Karoge yaad...

by Naya_Daur on March 02, 2007, 10:29:43 AM
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Karoge yaad par main phir wapis na aunga
tanha hi shayad kahin kidher batak jaunga

dard jo bi hoga khud hi mein chuupa lunga
tujh ko apni nafrat se bi mehroom kar jaunga

na phir tere payar ki khabar sun payega koi
apni hasti ko is Qadar mitti mein milaunga

pass toh rahega tere,tera yeh mubarak jahan
aor main kahin bohaat andhere mein kho jaunga

Karoge yaad par main phir wapis na aunga
tanha hi shayad kahin kidher batak jaunga
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Pooja
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«Reply #1 on: March 02, 2007, 02:00:06 PM »
bahoot hi acha likha hai BD JI!!
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Roja
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«Reply #2 on: March 02, 2007, 11:59:18 PM »
Quote from: "Burniing Desiires"
Karoge yaad par main phir wapis na aunga
tanha hi shayad kahin kidher batak jaunga

dard jo bi hoga khud hi mein chuupa lunga
tujh ko apni nafrat se bi mehroom kar jaunga

na phir tere payar ki khabar sun payega koi
apni hasti ko is Qadar mitti mein milaunga

pass toh rahega tere,tera yeh mubarak jahan
aor main kahin bohaat andhere mein kho jaunga

Karoge yaad par main phir wapis na aunga
tanha hi shayad kahin kidher batak jaunga


Wah wah wahaaa bd sb... Very touchy lines

Pyar ke naam per hasti ko mitakar
Mila hai kya hamein zindagi ko lutakar
Ye "Jeet" teri kahani sabse juda
Gham hi gham mile auron pe khushi lutakar..[/color]
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Aryaan
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«Reply #3 on: March 03, 2007, 09:54:36 PM »
Very Nice BD & Nice Reply Roja...
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #4 on: March 06, 2007, 08:27:38 AM »
Thanks Pooja, Roja & Aryaan

Quote from: "Roja"

Wah wah wahaaa BD sb... Very touchy lines

Pyar ke naam per hasti ko mitakar
Mila hai kya hamein zindagi ko lutakar
Ye "Jeet" teri kahani sabse juda
Gham hi gham mile auron pe khushi lutakar..[/color]



kya kahein ji aapko ...

Dilon ke saude mein kya kya naffa-nuksaan tolu
ek janam toh kya ab har janam mein uska ho lu
yeh Mohabbat ki Kahani sirf meri nahi, Humari hai
woh ankhein bhi roti hai "Roja",par main kya kya bolu
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ANKUR_CRAZY
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«Reply #5 on: March 06, 2007, 09:18:42 AM »
bahut hi accha likha hai BD

and roja
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Pooja
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«Reply #6 on: March 06, 2007, 06:01:24 PM »
Nice Roja and BD!!
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Meena is back
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«Reply #7 on: March 20, 2007, 01:15:04 PM »
wah bohot acha likha BD ji apne to... very nice aur ROJA ji...apki reply ki last lines to bohot hi pasand ayi mujhe!!!

dil laga kar  tujhse hansi ke badle anson paya hai,
bahar ki jagha zindagi me virana chaya hai,
phir bhi shikayat na karenge hum tumse aye dost,
khata humari ti jo humse tumse dil lagaya hai!
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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: March 20, 2007, 01:31:37 PM »
bahoot khoob meena
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khushiiiii
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«Reply #9 on: March 21, 2007, 08:09:55 AM »
Quote from: ""
Karoge yaad par main phir wapis na aunga
tanha hi shayad kahin kidher batak jaunga

dard jo bi hoga khud hi mein chuupa lunga
tujh ko apni nafrat se bi mehroom kar jaunga

na phir tere PAYAR ki khabar sun payega koi
apni hasti ko is Qadar mitti mein milaunga

pass toh rahega tere,tera yeh mubarak jahan
aor main kahin bohaat andhere mein kho jaunga

Karoge yaad par main phir wapis na aunga
tanha hi shayad kahin kidher batak jaunga



Bahut achha likha hai .....................
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Roja
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«Reply #10 on: March 21, 2007, 03:02:18 PM »
Quote from: ""
Thanks Pooja, Roja & Aryaan

Quote from: "Roja"

Wah wah wahaaa sb... Very touchy lines

Pyar ke naam per hasti ko mitakar
Mila hai kya hamein zindagi ko lutakar
Ye "Jeet" teri kahani sabse juda
Gham hi gham mile auron pe khushi lutakar..[/color]



kya kahein ji aapko ...

Dilon ke saude mein kya kya naffa-nuksaan tolu
ek janam toh kya ab har janam mein uska ho lu
yeh Mohabbat ki Kahani sirf meri nahi, Humari hai
woh ankhein bhi roti hai "Roja",par main kya kya bolu



Nice one sb..

Raaj chupana chahte they Humraj se apne
Haal-e-dil chupana chahte they, Dildaar se apne
Na tha yakeen kata maaf ho jayegi
Her zurm chipana chahte they, Dildaar se apne...!!

 :cry: [/color]
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Roja
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«Reply #11 on: March 21, 2007, 03:12:53 PM »
Quote from: "Meena is back"
wah bohot acha likha BD ji apne to... very nice aur ROJA ji...apki reply ki last lines to bohot hi pasand ayi mujhe!!!

dil laga kar  tujhse hansi ke badle anson paya hai,
bahar ki jagha zindagi me virana chaya hai,
phir bhi shikayat na karenge hum tumse aye dost,
khata humari ti jo humse tumse dil lagaya hai!


Bahut bahut shukhriya Meena ji.. I am honoured...

Unke pyar ka afsana dekho,
Is dil pe unka nishana dekho
Zakham chedte hai pyar se,
Pass aane ka unka bahana dekho.. :wink: [/color]
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Pooja
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«Reply #12 on: April 04, 2007, 07:43:32 PM »
Na koi dhadkan hai, na he dhadkano ka shor
Chup hai jameen-asmaan, chup hai ajj ki bhor

Jaana hai kaha, khud mai hi khamosh ho gai
Anjaam mila aise ki, khud ki hasti bhi ro gai

Na bulao ki bola ab na mujhse jayega
Likh rahi hai kalam, issi se kuch sakoon aa jayega

Dard hai, dard to na bhulaya jayega
Thak kar khud hi, yah dil, thum jayega

Karoge Yaad, is shakas ko badi shidatt se tum
Itani asaani se, payaar mera na bhulaya jayega
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paani
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«Reply #13 on: April 05, 2007, 05:23:07 AM »
BD, roja meena. all u guys wonderful ...
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