""khafa""------- 'nirala'

by nirala on December 22, 2010, 09:01:52 AM
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gar ho khafa mujhse
to aitraaz kar
     bin kahe yun na mujhe
     taar taar kar
gar mohabat hai mujhse fir
kuch to aitbaar kar
    tera yun chupke se jaana
    mujhe dekh nazren firaana
    bana kar dheron bahana
    gairon ki tarah pesh aana
bardast 'nirala' karta hai kaise
ye kabi tune kahan jaana
    kya gujarti hai iss dil par
    sachhi ho gar mohabat teri
    to zara mehsoos kar
samjh jaogi tum bhi iss dil ke fasane ko
mere mohabat ke afsaane ko
haal e dil ke taraane ko
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manzil-e-ishq
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«Reply #1 on: December 22, 2010, 09:27:31 AM »
bahut khoob nirala ji...
kuch lines meri taraf se bhi...

khafa hoke humse kya paoge...
hum bhi honge tanha...
tum bhi tanha rah jaoge....
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nirala
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«Reply #2 on: December 22, 2010, 09:47:56 AM »
hmm Manzile ji..
aapki lines to achhi hain.
""
khafa hona gar fitrat hai teri....
        maaf karna sanam manana hame aata nhi""
thanx Manzile isq
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«Reply #3 on: December 22, 2010, 12:34:10 PM »
Bahut khoob nirala ji..ek hi sans mein padhi jaye tou apki kavita ki khubsurati aur bhi badh jati hai...
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«Reply #4 on: December 23, 2010, 07:19:01 AM »
nice nirala and manzile ji

hai alag hi mazaa kuch khafaa hone mein
our maza hai unke dil ko phir manaane mein
ho jaye ho mehboob khafa to dil bechain rehta hai
maan jaye jaldi se woh har koshish dil karta hai
khafa to rehtey hain bahar se dil mein pyar rehta hai
is manane khafa rehne ki kashkash ka maza hai dewaano mein
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«Reply #5 on: December 23, 2010, 07:30:23 AM »
yepppiiiiiiiiiii
mere ghatiya se lekhni me itte saare bade shayon ke comnts---nirala aaj party dega
sabko aana hai aaj hi sham ko.WinkingUsual Smile
""khafa hona hai ho jao sanam mere
          khata ho gar 'nirala' ki behichak batla dena"
thanx aal
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«Reply #6 on: December 23, 2010, 08:08:00 AM »
khafa khafa se wo mere sarkaar hain aajkal
dekho kaisa mera haal behaal hai aajkal
ek nazar dekh lete wo to dil ko sukun aajata
jinki nazron me bemazaa hain hum aajkal......
nirala ji ...aapki nirali lekhni..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: December 23, 2010, 08:15:14 AM »
chalo ji hum aaj bahut khus hain..
aapka sukriya K mam.
aapki 4 lines lajawaab hai Boss..oops Madam..Usual Smile
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wo khafa se the
      hume ilm hi na hua
shama bujh gai aur
      parwaana jalta raha
""
thanx
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«Reply #8 on: December 23, 2010, 08:20:43 AM »
bht mast nirala ji......
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«Reply #9 on: December 23, 2010, 08:25:49 AM »
thanx K mam
lekin mai sirf 'nirala' hu
isme JI laga kr bhadda na karen.
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«Reply #10 on: December 23, 2010, 09:19:33 AM »
badhiya h nirala ji..dher saari daad~

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«Reply #11 on: December 23, 2010, 09:47:57 AM »
Bahut Khub Nirala Ji Aur Kasak JI Applause Applause
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