kayun itna be-dard Zamana hai!!!!

by Pooja on August 29, 2005, 03:45:45 PM
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tujse mil kar muje milla kaya
jo kiye tune karm, unse ab gilla kaya

Rub ne yah sansaar rachaya hai
maine khud ko tere naam se sajaya hai

Rachi jab uski yah maya hai
na de jo Tu muje apna saya hai

ansoon ki larri mai jab dard pirona hai
kaya rub aor tere samne ab rona hai

waqat ke sath sanso ne chale jana hai
sochati hu sirf yahi, kayun itna bedard jamna hai!!!!
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«Reply #1 on: August 29, 2005, 05:15:32 PM »
Bohat khoob pooja ji..........!!!!!!!!!!

"Hai bedard zamana,par jeena to hai hi,
 saanso ke thamne se pehle kuch karna hai hi,
 na gam rahega mujhe mere mitna ka agar,
 saath chal do tum ek kadam hi sahi."
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«Reply #2 on: August 29, 2005, 05:18:57 PM »
woww  wonderfull Pooja sis n Nidhi dear......................
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«Reply #3 on: August 29, 2005, 05:50:38 PM »
Thanks Nidhi and nikki.......

Nice wordings nidhi...

dard ki intehan na kar, ki dard hi sath rah jai
Jeene ke liye, kuch to saanse de de,
yah na ho tu is jamane mai akela rah jai!!!!
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«Reply #4 on: August 29, 2005, 05:58:38 PM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
tujse mil kar muje milla kaya
jo kiye tune karm, unse ab gilla kaya

Rub ne yah sansaar rachaya hai
maine khud ko tere naam se sajaya hai

Rachi jab uski yah maya hai
na de jo Tu muje apna saya hai

ansoon ki larri mai jab dard pirona hai
kaya rub aor tere samne ab rona hai

waqat ke sath sanso ne chale jana hai
sochati hu sirf yahi, kayun itna bedard jamna hai!!!!



Bahut hi khoob likha hai Pooja ...
Hum to fida ho gaye aapki gazal pe ...
Kyu itna bedard zamana hai ...
Mast line likhi hai ...
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«Reply #5 on: August 29, 2005, 06:00:15 PM »
It was a fantastic one Niddhi dear ...
Keep it up ...


I see your love in each movement,
I hear your love in each sound,
I feel your love in each moment,
I sense your love all around ...
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«Reply #6 on: August 29, 2005, 06:09:04 PM »
bahoot bahoot shukariyan Just_Hate_Love ji!!!!

apne bhi bahoot achi lines likhi hai!!!

Tere dard ne jo dil ko sataya hai
bas yahi soch kar ajj dil bhar ayya hai!!

kabhi to is sukhy mosam mai, boond barsegi
yahi soch kar, ankho mai sawan umarr ayya hai!!!
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«Reply #7 on: August 29, 2005, 06:16:28 PM »
thanx nikki sis,pooja ji and JHL .Excellent JHL and pooja ji,the above one is beautiful.

"Umeedon ke saawan na jaane kitne yunhi nikal gaye,
 na aaye tum,ashkon ke na jaane kitne samandar beh gaye,
 teri raahon me yun hi na aayi thhi main,jaan le tu,
 kuch aisa kar zaroor jaungi,yaad rakhega mujhe hamesha tu."
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«Reply #8 on: August 29, 2005, 06:19:03 PM »
Thanks a lot and Welcome both ...
Both of you have written fantastic ones ...
Keep it up ...


Zindagi mein na judaai badhakar jiyo,
Kabhi ishq aur sharaab milakar piyo,
Gumo ko bhulane ki zaroorat nahi,
Kabhi zakhm mein gum chhupakar siyo ...
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«Reply #9 on: August 29, 2005, 06:19:23 PM »
bahoot khoob nidhi ji.......


na kuch karane ki tamanna, na hi koi chahat baki hai
kuch sanse hai abhi adhoori, kuch aor karmo ki saja baki hai!!!
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«Reply #10 on: September 25, 2005, 10:13:52 AM »
diye jo andhi bujati to koi shikayat na thi
wo jo usne buja diye, to shikayat kis se karu!!!
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«Reply #11 on: October 05, 2005, 11:43:58 AM »
Shikayat hum kisise kiya nahi karte,
Mohabbat ke diye kabhi bujha nahi karte,
Wo aapka vahem hai ki aap akele hai,
Baaki aisa ek bhi pal nahi jisme aapke liye hum dua nahi karte ....
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«Reply #12 on: October 05, 2005, 03:01:23 PM »
Good one JHL JI!!!

Dil ka pata chalata nahi
kabhi shikayat yah mujse karta nahi
jab bhi paya, bas ek shakas ko hi sath paya maine
wo jo chala gaya, kayun dil se ja sakata nahi!!!
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«Reply #13 on: October 06, 2005, 02:13:01 PM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
bahoot khoob nidhi ji.......


na kuch karane ki tamanna, na hi koi chahat baki hai
kuch sanse hai abhi adhoori, kuch aor karmo ki saja baki hai!!!
wah pooja ji app ka jawab nahisach kya shayari hai hum thofida ho gaye

         kabhi razi tho kabhi mujhsey khafa lughthi hai
           saans leytha hoon tho zakhmaun ko hawa lugthi hai zindagi tho ho batha tumeri kya lugthi hai
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«Reply #14 on: October 06, 2005, 02:26:23 PM »
shukariyan shams!!!

raha gardisho mai her dum, mere Ishaq ka sitara
kabhi dugmuggai kashti, kabhi kho gaya kinara (NM)
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