KAUN...........hu.....mai........?....

by akela on December 20, 2005, 11:16:37 AM
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akela
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tanhai mai utthey..unn sawalo ka
kabhi na maanga gaya jawab hu mai,

jamin par pada hua ho jo tadapta,
uccha udne ka uss panchi ka khwab hu mai,

jiseke karam se pura sahar roshan ho gaya,
par ghar mai jiske andhera raha woh aag hu mai

parichey-e-'akela' tujhe auur kya du ab mai.........
din mai bhi chup gaya ho woh aaftaab hu mai.
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«Reply #1 on: August 31, 2009, 11:59:49 AM »
Wah wah bahut khoob Akela ji very beautiful creation Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley.
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«Reply #2 on: December 04, 2009, 03:20:42 PM »
Bahut Khoob Akela Ji
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«Reply #3 on: April 24, 2011, 03:53:41 PM »
yar ye poem 20 december ko likha gaya hai…
yani ke mere birth day par…
aur alla kasam mere hi baare me likha hai aapne!!!
kya haqiqat hai bhai…
kuch film sa dimag me ghoom gaya…
ek bar yo par dubara aao ji…
subhas aapse milne ki khuaish rakhta hai…
khus raho ji
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marhoom bahayaat
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«Reply #4 on: April 28, 2011, 05:34:45 AM »
tanhai mai utthey..unn sawalo ka
kabhi na maanga gaya jawab hu mai,

jamin par pada hua ho jo tadapta,
uccha udne ka uss panchi ka khwab hu mai,

jiseke karam se pura sahar roshan ho gaya,
par ghar mai jiske andhera raha woh aag hu mai

parichey-e-'akela' tujhe auur kya du ab mai.........
din mai bhi chup gaya ho woh aaftaab hu mai.


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nirala
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«Reply #5 on: June 05, 2011, 08:34:40 AM »
wowww……
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