khabar na thi mere aane ki…… nir

by nirala on July 16, 2011, 05:07:56 AM
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jaane kyun ye lamhen simat rahe hain
zakhm ubhar kar aaj, daaman se fir lipatt rahe hain

apno ko fursat kahan,gairon ne apnaya hai
khabar na thi mere aane ki,dekh mujhe,apne hi saare sisak rahe hain

namumkeen nahi tha,kuch muskilen thi,taaposhi me yaaron
dekho,bicha kar shool,taaz kaanto ka lie,kese fir wo machal rahe hain

umeedon ka sama bandhe,betha hai nir
sabar nahi,unko fir bhi,maut ki meri,kafan lie haatho me,dekho kese tadap rahe hain……

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choda nai jata ye jahan, fir bhi sad5
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GUMboy
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«Reply #1 on: July 16, 2011, 07:44:48 AM »
bahut badhiya nirala ji..
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #2 on: July 16, 2011, 08:01:40 AM »
Wah bahut khoob Nirala ji.great creation.excellent. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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nirala
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«Reply #3 on: July 16, 2011, 09:46:44 AM »
Quote from: GUMboy on July 16, 2011, 07:44:48 AM
bahut badhiya nirala ji..
thanx
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nirala
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«Reply #4 on: July 16, 2011, 09:49:48 AM »
Quote from: madhuwesh on July 16, 2011, 08:01:40 AM
Wah bahut khoob Nirala ji.great creation.excellent. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
thanx madhuji
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«Reply #5 on: July 16, 2011, 09:52:55 AM »
Quote from: nirala on July 16, 2011, 05:07:56 AM
jaane kyun ye lamhen simat rahe hain
zakhm ubhar kar aaj, daaman se fir lipatt rahe hain

apno ko fursat kahan,gairon ne apnaya hai
khabar na thi mere aane ki,dekh mujhe,apne hi saare sisak rahe hain

namumkeen nahi tha,kuch muskilen thi,taaposhi me yaaron
dekho,bicha kar shool,taaz kaanto ka lie,kese fir wo machal rahe hain

umeedon ka sama bandhe,betha hai nir
sabar nahi,unko fir bhi,maut ki meri,kafan lie haatho me,dekho kese tadap rahe hain……

……zoom……

choda nai jata ye jahan, fir bhi sad5



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«Reply #6 on: July 16, 2011, 10:06:02 AM »
Quote from: khujli on July 16, 2011, 09:52:55 AM


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nirali--- tu itna gusse me reply kaahe karti hai re,!!
tere ajebgareeb cmnt ko dher saar thanx Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: July 16, 2011, 10:08:28 AM »
Quote from: nirala on July 16, 2011, 10:06:02 AM
nirali--- tu itna gusse me reply kaahe karti hai re,!!
tere ajebgareeb cmnt ko dher saar thanx Usual Smile



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«Reply #8 on: July 16, 2011, 10:34:01 AM »
Quote from: khujli on July 16, 2011, 10:08:28 AM


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yahi cmnt acha hai tongue3
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