Karta huN tijarat " ParwaaZ"

by ParwaaZ on October 12, 2010, 04:40:18 PM
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Dil jalta hai magar rota nahi huN
AshkoN se gham apne dhota nahi huN

Tujhe naaz hai tune thukra diyaa
Mujhe naaz hai maiN khota nahi huN

Karta huN tijarat e yaad jaise
Jaagta rahta huN sota nahi huN

FasleN yaadoN ki fir se khadi na ho
Khawaab naye ab maiN bota nahi huN

Teri yaadoN meiN hota huN jab jab maiN
Hota huN aksar maiN hota nahi huN 


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«Reply #1 on: October 12, 2010, 05:33:56 PM »
dher sari daad kabool kijia parwaz sb
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«Reply #2 on: October 13, 2010, 02:44:56 PM »
Sameer Ji ... Aadaab ! aapki Ghazal ke sabhi ashaar bahut khoob lage mujhe ... khaaskar matalaa aur maqtaa meri pehli pasand bane ...

Dil jalta hai magar rota nahi huN
AshkoN se gham apne dhota nahi huN

Teri yaadoN meiN hota huN jab jab maiN
Hota huN aksar maiN hota nahi huN

Very Impressive ........ tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... qubuul farmaayeN...  Clapping Smiley

aise hi umdaa ehsaason ke saath aate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath ....
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«Reply #3 on: October 14, 2010, 04:52:37 AM »
bht hi dilkash gazal kahi hai aapne parwaz ji...
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
aur humne fir usi andaz me reply de diya hai ji...
 Giggle Winking Giggle Winking Giggle
lijiye dekhte hain kaisa lagta hai ab aapko ye....
 Feared. Feared. Feared.
Dil jalta hai magar rota nahi huN
AshkoN se gham apne dhota nahi huN

Aankho se ashk nahin lahu behte hain
Dikhte nahin ye chhupe rehte hain

Tujhe naaz hai tune thukra diyaa
Mujhe naaz hai maiN khota nahi huN

Tu chahe khudko thukraya hua keh de
Mujhe bhi kisine yahan paaya nahin hai

Karta huN tijarat e yaad jaise
Jaagta rahta huN sota nahi huN

Khwaabon me milne aayega waada hai tera
Mera sawera aaj tak isily hua nahin hai

FasleN yaadoN ki fir se khadi na ho
Khawaab naye ab maiN bota nahi huN

Teri yaadon me hi to zindagi kat rahi meri
Koi aur mere khyalon me ab hota nahin hai

Teri yaadoN meiN hota huN jab jab maiN
Hota huN aksar maiN hota nahi huN 

Meri yaadon se nikalkar jab saamne aajata hai tu
Hota hai paas mere magar nazar kisiko aata nahin hai….!!!
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«Reply #4 on: October 14, 2010, 06:29:05 AM »
bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Parwaaz ji...!!!

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: October 14, 2010, 10:59:57 AM »
Kasak ji aapne bhi bahut pyaara jawaab diya hai....!!!
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«Reply #6 on: October 14, 2010, 03:34:46 PM »
Parwaaz Bhai Beintehaan Khubsoorat Alfaaz Yahan Pesh kiye hain aapne.. jo seedhe dil tak Utar gaye... dard Ko Lafzon me Behad Khubsoorati se Piroya Hai dost.. Bahut Khooooob... Applause Applause


Dil se daad Kubool karen...  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #7 on: October 14, 2010, 05:43:24 PM »
Kam Lafzon Mein Badi Bata Kaise Kahi Jati Hai
Yeh Koi Aapse Sikha Parwaaz Ji.Behad Khoobsurat
Andaaz Mein Aapne Ehsaasaat Ko Lafzon Mein Bandha Hai
Waqai Mein Padke Bohat Hi Maza Aaya...


Shaad o Aabad Rahen.

Yaash.
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«Reply #8 on: October 17, 2010, 12:49:36 PM »
Quote from: yasmeen khan on October 12, 2010, 05:33:56 PM
dher sari daad kabool kijia parwaz sb

Yasmeen Sahibaa Aadaab!

Kalaam ko pasand karne aur hounsla afzai ka
tahe dil se shukriaa.... Usual Smile

Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye....
Khush O aabaad rahiye......
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: October 17, 2010, 12:54:16 PM »
Quote from: Anshumali on October 13, 2010, 02:44:56 PM
Sameer Ji ... Aadaab ! aapki Ghazal ke sabhi ashaar bahut khoob lage mujhe ... khaaskar matalaa aur maqtaa meri pehli pasand bane ...

Dil jalta hai magar rota nahi huN
AshkoN se gham apne dhota nahi huN

Teri yaadoN meiN hota huN jab jab maiN
Hota huN aksar maiN hota nahi huN

Very Impressive ........ tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... qubuul farmaayeN...  Clapping Smiley

aise hi umdaa ehsaason ke saath aate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath ....

Naresh Jee Aadaab!

Yeh to aapki mohobbat aur chahat hai ke aap waqt nikal kar humari kalaam par apna kimti waqt kharch karte hai.....

Aapko kalaam ke matla aur maqta achche lage dil se shukriyaa aapka..
Aage bhi apna saath dete rahiye....
Koshish jari hai..... Waqt ki zarra tangi chal rahi hai...
So kuch naya nahi likha paate jaldi jaldi...

Aap apna saath banaye rakhiye...
Khush O aabad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: October 17, 2010, 01:09:58 PM »
Kasak Jee Aadaab!


Aapke is dilkash andaaz ne to gazab dhaa diya jee..
Kafi khub andaaz hai aapka yeH ....
Hmm kia kaheN chaliye aapke reply kiye huye ashaaroN per
aate haiN....... Usual Smile

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 14, 2010, 04:52:37 AM
bht hi dilkash gazal kahi hai aapne parwaz ji...
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
aur humne fir usi andaz me reply de diya hai ji...
 Giggle Winking Giggle Winking Giggle
lijiye dekhte hain kaisa lagta hai ab aapko ye....
 Feared. Feared. Feared.

Aankho se ashk nahin lahu behte hain
Dikhte nahin ye chhupe rehte hain

Behad khoob jee mindblowing thought ko anjaam diya hai aapne waah daad.... Usual Smile


Tu chahe khudko thukraya hua keh de
Mujhe bhi kisine yahan paaya nahin hai

Waah jee waah kia kaheN... Waqai aapne sahiN jawab diya hai..
Bahut khoob bahut umdaa daad Usual Smile

Khwaabon me milne aayega waada hai tera
Mera sawera aaj tak isily hua nahin hai


Hmmm achcha khayaal hai gehra bhi hai per khara nahi utarta..  NaNaNa

Teri yaadon me hi to zindagi kat rahi meri
Koi aur mere khyalon me ab hota nahin hai

Waah jee kia baat hai bahut khoob.... Usual SmileUsual Smile

Meri yaadon se nikalkar jab saamne aajata hai tu
Hota hai paas mere magar nazar kisiko aata nahin hai….!!!


Mindblowing jee it's realy mindblowing thought...
Keep it up... Usual Smile

Aapke is umdaa reply ka dher sara shukriyaa jee..
Kuch kahne ko lafz hi nahi hai daad daad daad dil se daad.. Usual Smile
Aise hi apna saath banaye rakhiye....

Khush O aabaad rahiye....
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: October 17, 2010, 01:12:31 PM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 14, 2010, 06:29:05 AM
bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Parwaaz ji...!!!

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thank You So much Kalskar jee for this nice compliment..
Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye....

Khush O aabaad rahiye....
Khdua Hafez...... Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: October 17, 2010, 01:15:06 PM »
Quote from: Mann on October 14, 2010, 03:34:46 PM
Parwaaz Bhai Beintehaan Khubsoorat Alfaaz Yahan Pesh kiye hain aapne.. jo seedhe dil tak Utar gaye... dard Ko Lafzon me Behad Khubsoorati se Piroya Hai dost.. Bahut Khooooob... Applause Applause


Dil se daad Kubool karen...  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



**~** Mann **~**

Mann Jee aadaab!

Aapki is zarra nawaazi ke behad shukraguzaar hai.....
Aapko kalaam ke ashaar pasand aaye jankaar behad khushi mehsus ho rahi hai
Aage bhi aap aage bhi apna kimti waqt humare post per deNge yehi ummid..

Aapki daad dil se kabool ki janab....

Khush O aabad rahiye....
Khdua Hafez..... Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: October 17, 2010, 01:17:33 PM »
Quote from: Yaash on October 14, 2010, 05:43:24 PM
Kam Lafzon Mein Badi Bata Kaise Kahi Jati Hai
Yeh Koi Aapse Sikha Parwaaz Ji.Behad Khoobsurat
Andaaz Mein Aapne Ehsaasaat Ko Lafzon Mein Bandha Hai
Waqai Mein Padke Bohat Hi Maza Aaya...


Shaad o Aabad Rahen.

Yaash.
Janab Yaash Sahab Aadaab

Yeh kam lafz to nahi thi janab koshish kareNge aur bhi kam lafz meiN
behtar kahne ki ... par aapko pasand aye iske liye tahe dil se shukr guzaar hai..
Ummid hai aage bhi aap apna waqt aur saath deNge...
Aate rahiye......
Khush O aabaad rahiye......Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez...... Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: October 17, 2010, 01:43:39 PM »
Quote from: ParwaaZ on October 17, 2010, 01:09:58 PM
Kasak Jee Aadaab!


Aapke is dilkash andaaz ne to gazab dhaa diya jee..
Kafi khub andaaz hai aapka yeH ....
Hmm kia kaheN chaliye aapke reply kiye huye ashaaroN per
aate haiN....... Usual Smile

Aapke is umdaa reply ka dher sara shukriyaa jee..
Kuch kahne ko lafz hi nahi hai daad daad daad dil se daad.. Usual Smile
Aise hi apna saath banaye rakhiye....

Khush O aabaad rahiye....
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile

mere reply ka postmartum karne k liye bhttttttttttttttttttttttttttt saraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa thnxxxxxxxxx parwaz ji...i love ur style of repling...maza aajata hai jab aap aise postmartum karte hain..... notworthy notworthy notworthy happy3 happy3 happy3
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