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Har bar kasam diye tere aithbaar kafi hai
Phir leeye kasam aur dard bee bohat hai
Deedar –e-yaar ke yaadon mein taiyaar hai
Hamaree kahani mein teri zikar bohat hai
Tere aankhon mein rahene ki tamana hai
Har bar tere saason mein jeene ki tamana hai
Pad liya tere aankhon ko usme nami bohat hai
Yakeen dilaon tumen mere ishq ki geh_rayee bohat hai
^^**honeyrose**^^
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«Reply #1 on: October 07, 2008, 06:38:27 AM » |
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jaya di bahut accha likha hai aapne
koshish ki hai jawaab likhne ki
shayad aapko pasand aa jaye
kaise yakeen dilaye tumhe ki kasam ki kasam hai kasam se
haan mujhe pyar hai tumse
aitbaar to karo tum meri is mohabbat par
ki kasam hai mujhe tumhare is pyar ki
hoth to mere khamosh hi rahe sada
aur aankhon ki zubaan na samjhi gayi tumse
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Tanha(Saurabh)
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«Reply #2 on: October 07, 2008, 06:43:25 AM » |
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«Reply #3 on: October 07, 2008, 06:47:26 AM » |
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 BAHUT KHOOB HONEY DI, SACH ME BAHUT AACHA LIKHTI HAI AAP, KEEP GOING... BEST OF LUCK, BY. K.SHAEL
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #5 on: October 08, 2008, 08:14:18 AM » |
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Aap ne bahut hi achcha likha hai
Zaroor ishq mein bahut gahrai hai
Tairna na jaanne wale doob jaayenge
Asha hai ki aap unhe tairna sikhyege
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Roja
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«Reply #6 on: October 08, 2008, 10:00:18 AM » |
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Har bar kasam diye tere aithbaar kafi hai
Phir leeye kasam aur dard bee bohat hai
Deedar –e-yaar ke yaadon mein taiyaar hai
Hamaree kahani mein teri zikar bohat hai
Tere aankhon mein rahene ki tamana hai
Har bar tere saason mein jeene ki tamana hai
Pad liya tere aankhon ko usme nami bohat hai
Yakeen dilaon tumen mere ishq ki geh_rayee bohat hai
^^**honeyrose**^^
Very very good and touchy lines Honey dear. God Bless |
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Roja
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«Reply #7 on: October 08, 2008, 10:01:31 AM » |
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jaya di bahut accha likha hai aapne
koshish ki hai jawaab likhne ki
shayad aapko pasand aa jaye
kaise yakeen dilaye tumhe ki kasam ki kasam hai kasam se
haan mujhe pyar hai tumse
aitbaar to karo tum meri is mohabbat par
ki kasam hai mujhe tumhare is pyar ki
hoth to mere khamosh hi rahe sada
aur aankhon ki zubaan na samjhi gayi tumse
Good Reply Diya |
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«Reply #9 on: October 08, 2008, 01:02:18 PM » |
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bahut badhiya madam ji. kya likhti hai aap. bahut badhiya. best of luck.
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honeyrose
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«Reply #10 on: October 08, 2008, 01:27:39 PM » |
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bahut badhiya madam ji. kya likhti hai aap. bahut badhiya. best of luck.
Shukriya Rakeshanub ji..  |
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honeyrose
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«Reply #11 on: October 08, 2008, 04:11:53 PM » |
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Woh kasam dekhar kyun mukar gaye
Mere armano ke kyun qatl kar gaye
Aankhen bichaye baithe hai unke intzaar kiye
Par mudkar na dekhe woh humen bhool chuke
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«Reply #12 on: February 08, 2009, 08:40:28 AM » |
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Shukriya Rajesh ji achcha likha hai aapne..
Thanks Roja dear.. Thanks Honey Ji |
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«Reply #13 on: February 28, 2009, 06:40:38 PM » |
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Woh kasam dekhar kyun mukar gaye
Mere armano ke kyun qatl kar gaye
Aankhen bichaye baithe hai unke intzaar kiye
Par mudkar na dekhe woh humen bhool chuke
Nice one Honey Ji Woh mukre nahi woh the aaye Tere armaano ko karne poore Woh kaun the baithe saath tere Usko dekh woh mudhke chale gaye |
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honeyrose
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«Reply #14 on: March 01, 2009, 05:01:59 AM » |
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Nice one Honey Ji
Woh mukre nahi woh the aaye
Tere armaano ko karne poore
Woh kaun the baithe saath tere
Usko dekh woh mudhke chale gaye
Shukriya Rajesh ji..bohat khoob... |
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