kayun itna be-dard Zamana hai!!!! -Panna 5:Shayri-E-Dard

Ghayal

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«Reply #60 on: November 25, 2005, 09:35:49 AM »

Wah Nirbhay Ji.....
Bahut Khub Kaha Aapane.....

Quote from: "nirbhay"

Ghayal sahab agar ye mere liye tha to thnx.

Aap ne bhi khoob likha Ghayal!! Wah really admire ur composition

Dhoka sehna aaur fareb lena, ye dil waalon ke liye aam hai
Shayad iss hi ka naam dildaari aaur karmon mein mahan hai
wo sahi kaha hai kisi ney sahi..
Mehnga hai Isk waalon ka bazaar bhaut,
Isliya hamein aapne garib honey pey bhi aitbaar hai.


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Ghayal

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kayun itna be-dard Zamana hai!!!!

«Reply #61 on: November 25, 2005, 09:36:57 AM »

Woh Aasama Zameen Pe Aaya Hoga...
Dharti Ke Samksh Kabhi to Sir Zhukaya Hoga...
Ke Woh Bhi Rota hai Dahrti ki Yaad Mein..
Shayad Usne bhi Kabhi Apna Pyaar Khoya Hoga..


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nirbhay

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kayun itna be-dard Zamana hai!!!!

«Reply #62 on: November 25, 2005, 10:12:15 AM »

Wah khoob.... zaheeer kia........

Khoya hoga pyaar aapna chain-o-dil ka karar aapna
Koi tha jo dil karib, jo lagta tha gairon ke bich aapna
Ho gaya nazron se door, loot gaya sapno ka sansar aapna
Bahoun mein wo meri , labon pe naam uske maine dekha aapna
Aakhien khuli to dil ney fir dohraya alfaz 4 aapna
Bhul jaana aab tu ussey, beet gaya wo jo tha mahz ek sapna


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Just_Hate_Love

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«Reply #63 on: November 25, 2005, 11:55:30 AM »

Quote from: "anitha"

wow JHL ji ...bahut khoob likhe hain aapne

ye jahaan hai jo detaa nahi kisi ko sahaara
behlaata hai baahein par deta nahi sahaara

doobte huye dekhthi hai ye jamaana
par na aaye kabhi isse bachaana

na karna kabhi ispe yakeen, ab maaine hai jaana
par na aaaye is nadaan dil ko samjaana

jo har kisiko samje sachaa
par har koi nilkhle jootaa

Thanks a lot Anitha for appreciation ...

Aankhon mein armaan liya karte hai,
Hum sabki neend chura lliya karte hai,
Ab jab jab aapki palke jhapkegi,
Samajh lena tab tab hum aapko yaad kiya karte hai ...


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Just_Hate_Love

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kayun itna be-dard Zamana hai!!!!

«Reply #64 on: November 25, 2005, 12:00:28 PM »

Thanks a lot Pooja for appreciating my post ...


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nirbhay

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kayun itna be-dard Zamana hai!!!!

«Reply #65 on: November 25, 2005, 01:34:22 PM »

NIce 1 again JHL!!


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Pooja

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kayun itna be-dard Zamana hai!!!!

«Reply #66 on: November 28, 2005, 06:17:33 PM »

Bahoot hi acha likha hai apne!!!

Sorry mai shayad apni post mai clear nahi kar saki. Karanveer likhaty waqat uske daan dene wala roop nahi tha mere samne. meri soch mai wo karan tha jo bahoot veer (Brave) tha, jisse sab atty hui bhi, jab sabse jayada jaroorat thi, tab bhool gaya!!

Quote from: "Ghayal"

Thankx Pooja Ji.....&....Aap Ki Shayari Bahut Achhi He....Lekin KAranveer Pane ME Nahi Dene Me Daanaveer Tha......Mhabharat Jara Fir Je Padh Lena......

Bura Laga Ho To Maafi Chahata Hu.....Kyo Ki...

Me Ek Aaina Hu.....
Aap Ko Apana Chahera Dikhaunga....
Muje Tood Ne Ki Koshish Na Karana....
Varana Hazaar Chahere Dikhaunga......

Quote from: "Pooja"

Thanks Gayal and Good one!!!

Dene mai hai daanveer
aor pane mai hai karanveer
kaise hai yah takdeer
ab tumse kaya bolu
e-mere hatho ki lakeer!!!!!


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Pooja

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kayun itna be-dard Zamana hai!!!!

«Reply #67 on: November 28, 2005, 06:22:17 PM »

bahoot khoob gayal, nirbhay and JHL JI!!!

Her sapna bhulaya nahi jaata
her yaad ko dil se mitaya nahi jaata
bhool jao hume yah bedardi se kahne walo
is iatarh se, hukum payaar ko sunaya nahi jaata!!


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Aryaan

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kayun itna be-dard Zamana hai!!!!

«Reply #68 on: November 28, 2005, 11:33:05 PM »

Bohat khoob Ghayal, Nirbhay, JHL & Pooja....

Sooraj Ke Sath Doob Gaya Dil Bhi Mera Aaj
Itna Udaas Shaam Ka Manzar Kabhi Na Tha


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tushar_4u_im

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kayun itna be-dard Zamana hai!!!!

«Reply #69 on: November 29, 2005, 04:30:24 AM »

dooba hai dil jo tere dhalte suraj ki tarah.........

kyu jal raha hai magar aangara banker........


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Just_Hate_Love

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kayun itna be-dard Zamana hai!!!!

«Reply #70 on: December 02, 2005, 03:07:00 PM »

Thanks a lot Nirbhay, Pooja and Aryan for appreciation ...

Good one too all ...

Dil ki tanhaai kasabdo mein utara karte hai,
Dard ke aalam mein bhi muskuraya karte hai,
Chahe jitne bhi de zakhm sangdil jahaan hame,
Har gum ko sauk gazal banaya karte hai ...


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Pooja

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kayun itna be-dard Zamana hai!!!!

«Reply #71 on: December 02, 2005, 03:18:31 PM »

Good one JHL!


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Just_Hate_Love

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kayun itna be-dard Zamana hai!!!!

«Reply #72 on: December 02, 2005, 03:21:47 PM »

Thanks a lot Pooja ...


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Pooja

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kayun itna be-dard Zamana hai!!!!

«Reply #73 on: December 08, 2005, 03:54:58 PM »

her najam, her gazal mai tujko gaaya hai
dard apne ko ab apni kalam banaaya hai
nahi hai tu zindagi mai door door tak
mere her lafaz ne tera hi her roop dikhaya hai!!


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Just_Hate_Love

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kayun itna be-dard Zamana hai!!!!

«Reply #74 on: December 19, 2005, 09:28:26 AM »

Thanks a lot Pooja for replying ...
You have written very well ...
Keep it up ...

Pal bhar mein toot jaaye wo kasam nahi,
Dosto ko bhool jaaye wo hum nahi,
Tum bewafa bano is baat mein dum nahi,
Kyunki hamari wafa bhi kuchh kam nahi ...


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