kayun itna be-dard Zamana hai!!!!

by Pooja on August 29, 2005, 03:45:45 PM
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Aryaan
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«Reply #30 on: October 21, 2005, 11:22:53 PM »
Bohat khoob Waheed, JHL & Pooja.....
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«Reply #31 on: October 22, 2005, 05:23:29 PM »
Thanks Aryaan, ap bhi kuch likh kar jaaty to acha lagta!!!

payaar ka dard bhi kitna rulaata hai
roty hu jab, tera hansana yaad atta hai!!
Teri banho mai bachpan mera laut atta hai
ho kar teri, is jahan se ab na koi mera nata hai!!

payar ka her pal, pal pal mujko yaad atta hai
her nata torr kar jaane wale,
yah dard ka nata, kaise na tujse torra jata hai!!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #32 on: October 22, 2005, 05:48:01 PM »
thanxxxx Aryan........
Very  nice Pooja..........yeh  two  line  bahot accchi lagi....

payar ka her pal, pal pal mujko yaad atta hai
her nata torr kar jaane wale,
yah dard ka nata, kaise na tujse torra jata hai!!

khwahis,aansoo,ghum, muskurahat sab kuch mila
na mila to  bus too na mila
khwahis, aarzoo, dua, tamanna sab kuch mila
na mila to bus tera pyar na mila.......
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Pooja
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«Reply #33 on: October 22, 2005, 05:50:47 PM »
Thanks Waheed and Good one!!
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«Reply #34 on: October 22, 2005, 05:50:55 PM »
Wow,amazing work pooja ji.

"Na khushiyan ka naata jud saka,dard ka hi sahi,
      tu mujhe jeena sikha gaya,zindagi barbad tere naam pe sahi,
      bohat kuch galat hua hai yahan sahi ke naam pe,
      tujhse pyaar bohat kiya hai maine,tu na samjha na sahi."
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«Reply #35 on: October 22, 2005, 06:13:44 PM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
Wow,amazing work pooja ji.

"Na khushiyan ka naata jud saka,dard ka hi sahi,
      tu mujhe jeena sikha gaya,zindagi barbad tere naam pe sahi,
      bohat kuch galat hua hai yahan sahi ke naam pe,
      tujhse pyaar bohat kiya hai maine,tu na samjha na sahi."


Thanxxxxx  Pooja.......... very  nice Nidhi.......

mere saamne  bhi unse parda uthaaya na  gaya
faasla kam  tha magar  mitaaya na  gaya
unki aankhon se na tapakne lage mere  aansoo
is darr se unko haale  dil sunaya na  gaya.........
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«Reply #36 on: October 22, 2005, 06:24:23 PM »
Thanx waheed and bohat khoob.
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #37 on: October 23, 2005, 03:23:37 PM »
Thanx Nidhi..........tongue3
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Neelam
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«Reply #38 on: October 23, 2005, 03:43:18 PM »
wah pooja very nice.......keep it up
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Pooja
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«Reply #39 on: November 15, 2005, 10:08:50 PM »
Raat ko din karna, din ko ratein karna,
humne sikh liya hay, khud hi se batein karna..

Mosam ki tarah badal jaaty hay, dekhaty hi dekhaty
Humne sikh liya hai mosam se batein karna..

Waqat ki andhi ki tarah, khawab bikhar jaaty hay
Humne sikh liya hay, bikhar bikhar kar sambhalna!!
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«Reply #40 on: November 16, 2005, 06:01:16 AM »
rothi hoon jabbi teri pyaar ki yaad mein
lagtha hai beh-jaayeinge yaadein teri in aasoon se

ab muskuraane ki koshishme bhi, hai aasoo behte
kya karein is dil ke dard mein ab hum sab kuch sehte

shaayad yehi thi anzaam humaari is pyaar mein
judaa hokar tujse, jiye hum sirf teri yaad mein
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«Reply #41 on: November 16, 2005, 08:04:50 AM »
Quote from: "anitha"
rothi hoon jabbi teri pyaar ki yaad mein
lagtha hai beh-jaayeinge yaadein teri in aasoon se

ab muskuraane ki koshishme bhi, hai aasoo behte
kya karein is dil ke dard mein ab hum sab kuch sehte

shaayad yehi thi anzaam humaari is pyaar mein
judaa hokar tujse, jiye hum sirf teri yaad mein



tum aaise roya na karu......

kuch bhi ho dil aapna khoya na karo......

kerte hai wada tujhse milker tujhe honege na juda hum......

aabhi hai mausam judai ka 2 pal me kat jayega..
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«Reply #42 on: November 18, 2005, 10:12:33 AM »
Good job everyone ...


Hame kahi baahon ka sahara na mila,
Raat guzarni thi par thikana na mila,
Doob to jaate aapki nigaaho mein hum,
Lekin aapki aankhon ka wo nazrana na mila ...
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Pooja
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«Reply #43 on: November 18, 2005, 03:33:27 PM »
Wah kaya baat hai!!!  Nice Anitha, Tushar and JHL JI!!
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anitha
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«Reply #44 on: November 19, 2005, 03:02:26 AM »
wow....what a reply tusshar

ab is dil ko aaye na vishwaas waadon pe
jo kiye the kitne par na aaya nibaane

kyon hai ye judaai ka mousam itni lambhi
jo ho shuroo jaldi par na ho khatam kabhi

na rona chahti hoon par kyon hai ye aasoo behte
2 pal ki judaai kyon hai itni dil ko tadpaate
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