Karta huN tijarat " ParwaaZ"

by ParwaaZ on October 12, 2010, 04:40:18 PM
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AbhiTamrakar
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«Reply #15 on: October 18, 2010, 08:34:02 AM »
Quote from: ParwaaZ on October 12, 2010, 04:40:18 PM

Tujhe naaz hai tune thukra diyaa
Mujhe naaz hai maiN khota nahi huN

Teri yaadoN meiN hota huN jab jab maiN
Hota huN aksar maiN hota nahi huN 

parwaaz sahab namskaar..

ye do sher bade izzatdaar gharane ke maloom huye hame..khud par naaz ho to eisa ho....

akhiri sher me haay keher dah diya janab..hota hun magar hota nahi hun...kya baat hai..bahut khoob...

kuchh arz karna chahuga gustaakhi maaf~

tere aane se pehle har pal har saans par khushi hoti thi,
or hazar tukde hokar bhi hasta he kambakhta aaj bhi tere aane se~
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ParwaaZ
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«Reply #16 on: October 24, 2010, 05:32:09 PM »
Quote from: Shihab on October 18, 2010, 08:17:19 AM
Janaab Parwaaz Sahab Aadab
Umeed Karta Hun Aap Khairiyat Se Hone
Aur Derri Se Parhne Ke Liye Mafi Chahta Hun
Aur Janaab Kya Kahun Tareef Mein Samajh Nahi Aa Raha
Aapka Andaaz o Bayaan To Hota Hi Lajaawb Hain
Aagaz Se Anjaam Tak Behatreen Ashaar Rahe
Ek Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Aur Muqammal Peshkash
Bahut Mubaarq Ho Janaab...Hazaron Dad...

Khush Rahiye...

~Shihab~

Janab Shihab Sahab Aadaab!

Alhamdullilah Janab hum khairiyat se hai..
Aur ummid aap bhi hoNge... Usual Smile

Jee janab tareef ke liye aapke kadam hi yahaaN
pade yehi kafi hai.. Usual Smile Lafzi tareef se jyada
behtar hoti hai dil ki mutmaini jo kuch aik lafz
bhi kar jate hai....

kalaam ko pasand karne ke liye behad hum dil se
mashkoor o mamnoon hai..

Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye...
Khush O aabad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile         
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ParwaaZ
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«Reply #17 on: October 24, 2010, 05:38:40 PM »
Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on October 18, 2010, 08:34:02 AM
parwaaz sahab namskaar..

ye do sher bade izzatdaar gharane ke maloom huye hame..khud par naaz ho to eisa ho....

akhiri sher me haay keher dah diya janab..hota hun magar hota nahi hun...kya baat hai..bahut khoob...

kuchh arz karna chahuga gustaakhi maaf~

tere aane se pehle har pal har saans par khushi hoti thi,
or hazar tukde hokar bhi hasta he kambakhta aaj bhi tere aane se~



Abhi jee Aadaab!

Aapke is dilkash andaaz ne to dil jeet liya janab..
AshaaroN ki Pasandeedgi ko zahir karne ke aapke
is andaaz ka bahut bahut shukriyaa janab.. Usual Smile

Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye...
Khush O aabad rahiye....
Khuda hafez...... Usual Smile         
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apriya
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«Reply #18 on: December 13, 2010, 04:43:52 PM »
sahi mayno me aapne bahut khub likha hai aapne....shayad ye kavita aapne mere liye likhi hai......
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #19 on: December 13, 2010, 06:10:03 PM »
Bahut umda Shihab Ji
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HumTum
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«Reply #20 on: January 14, 2011, 01:43:10 PM »
Aadaab! Parwaaz Saahib... bai waah ... kya khoob kha hai ... dil ke armaan hai .... mushkil mein jaan hai ...jise dundti ahi nazarien.... woh qatil kha hai. ji YaqeenaN ussi ki yadooN ka shara hai ke jiye ja rhe hai .. waGrna .. baaqi kucch nai hai iss butkhaane mein ... khayaal acche lage .. daad hazir hai .. aate rhiye .. aur yun hi likhte rhiye....

Shayaad TufaanooN Ko hai RanjishieN Mujse
Mein Jaan Kar KhastiyaN Dubota NahiN HooN !!

Aadaab!


HT
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«Reply #21 on: January 14, 2011, 04:14:24 PM »
Quote from: ParwaaZ on October 12, 2010, 04:40:18 PM
Dil jalta hai magar rota nahi huN
AshkoN se gham apne dhota nahi huN

Tujhe naaz hai tune thukra diyaa
Mujhe naaz hai maiN khota nahi huN

Karta huN tijarat e yaad jaise
Jaagta rahta huN sota nahi huN

FasleN yaadoN ki fir se khadi na ho
Khawaab naye ab maiN bota nahi huN

Teri yaadoN meiN hota huN jab jab maiN
Hota huN aksar maiN hota nahi huN 





acha hai par makta miss kar gaya hai parwaaz sahab phir se aakhiri line sajaa len
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ParwaaZ
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«Reply #22 on: January 14, 2011, 05:55:20 PM »
Apriye Jee aadaab!

Takheer se jawaab ke liye mazarrat chahte hai..
Aapki hounsla afzai ka behad shukriyaa janab...

Har ishq ki yehi dastaaN hai
Bolne wala hi yaha bezubaaN hai           

Aage bhi apna saath banae rakhiye....
Khush O aabaad rahiye....
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile         



Quote from: apriya on December 13, 2010, 04:43:52 PM
sahi mayno me aapne bahut khub likha hai aapne....shayad ye kavita aapne mere liye likhi hai......
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ParwaaZ
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«Reply #23 on: January 14, 2011, 06:02:45 PM »
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on December 13, 2010, 06:10:03 PM
Bahut umda Shihab Ji

Rajesh Jee Aadaaab!

Shayad aapne naam likhane meiN galti kar di Usual Smile...

Aapka bhi bahut bahut shukriyaa kalaam par aane aur
sarahne ka...

Aate rahiye...
Khush o aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile         
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