kaun si galti usne kari thi.????:Shayri-E-Dard

shraddha the poetess

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aaj jb wo siskiyon se ghiri thi...,
apne hi ghar me beghar si padi thi..
sadak kinare khoon me sani padi thi...
saas me saas na thi, dhadkanein ruk si rahi thi..
jatey jatey bhi us damini ki ankhen poochh rahi thi..
ki aakhir kaun si glti usne kari thi...?
kis baat ki sazaa use mili thi...
durga poojan jahan pr ek pramukh tyohaar hua...
wahin na jane kitni hi damini ka daaman taar taar hua..
kahin din dahare to kahin sare baazar hua..
izzat ek nari ki aaj bs khilwaar hua..
haan wahin jahan durga poojan ek pramukh tyohaar hua...
nirvastr bhale wo damini hui pr sach kahoon to y samaaj sharmsaar hua...!!
shaayad is apraadh ki taakat itni na badi hoti
chup naa rehkar agar humne aawaaz phle hi buland kari hoti...
dekhkar bhi ankhein apni agr band na kari hoti ...
to shaayad jassicca or damini aaj hmare beech hoti..
pr wo damini aaj bhi bas yahi pooch rahi thi ...
sath m ek guzaarish bhi kr rahi thi.
mere sath jo hua na bhulana na bhulane dena...
phir kisi maa se uski beti naa chinne dena
der s hi sahi jali hai aag jo vidroh ki use ab na bujhne dena
phir kisi baba ki ladli ko damini na banne dena....
sahe na koi nari jo mujhpr beeti thi
is baar kyun buraai achcchhai pr jeeti thi..
sawaal rhega tb bhi mera aisi kaun si glti maine kari thi
kis baat ki sazaa mujhe mili thi.. Huh?


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shraddha the poetess

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kaun si galti usne kari thi.????

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ghayal_shayar

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Re: kaun si galti usne kari thi.????

«Reply #2 on: August 08, 2013, 09:37:17 PM »

maarmik chitran hai... bas yahi keh sakuNga... iski tareef karne ki gustaakhi nahiN kar sakta...!!


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Re: kaun si galti usne kari thi.????

«Reply #3 on: August 08, 2013, 10:02:58 PM »

bahut bahut khoob Shraddha ji, jitni taarif ki jaaye is rachna ki kam hai, aapne bade hi khoobsoorat andaaz mein Damini ke dard ko bayaan kiyaa hai, hattss off to you....!!!


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Re: kaun si galti usne kari thi.????

«Reply #4 on: August 08, 2013, 10:04:36 PM »

bohut acha likha hai bohut dard hai ismein yeh dunya mein kuxh log shaitaan se bhi bur ehain


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shraddha the poetess

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Re: kaun si galti usne kari thi.????

«Reply #5 on: August 08, 2013, 11:05:42 PM »

thank u so very much for such a lovely comliment....hriday g sahil g and taish g ..........


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Re: kaun si galti usne kari thi.????

«Reply #6 on: August 08, 2013, 11:10:27 PM »

behad dardnak behad marmik.. jab yeh hadsa hua tab bahut charcha mein aaya par kuch nahi hua uske baad ..mujhe to apne desh ke system se bahut buri tarah se nafarat hai...


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shraddha the poetess

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Re: kaun si galti usne kari thi.????

«Reply #7 on: August 08, 2013, 11:47:49 PM »

exactly karan bhaiya.......i tooo..


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Saavan

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Re: kaun si galti usne kari thi.????

«Reply #8 on: August 09, 2013, 10:10:30 AM »

Ha.. Sahi hai...


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Re: kaun si galti usne kari thi.????

«Reply #9 on: August 09, 2013, 10:13:30 AM »

bahut khoob with full of emotions Applause


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shraddha the poetess

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Re: kaun si galti usne kari thi.????

«Reply #10 on: August 09, 2013, 11:57:22 AM »

thank u so much.....


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prashad

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Re: kaun si galti usne kari thi.????

«Reply #11 on: August 09, 2013, 08:58:36 PM »

bahut khoob n emotional also


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shraddha the poetess

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Re: kaun si galti usne kari thi.????

«Reply #12 on: August 09, 2013, 09:06:05 PM »

thank u so very much prashad ji.........


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