Kathputli:Shayri-E-Dard

redwhitegang

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Aj bhi sochta hu ke achanak unse takraya kyun..
Do pal ke mulakat ko apni jindagi banaya kyun!

Wo sath nibhane ki tamanna jata kar...
Jindagi se oujahl ho kar andhero mein hame dubaya kyun..

Jiss modd par khade hum usse pane ki aash chod chuke the..
Kismat ne ussi modd par hame milaya kyun!

Socha usse puchu ke is kadar hame tadpaya kyun??
Par uski behte askh dekh aur kya puchta ke hame rulaya kyun!

Usse phir pane ki aash mein jab masgul tha..
Uski haato par rachi mehndi hame nazar aaya kyun!

Ye dekh jindai jaise be-rang si ho gayi hai!
Mout aur mohabbat ka fasla ab kam ho gayi hai!

Apne khuda se bas ek hi shikayat liye ja raha hun..
Ke kathputli jaise hame hi tune nachaya kyun!??


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Mashhur Shayar

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Re: Kathputli

«Reply #1 on: April 24, 2010, 07:10:19 PM »

bahut khoobsurat kavita likhi hai aapne RWG ji... bahut hi khoob... ek ek shabd dard me piroya hua hai... bahut khoob...

meri mohabbat ka kuch aisa asar tha teri aankhon me,
aansoo the mere naam k par tu thi kisi aur ki baahon mein...


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neelgold

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Re: Kathputli

«Reply #2 on: April 24, 2010, 08:08:48 PM »

wow!!!!!!!!!!

Wat a writng!!!!!!!!!!

Jst KAMAL

Bhut bhut bhut hi aacha


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: Kathputli

«Reply #3 on: April 24, 2010, 09:31:20 PM »

Bahut khoob RWG

Ye un se yun takrana to tere haath na thi
Do pal mein apnana use teri nasamjhi thi

Saath nibhane ki kewal unki tamanna thi
Zindagi sawarna kucch tere bhi haath thi

Chhod chuke the jab tum aash usko pane ki
Teri kismat ki lekhni thi un se ye milan ki

Woh kar rahi thi intezaar tere poochhne ki
To batati woh tujhe kaaran ashq bahane ki

Teri to kewal ek hi aash thi usko paane ki
Is liye dekh na sake mehndi wali haathe unki

Be-rang hui zindagi, kaaran thi teri galti ki
Na mohabbat ne teri maut se faasla hai kam ki

Ab Khuda se jaate waqt kyon ye shikayat ki
Ki nachaya tujhe is sansaar mein ik kathputli si


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madhuwesh

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Re: Kathputli

«Reply #4 on: April 24, 2010, 09:44:34 PM »

Wah wah Rwhite ji ,too good,marvelous creation,hamesha ke tarah aaj bhi kamaal ke poem pesh kiya,beautiful lines by Kapil ji and Rajesh ji.keep it up. Hats off to you!


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: Kathputli

«Reply #5 on: April 24, 2010, 09:45:35 PM »

Shukriya Madhu Ji


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Re: Kathputli

«Reply #6 on: April 24, 2010, 09:47:23 PM »

bahut khoob likha hai aapne Rajesh ji... bahut khoob...!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 24, 2010, 09:31:20 PM


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Re: Kathputli

«Reply #7 on: April 24, 2010, 09:47:47 PM »

shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on April 24, 2010, 09:44:34 PM

Wah wah Rwhite ji ,too good,marvelous creation,hamesha ke tarah aaj bhi kamaal ke poem pesh kiya,beautiful lines by Kapil ji and Rajesh ji.keep it up. Hats off to you!


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: Kathputli

«Reply #8 on: April 24, 2010, 09:52:54 PM »

Quote from: klaskar on April 24, 2010, 09:47:23 PM

bahut khoob likha hai aapne Rajesh ji... bahut khoob...!!!

Shukriya Kapil Ji


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