Karobaar Sheeshein Ka.........Rishi

by Rishi Agarwal on December 06, 2009, 02:04:51 PM
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Pathron Ke Bazar Mein Karobaar Sheeshein Ka,
Koi Bhi Nahi Karta Vishwas Is Sheeshein Ka,
Kanch Se Bana Khilona Thori der Hi Chalta Hain,
Chand Lamho Ka Hota Hain Ye Khumar Sheeshein ka,
Ban Sanwar Kar Mere Yar Aaj Ghar Se Nikla Hain,
Jane Kaun Hota Hain Phir Shikaar Sheeshein Ka,
Dil Ko Aazmane Ke Liye Ek Choth Hi Kafi Hai,
Imtihan Na Lena Tum Baar Baar Is Sheeshein Ka,
Is Zamane Mein Matalab Ke Hain Sab Rishtein,
Hum Ne Bhi Banaya Tha Ek Yar Sheeshein Ka....

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KOYAL46
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«Reply #1 on: December 06, 2009, 02:56:51 PM »
Chalo daad le he lo...........Sheeshey ki
Sambhaalna kahin toot kar bikhar n jaaye..... Applause Applause Applause

Tippani karne ka mann hai par chhodo.....
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #2 on: December 06, 2009, 02:59:24 PM »
Chalo daad le he lo...........Sheeshey ki
Sambhaalna kahin toot kar bikhar n jaaye..... Applause Applause Applause

Tippani karne ka mann hai par chhodo.....


Bahut Bahut Shukriya Koyal JI

Mann Ko Na Todo Koyal JI
Aap Bhi Kuch Likhdo do Line Sheeshein kI
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #3 on: December 06, 2009, 03:38:42 PM »
Rishiji aap ne request kiya tou likh rahi hu...chaar line...
Par hai hatoda.... Winking Winking Winking Winking

Shamshaan mai bechte ho Shaadi ka joda
Apni akal ka tou Eistemaal karo thodaa

Jaante ho tum guun shishe ka
Fir bhi yaar banaya sheshey ka


Pathron Ke Bazar Mein Karobaar Sheeshein Ka,
Koi Bhi Nahi Karta Vishwas Is Sheeshein Ka,
Kanch Se Bana Khilona Thori der Hi Chalta Hain,
Chand Lamho Ka Hota Hain Ye Khumar Sheeshein ka,
Ban Sanwar Kar Mere Yar Aaj Ghar Se Nikla Hain,
Jane Kaun Hota Hain Phir Shikaar Sheeshein Ka,
Dil Ko Aazmane Ke Liye Ek Choth Hi Kafi Hai,
Imtihan Na Lena Tum Baar Baar Is Sheeshein Ka,
Is Zamane Mein Matalab Ke Hain Sab Rishtein,
Hum Ne Bhi Banaya Tha Ek Yar Sheeshein Ka....


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«Reply #4 on: December 06, 2009, 04:20:52 PM »
Bophjat Achchem,.
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«Reply #5 on: December 07, 2009, 02:40:28 AM »
Wow bahut khoob Rishi ji,mindblowing creation,lovely lines by Koyal ji Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: December 07, 2009, 06:46:05 AM »

THANKS A LOT....Shihab-bhai...

Good Job Rishi Sahab.

Aur Koyal Ji Aapka Rep
Bhi Bada Achha Hai Ji.

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«Reply #7 on: December 07, 2009, 06:49:09 AM »
Madhu-di aapne pasand kiya meri mehnat safal hui..... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Wow bahut khoob Rishi ji,mindblowing creation,lovely lines by Koyal ji Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #8 on: December 07, 2009, 07:11:39 AM »
Bahut uttam likha hai Rishi Ji
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #9 on: December 07, 2009, 07:13:04 AM »
Rishiji aap ne request kiya tou likh rahi hu...chaar line...
Par hai hatoda.... Winking Winking Winking Winking

Shamshaan mai bechte ho Shaadi ka joda
Apni akal ka tou Eistemaal karo thodaa

Jaante ho tum guun shishe ka
Fir bhi yaar banaya sheshey ka


Bahut umda jawaab hai KOYAL Ji
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«Reply #10 on: December 07, 2009, 07:59:56 AM »
very good rishi ji n koyal ji. Thumbs UP
 Clapping Smiley  Applause
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«Reply #11 on: December 07, 2009, 09:30:08 AM »
Thanks a lot Rajesh-bhai....aapko jawaab pasand aaya...

Bahut umda jawaab hai KOYAL Ji
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«Reply #12 on: December 07, 2009, 09:34:01 AM »
Bahuj aabhaar Devangi-ben...tamne jawaab gamyo...hu khush...

very good rishi ji n koyal ji. Thumbs UP
 Clapping Smiley  Applause

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anny1
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«Reply #13 on: December 07, 2009, 09:57:23 AM »
nice 1
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«Reply #14 on: December 07, 2009, 12:01:14 PM »
Bahut achha likha hai Rishi Ji. Thank for sharing. Ek sher arz hai

Humse achhi kahin aaine ki qismat hogi.
Ru-ba-ru uske teri chaand si surat hogi.


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