhane ki hai baat ab to aa jao.

                Composed by D K Saxena " Betaab".



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beautiful lines
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«Reply #2 on: November 05, 2013, 12:50:43 AM »
Kar liya maine apni galti ka ahsas ab to aa jao,
Bheeg gayee ashqon se mere dil ki kitab ab to aa jao.

Shab ko Chand aur tare mujhko taana dete hain,
Kab tak kategi  yoonhi Tanha raat ab to aa jaao.

Just beautiful.
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«Reply #3 on: November 05, 2013, 02:35:16 AM »
Quote from: dksaxenabsnl on November 05, 2013, 12:30:01 AM
Kar liya maine apni galti ka ahsas ab to aa jao,
Bheeg gayee ashqon se mere dil ki kitab ab to aa jao.
lo ji aa gayi ab kya mera achaar banaao ge Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
Shab ko Chand aur tare mujhko taana dete hain,
Kab tak kategi  yoonhi Tanha raat ab to aa jaao.
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard =))acha ye sab tumhaare padosi ban gaye
Kasid mera Koi bhi payam Untak Pahunchata nahin,
Karlo khud hi meri Bechaini ka ahsas ab to aa jao.
mujhe telepathy nahin hoti, kisi aur ko talaash lo jise tumhaari khamoshi samjh aati ho Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
Tere intezar mein pathra gayee meri aankhen,
Chhoot jaane ko hai antim saans ab to aa jao.
aa gai bhai main aa gai ab jaldi se zinda ho jaao icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
Baad marne ke meri ruh chain kahan payegi,
zanaje ko do phool chadhane ki hai baat ab to aa jao.
achi baat karo. mere liye kyon maro ge apne liye zinda raho tumhaari bahut zaroorat hai aur logo.n ko icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!

                Composed by D K Saxena " Betaab".




main betaab hui jaati hoon tumhaari khinchaai karne ke liye icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #4 on: November 05, 2013, 03:36:41 AM »
Laajawab.!!
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«Reply #5 on: November 05, 2013, 07:52:43 AM »
super. lnes
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«Reply #6 on: November 05, 2013, 08:46:17 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #7 on: November 05, 2013, 01:27:11 PM »
waah waah bahut bahut khoob Saxena Sahab...
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«Reply #8 on: November 05, 2013, 01:34:50 PM »
Veryy nicee.. each line iz very emotional..
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«Reply #9 on: November 05, 2013, 04:21:13 PM »
bahot khooooob  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: December 17, 2013, 12:19:03 AM »
Quote from: suman59 on November 05, 2013, 12:46:30 AM
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«Reply #11 on: December 17, 2013, 12:19:55 AM »
Quote from: mkv on November 05, 2013, 12:50:43 AM
Kar liya maine apni galti ka ahsas ab to aa jao,
Bheeg gayee ashqon se mere dil ki kitab ab to aa jao.

Shab ko Chand aur tare mujhko taana dete hain,
Kab tak kategi  yoonhi Tanha raat ab to aa jaao.

Just beautiful.
Bahut Bahut Shukriya.
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«Reply #12 on: December 17, 2013, 12:20:45 AM »
Quote from: Sheba on November 05, 2013, 02:35:16 AM

main betaab hui jaati hoon tumhaari khinchaai karne ke liye icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #13 on: December 17, 2013, 12:21:22 AM »
Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on November 05, 2013, 03:36:41 AM
Laajawab.!!

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«Reply #14 on: December 17, 2013, 12:22:02 AM »
Quote from: saahill on November 05, 2013, 07:52:43 AM
super. lnes

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