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mohsin akhter
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Kaun jane dil ki soorat kaun jane pyar ko
Kaun jane tamannao ko aur kaun jane yaar ko
Dil tadapta dekhkar hansta raha ye jamana
Sab ne samjha nasamajh hai kaun jane aitbaar ko
Koi to hai jo kare ab meri baat per
Din ka samjha logo ne kaun jane raat ko
kya hai chahat kya mohabbat kya hai mahfile
kaun jane dard ko aur kaun jane fir dua ko
Samajh jao takleef ko hasrate baki nahi
Maut hai ab kareeb Zindagi ab baki nahi
Lo utha lo hatho ko ek dua ke vaste
aur kaho ye jhoot hi jante hai hum tumhi ko
jante hai hum tumhi ko
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«Reply #1 on: March 20, 2006, 11:35:52 AM » |
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bahut sunder mohsin ji bahut khoob....
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mohsin akhter
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«Reply #2 on: March 20, 2006, 11:39:41 AM » |
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Na karo tareef aise dil ko khauf lagta hai
jo mili hai khusi apse unko khauf lagta hai
bethain rahe isi mahfil main Gesu Ji
ab to jane se bhi dar lagta hai
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«Reply #3 on: March 20, 2006, 11:43:11 AM » |
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Kabhi kabhi kuch shaks aise mil jaate hain,
Dil jo ibaadatt ka mandir hai use woh todh jaate hain,
Tum na karo gum ke aise log jahaan mein mil hi jaate hain,
Shikwaa karne se kuch na milega jinhone todna ho woh to naata todh jaate hain,
Matt jalao koi chiraag unki yaad yaan unki aane ki umeed ka
Kuch aise bewafa hotey hai jo wafai ki parchhai ka rukh modh jaate hain,
Khud ko na kaho badkismatt tum yeh socho ke khushnaseebi se bewafa ka daaman chootha hai...
gesu's koshish!!!!!!
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«Reply #4 on: March 20, 2006, 11:48:10 AM » |
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bahoot bahoot sukriya Gesu Ji
Kosise jo aap ki ho wo kamyaab ho hi jati hai
Har Muskilo main tujh se hi ummeed nazar aati hai
tere deedar se har baat ban jati hai
Tum hi to hai jisse Gesu har mahfil saj jati hai
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«Reply #5 on: March 20, 2006, 12:24:38 PM » |
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ho thanks mohsin ji...
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«Reply #6 on: March 20, 2006, 01:00:16 PM » |
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u hv written very good Mohsin............Its Rocking "Azeem hain yeh qurbat ki doorian bhi
Sath reh kar bhi us ko na pana kesa lagta hai
Qismat main nahin phir bhi us ko chahtay hain
Phool samjh kar kantoon per chalna kesa lagta hai
Ab to mehfil main bhi hamaray liyey tanhai hai
Gham chupa kar mehfil ko sajana kesa lagta hai
Mehfil main dosron se hans hans kar miltay hain
Tanhai main gham k ansoo bahana kesa lagta hai
Samjhany per bhi samjhta nahin hai yeh Dil
Us ki yaad main ratoon ko jaagna kesa lagta hai
Us ki berukhi ne itnay diyey hain zakham kay
Zakham kha kar bhi muskurana kesa lagta hai
Jab woh hans hans kar baat karay dosroon se
Tab apnay ansoon ko chupana kesa lagta hai
Usay kho kar to Meray pass raha kuch bhi nahin
Phir bhi khud ko ameer batana kesa lagta hai
Khud ko anmol samjhnay ka tha bara ghumand
Phir bhi baymool bik jana kesa lagta hai
Khaey hain dhokay mouhabbat main itnay kay
Phir bhi is ko chahna kesa lagta hai
Maloom hai is dewanay ki Manzil nahin hai koi
Phir bhi safer kartay rehna kesa lagta hai
Woh to aa kar bhi kab kay ja chukay hain
Phir bhi is ka intazar kartay rehna kesa lagta hai
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«Reply #7 on: March 20, 2006, 01:04:02 PM » |
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wowwwwwwwwwwwww bahut sunder likha.. such mein lavz nahi ke kitni sunder shayari ki aapne rockindia ji ... keep writing..
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«Reply #8 on: March 22, 2006, 10:34:52 AM » |
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thanks all shayar
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«Reply #9 on: March 22, 2006, 02:42:54 PM » |
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Very Nice all of you !!!! This poetry is not exactly for the section meant for Ishq !! The poetry has pain, pain for love !!! I am moving it to the section of Shayari-e-dard!!! Moved by Yoindia Monitor Talat |
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«Reply #10 on: March 23, 2006, 01:35:23 PM » |
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ye talat tu a gaya meri mahfil sajane ko
ab chand bhi ek ayega mahfil main roshni lane ko
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«Reply #11 on: March 29, 2006, 01:24:19 PM » |
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kya bhool humse ho gai jo tum humko hi bhool gaye
dekho akar is manjar main tanha mohsin rah gaye
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«Reply #12 on: April 01, 2006, 06:10:25 AM » |
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koi hai
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«Reply #13 on: April 01, 2006, 06:59:23 AM » |
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wonderful Mohsin bhai.........
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«Reply #14 on: April 01, 2006, 07:24:32 AM » |
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sukriya janab
sukriya meri mahfil main tasreef lane ka
ek sama ko mere liye jalane ka
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