Kaya hai mera, jis ke kho jaane ka dar karu:Shayri-E-Dard

Pooja

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Jhoothi khushio ki koi manjil nahi hoti,
Chalta nahi jab bas, tab ankhia hai roti,

Tanhai he sahi, magar khud ko khud ka hai sath rahta,
Intzaar mai is kadar, ghutati saansein nahi hoti,

Kaya hai mera, jis ke kho jaane ka dar karu,
Phir kyun udaas hai dil, ab to kalam se bhi koi baat nahi hoti…..


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brokenbyluv

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Re: Kaya hai mera, jis ke kho jaane ka dar karu

«Reply #1 on: December 11, 2009, 09:21:29 PM »

waah bahut khoob pooja ji...

Udaasiya mhbt sath laayi hai,
ye tou judai ki gawah hai,
jab tak bahe na diljalo ki ankho se ansu..
kaise pata chale duniya ko ki hum mhbt mein tabah hai......


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_Vicky_

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Re: Kaya hai mera, jis ke kho jaane ka dar karu

«Reply #2 on: December 13, 2009, 05:19:14 AM »

Wah Kya Baaat hai Pooja Ji.. Lafzon Ke Zariye Dard Ko bakhoobi Bayan Kiya hai aapne.. Bahut Hi Lajawab Alfaaz likhe Hain..

Geet Ji aapne Bhi Bahut Khooooooob Likha Hai...

**~** Mann **~**


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_Vicky_

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Re: Kaya hai mera, jis ke kho jaane ka dar karu

«Reply #3 on: December 13, 2009, 05:29:15 AM »

Dard Ki Syaahi Se Qalam Ko Bhigoya Hai,
Aaj Phir Se Yeh Dil Teri Yaad Me Roya Hai....

Ab Na Sahi Jayegi Humse Qismat Ki Berukhi,
Jise Chaaha Zindgi Ne Har Us Ko Khoya Hai...

**~** Mann **~**


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madhuwesh

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Re: Kaya hai mera, jis ke kho jaane ka dar karu

«Reply #4 on: December 13, 2009, 06:37:46 AM »

Bahut dard bhari kavita aap sabhi ne likha Pooja ji,Geet ji,Mann ji.too good


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deepika_divya

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Re: Kaya hai mera, jis ke kho jaane ka dar karu

«Reply #5 on: December 14, 2009, 06:25:06 AM »

Bahoot Bahoot Dard Bhara aur bahoot sach likha Pooja di..

bahoot Khoob Geet and Vicky


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brokenbyluv

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Re: Kaya hai mera, jis ke kho jaane ka dar karu

«Reply #6 on: December 14, 2009, 01:49:10 PM »

thnx mann ji sophiji . madhu ji..mann ji bhatu hi khoob likha hai apne...

Kabhi khush hota hai kabhi daaman bhigota hai,
kabhi kisi k intezaar mein raho mein khota hai,
ae dil tu hi jane terre ajab khel hai..
kabhi use dekh k muskurata hai kabhi uski yad mein rota hai......


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KOYAL46

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Re: Kaya hai mera, jis ke kho jaane ka dar karu

«Reply #7 on: December 14, 2009, 02:58:22 PM »

Pooja-di as usual bahoot achha kalaam likha hai aapne... Clapping Smiley

Khawaabon ka koi nissan nahi rehta
Behte Aasooyon ka hisaab nahi rehta

Jab kalam he rooth jaati hai kaagaz se
Dil k udgaaron ka koi hissab nahi rehta

Paya he nahi maine pyarr kisi ka ab talak
Kaya hai jiske kho jaane ka darr ho mujhko....

Quote from: Pooja on December 11, 2009, 09:12:17 PM


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Rishi Agarwal

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Re: Kaya hai mera, jis ke kho jaane ka dar karu

«Reply #8 on: December 14, 2009, 03:07:41 PM »

Bahut Hi Sundar Likha Hai Pooja JI Aapne and Good Response Geet JI, Mann Ji and Koyal JI


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KOYAL46

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Re: Kaya hai mera, jis ke kho jaane ka dar karu

«Reply #9 on: December 14, 2009, 03:18:12 PM »

Wah Geet-di...bahoot achha likha hai aapne... Clapping Smiley

Ye kya haal hai tere dil ka ay meri sakhi
Ye Kabhi rota hai tou kabhi muskurata hai

Bol-na Kis k intzaar mai ye rahen takta hai
Kya naam hai uska,kya tujhe khat likhta hai

Quote from: brokenbyluv on December 14, 2009, 01:49:10 PM


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brokenbyluv

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Re: Kaya hai mera, jis ke kho jaane ka dar karu

«Reply #10 on: December 14, 2009, 03:27:59 PM »

thnx rishi ji n koyal...tune bhi bahut acha likha hai...

Lagta vo jaise merra saaya hai,
naa apna hai naa paraya hai,
aur kya kahu main uske baare mein tujhe..
bus wahi ab merri duao mein samaya hai......


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KOYAL46

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Re: Kaya hai mera, jis ke kho jaane ka dar karu

«Reply #11 on: December 14, 2009, 03:42:00 PM »

Wah Maan-bhai...bada sunder jawaab hai aapka... Clapping Smiley

Shabdo ko badi khoobi se piroya hai
Uski yaad mai jaane kya-kya khoya hai

Dil ko sakun mila jab bhi uski yaad mai soya hai
Jaagte main tou kabhi Roya hai kabhi muskuraya hai...

Quote from: Mann on December 13, 2009, 05:29:15 AM

Dard Ki Syaahi Se Qalam Ko Bhigoya Hai,
Aaj Phir Se Yeh Dil Teri Yaad Me Roya Hai....

Ab Na Sahi Jayegi Humse Qismat Ki Berukhi,
Jise Chaaha Zindgi Ne Har Us Ko Khoya Hai...

**~** Mann **~**


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