Kasoor na unka hai na mera.

by Delicate_Doll on September 27, 2005, 07:32:25 AM

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Pooja

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«Reply #15 on: October 04, 2005, 05:27:39 PM »

bahoot khoob Aryaan, nidhi and majid!!!!

bahoot acha likha hai salma!!


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Kasoor na unka hai na mera.

«Reply #16 on: October 04, 2005, 06:00:41 PM »

Thanx salma,aryaan,pooja ji and majid and nice one majid...bohat khoob salma....excellent work.


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Kasoor na unka hai na mera.

«Reply #17 on: October 05, 2005, 12:54:54 PM »

Quote from: "gum"

Do kadam to sab saath chaltein hai,
Par zindagi bhar koi saath nahi nibhata,
Agar ro kar bhulaye jati yaadein,
To has kar koi GUM (Me) apne ansoo na chhupata

Wow.... very well written ghum........... Usual Smile

Aryaan aur Salma aapne bhi kaafi achha likha hai..... keep it up....!!!!


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«Reply #18 on: October 06, 2005, 04:57:15 AM »

hi salma. assalam alikum, i am really amezed afer going through your poems, you are really amizing and wonderful wrighter, may god bless you take care bye


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Delicate_Doll

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Kasoor na unka hai na mera.

«Reply #19 on: October 06, 2005, 08:32:09 AM »

Thanks Aryaan...pooja jee...nidhi n gum...

thanks a lot natural....hum shayar nahin hai dost wo to bas try kiya tha kuch alfaz me aur thoda apne collection se dala tha

n gum bahut khoob ....i got dis one in ma sms ...bahut he badiya sher hai ...!!!


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«Reply #20 on: October 06, 2005, 08:38:48 AM »

Quote from: "naadan aahique"

hi salma. assalam alikum, i am really amezed afer going through your poems, you are really amizing and wonderful wrighter, may god bless you take care bye

walikum as salaam naadan aashique welcome 2 yoindia

wrighter Shocked

aur main

u must be joking

mujse aache aache likhne wale hain yahan pe Usual Smile

i juz try my level best to decribe my words in shayari form but hume wo poems jaise nahin lagti khair ...agin thanks a lot Usual Smile


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«Reply #21 on: October 06, 2005, 08:44:56 AM »

Quote from: "gum"

salma4u nice work by you 2

Magar ek baat hum jarror kahenge. SMS ka bhi koi originator hota hai,
and this one is my creation thats for sure:)

thanks gum ..oh ok gr8 den ...but u belive me r not .. i got dis one in my sms so told ....chahiye wo sher aap he likhe honge ..any how gr8 one keep it up...!!!


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Aryaan

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Kasoor na unka hai na mera.

«Reply #22 on: October 06, 2005, 07:49:40 PM »

Thanks Natural....


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Delicate_Doll

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Kasoor na unka hai na mera.

«Reply #23 on: October 07, 2005, 11:33:00 AM »

Tu Meri Aankh Ka Sapna Hain Agar Tu Samjhe

Tu Meri Zaat Ka Hissa Hain Agar Tu Samjhe

Ho Nahi Sakti Judda Phool Se Khushboo Jaise

Saath Humara Bhi Kuch Aisa Hain Agar Tu Samjhe

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Kasoor na unka hai na mera.

«Reply #24 on: October 07, 2005, 06:04:01 PM »

wah salma,bohat hi acha likha hai.

"Tu na samjhe to bhi tu to mera hi hai,
fark samajhne me bas itna reh jayega,
jo tu samajh leta mere is pyaar ko,
jeevan ye mera safal ho jayega."