Kashmakash

by Sps on July 05, 2012, 11:38:27 AM
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dil is kadar bechain hai kuch kar guzarne ko,
jaan hi na nikli bas itni rehem kahiye..

na bach sake aatishe ishq se na khud ko chhudaya hi,
na unke paas rehne se, na door jaake sukoon kahiye..

na rashq deta chain na tanhaiyi hi hamdard hai,
saare nishaan unki taraf,bas ab khamosh na rahiye..

ek ishaara hi kaafi tha ishq ke khairmakdam ko,
jo zaalim ne khamoshi se jaan li to kya kahiye....

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«Reply #1 on: July 05, 2012, 11:43:33 AM »
 Applause Applause  bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: July 05, 2012, 11:50:00 AM »
Thank you Sir
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«Reply #3 on: July 05, 2012, 11:57:33 AM »
Bahut khoob Sps jee
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Aapke paas ehsaaso kee kamee nahee. sirf jaroorat hai unme rang bharne kee.. Indradhanush bante der nahee lagegee.
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«Reply #4 on: July 05, 2012, 12:43:59 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: July 06, 2012, 10:11:52 AM »
Thank you Mkv ji and Shaukeen ji,for ypraising my efforts.
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«Reply #6 on: July 06, 2012, 10:15:37 AM »
boht khub janab
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«Reply #7 on: July 07, 2012, 08:34:29 AM »
Thanks Saahil ji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: July 07, 2012, 09:00:46 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #9 on: July 07, 2012, 11:11:46 AM »
janaab sps ji,

laajawab ehsasaat ko bakhoobi pirone mein aap hue kaamyaab
rachna kuchh aise ban gayee hai jiska koi nahin hai jawaab.

bahut bahut badhai

ghansham das ahuja
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«Reply #10 on: July 07, 2012, 08:47:41 PM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: July 15, 2012, 02:39:00 PM »
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BAHOOT KHOOB.
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«Reply #12 on: July 16, 2012, 04:08:29 PM »
Bohat Achche,.
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«Reply #13 on: August 04, 2012, 09:44:43 PM »
Thanks bansi ji,ahuja ji, rituraj ji, anand ji and Azeem ji for praising my poem
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«Reply #14 on: August 04, 2012, 09:47:34 PM »
dil is kadar bechain hai kuch kar guzarne ko,
jaan hi na nikli bas itni rehem kahiye..

na bach sake aatishe ishq se na khud ko chhudaya hi,
na unke paas rehne se, na door jaake sukoon kahiye..

na rashq deta chain na tanhaiyi hi hamdard hai,
saare nishaan unki taraf,bas ab khamosh na rahiye..

ek ishaara hi kaafi tha ishq ke khairmakdam ko,
jo zaalim ne khamoshi se jaan li to kya kahiye.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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