Kaun Jaane !!!

by aarzoomehek on March 19, 2008, 10:26:03 PM
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Dil kii lagii dilwaale jaane...
jis par paRe vohii jaane...
Jis tan laage, so tan jaane...
dil ki peeRa dil hi jaane...
Dost, aHbaab kia khaak jaane..
rooh ki jalan ko Rab hi jaane...
Jaane na koi zakhmon ka mol..
jisne diya ye dard wohi jaane...
Raah ke kaaNToN se chhalni hai paaoN...
riste zaKhmoN kii tees raahi jaane...
Kitni tohmat, kitni dil_aazaari...
kaRwe lafzoN kii taaseer rooH hii jaane...
Roz marte hai jeene ke liye...
pal pal marne kii takleef marne_waala jaane..
Be_gunaah ho kar sazaa paane ka dastoor...
anaa ko miTaa kar zinda rehna dil hi jaane...
Ji meN aataa hai miTaa duN har ranj o alam..
khushiyoN kii aas meN jeena koi kia jaane...
Ai "aarzoo!" tu kiuN zinda hai..
abhi kaisi aas hai, kyon tarpe? Khuda jaane..
Jo maseeHaa tha tera wohi nikla qatil..
kitnii takleefeN dil sahtaa hai, Khudaa hii jaane!
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«Reply #1 on: March 19, 2008, 10:28:45 PM »
Bohot khoob Aarzoo Applause
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«Reply #2 on: March 20, 2008, 05:24:49 AM »
Bahut Khoob Aarzoo..bahut hi acha likha hai!!! Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: March 20, 2008, 08:45:56 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 20, 2008, 05:24:49 AM
Bahut Khoob Aarzoo..bahut hi acha likha hai!!! Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley
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Quote from: khwaish on March 20, 2008, 05:24:49 AM
Bahut Khoob Aarzoo..bahut hi acha likha hai!!! Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Parhne ke liye bohot bohot shukriya..Umeed karti hun aap sab ka pyaar aur saath humein milta rahega.
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«Reply #4 on: March 20, 2008, 09:54:27 AM »
aarzoooooooo
bahut ghahrahi hai in lafazon mein
yunhi dilki awaaz ko kagaz par utar liya karo.

nira
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«Reply #5 on: March 20, 2008, 10:02:19 AM »
aarzoomehek bohat hi khoob likhe hai..nice   Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: March 20, 2008, 02:49:53 PM »
Quote from: Talat on March 19, 2008, 10:28:45 PM
Bohot khoob Aarzoo Applause

Thanks for appreciating my lil work..umeed karti hun yunhisaath bana rahega..Usual Smile
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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: March 20, 2008, 02:55:13 PM »
wowowo kaya kahu... bahoot hi acha likha hai Arzoo bahoot khoob!! dard ko kitne simple words mai apne bayan kiya hai... bas itna hi likhna chahugi...

is poem ka arth in bato ko roj sahne wala he jaane!!!
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«Reply #8 on: March 20, 2008, 02:58:06 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on March 20, 2008, 02:55:13 PM
wowowo kaya kahu... bahoot hi acha likha hai Arzoo bahoot khoob!! dard ko kitne simple words mai apne bayan kiya hai... bas itna hi likhna chahugi...

is poem ka arth in bato ko roj sahne wala he jaane!!!

Thanks a lottttt for liking it pooja...sahi kaha jis tan laage wo tan jaane...dard lafzon main bayaan nahi kar sakte bas ye ek choti si koshihs hai...

pooja i wanna ask u one thing....mera dil kyonkehta hai tum meri pooja ho..I know u...main aarzoo hun...I wish it's u my lil sis..Usual Smile
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aarzoomehek
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«Reply #9 on: March 20, 2008, 04:54:12 PM »
Quote from: mistufer on March 20, 2008, 09:54:27 AM
aarzoooooooo
bahut ghahrahi hai in lafazon mein
yunhi dilki awaaz ko kagaz par utar liya karo.

Nira tumhaara saath meri shayri ke safar ko khushnuma bana deta hai...yunhi saath rehna...huggssss..bless u..Usual Smile

nira
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«Reply #10 on: March 21, 2008, 09:12:56 AM »
Quote from: honeyrose on March 20, 2008, 10:02:19 AM
aarzoomehek bohat hi khoob likhe hai..nice   Clapping Smiley

parhne ke liye bohot bohot shukriya honeyrose.apna dher saara khayaal rakhna..Usual Smile
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