Khafa kyun ho..................Aqsh

by aqsh on November 06, 2012, 11:13:52 AM
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Khafa kyun ho khata toh bata do mujhko
Apni berukhi ki wajah toh bata do mujhko
Paakar tumhe kho de yeh mumkin hi nahin hai
Mere dard e dil ki koi dawa toh bata do mujhko
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riyaz106
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«Reply #1 on: November 06, 2012, 11:31:28 AM »
Good creation.
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masoom shahjada
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«Reply #2 on: November 06, 2012, 11:43:55 AM »
Ashq Baajee, Bahut achchaa likhaa haai aapne.
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«Reply #3 on: November 06, 2012, 11:49:51 AM »
Quote from: Riyaz Ashna on November 06, 2012, 11:31:28 AM
Good creation.
thank u riyaz ashna ji
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«Reply #4 on: November 06, 2012, 11:50:12 AM »
Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on November 06, 2012, 11:43:55 AM
Ashq Baajee, Bahut achchaa likhaa haai aapne.
bahut shukriya masoomji
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«Reply #5 on: November 06, 2012, 11:52:46 AM »
Quote from: aqsh on November 06, 2012, 11:50:12 AM
bahut shukriya masoomji
Tauba Tauba kaisi bahan ho chote bhaai ko jee se bulaa rahi ho. Ye etni ijjat kis khushii me de rahi ho. Sidhaa masoom hi likho na.
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«Reply #6 on: November 06, 2012, 11:52:53 AM »
bahut khoob, dhero dad
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«Reply #7 on: November 06, 2012, 12:03:42 PM »
Quote from: aqsh on November 06, 2012, 11:13:52 AM
Khafa kyun ho khata toh bata do mujhko
Apni berukhi ki wajah toh bata do mujhko
Paakar tumhe kho de yeh mumkin hi nahin hai
Mere dard e dil ki koi dawa toh bata do mujhko


Aate Hi Yaad  Aashun  Behane Lagte Hain Aankhon Se
Jahan Na Aaye Yaad Apki Aise  Koi Jagah Bata Do Mujh Ko,

Uathe Hi Kalam Apke Saath Bitaye Pal Ko Lafjo Me Pirone Lagti Ho Mein
Aa jaye Nend Raton Ko Aisa Koi Raj Bata Do Mujh Ko,

Bichad Kar Tumse Ander Se  Bahut  Toot Chuki Hon Mein,
Dikhayi De Na Gham Mere Chehre Par Aisa Koi  Hunar Bata To Mujh Ko,

Mere Dard  e Dil Ki Dawa Bata Do Mujh  Ko……….!!!



Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Behad Shandaar Touching Creation Aqsh ji ....

Mujhe Apki Ye Rachna Bahut Pasand Aayi, Apki Rachana Me Apni Taraf Se Kuch Lines Add Ki Hain ,,,,,,Bura Mat Maniyega .Aqsh Ji .

Apki Creation Ko Read Kar Ke Kuch Pal Ke Liye Kahi Gum Ho Gaya Tha Behad Zabardast Creation .......Ek Rau Meri Taraf Se Kabul Kijiyega Aqsh Ji.
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«Reply #8 on: November 06, 2012, 12:29:41 PM »
Quote from: nandbahu on November 06, 2012, 11:52:53 AM
bahut khoob, dhero dad
thank u nanbahuji
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«Reply #9 on: November 06, 2012, 12:30:33 PM »
Quote from: Kaushal Sharma on November 06, 2012, 12:03:42 PM

Aate Hi Yaad  Aashun  Behane Lagte Hain Aankhon Se
Jahan Na Aaye Yaad Apki Aise  Koi Jagah Bata Do Mujh Ko,

Uathe Hi Kalam Apke Saath Bitaye Pal Ko Lafjo Me Pirone Lagti Ho Mein
Aa jaye Nend Raton Ko Aisa Koi Raj Bata Do Mujh Ko,

Bichad Kar Tumse Ander Se  Bahut  Toot Chuki Hon Mein,
Dikhayi De Na Gham Mere Chehre Par Aisa Koi  Hunar Bata To Mujh Ko,

Mere Dard  e Dil Ki Dawa Bata Do Mujh  Ko……….!!!



Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Behad Shandaar Touching Creation Aqsh ji ....

Mujhe Apki Ye Rachna Bahut Pasand Aayi, Apki Rachana Me Apni Taraf Se Kuch Lines Add Ki Hain ,,,,,,Bura Mat Maniyega .Aqsh Ji .

Apki Creation Ko Read Kar Ke Kuch Pal Ke Liye Kahi Gum Ho Gaya Tha Behad Zabardast Creation .......Ek Rau Meri Taraf Se Kabul Kijiyega Aqsh Ji.
thank u sooooooooo much kaushal ji aapke ashaar mujhe behad pasand aaye shukriya apka bahut bahut
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«Reply #10 on: November 06, 2012, 02:44:14 PM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #11 on: November 06, 2012, 05:38:27 PM »
bahut khoob...
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«Reply #12 on: November 06, 2012, 06:49:16 PM »
Quote from: aqsh on November 06, 2012, 11:13:52 AM
Khafa kyun ho khata toh bata do mujhko
Apni berukhi ki wajah toh bata do mujhko
Paakar tumhe kho de yeh mumkin hi nahin hai
Mere dard e dil ki koi dawa toh bata do mujhko
gd
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«Reply #13 on: November 07, 2012, 05:00:47 AM »
bahut khoob.......janab...........
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«Reply #14 on: November 07, 2012, 05:37:51 AM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on November 06, 2012, 02:44:14 PM
bahut khoob
thnx sirji
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