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zindagi jaise tawaqo thi nahi kuch kam hai
har ghadi hota hai ahsas kahi kuch kam hai
ghar ki tamir to tasawwur he me ho sakti hai
apne nakshe ke mutabik ye jamin kuch kam hai
bichde logo se mulaqat kabhi fir hogi dil me ummeed to hai yaki kuch kam hai
ab to lagta hai ki is duniya me
kahi kuch chiz jyaada to kahi kuch kam hai
aaj bhi hai teri duri hi udasi ka sabab
ye alag baat hai pehli si nahi kuch kam hai
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«Reply #1 on: September 05, 2006, 03:44:58 PM » |
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Achha Likha Deepak ji... welcome to YoIndia!
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«Reply #2 on: September 06, 2006, 04:07:10 AM » |
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Thx desire this is a begining
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«Reply #3 on: September 06, 2006, 05:00:29 AM » |
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abhi toh agaaz huya hai dost
sham dhalna baki hai....
Paimana abhi toh honth se chua hai
Botal ka Nasha hona abhi baki hai ....
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Azeem Azaad
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«Reply #4 on: September 06, 2006, 01:57:09 PM » |
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Bahoot Khoob Deepak Bhai And Jeet Bhai Acchi Mehfil Jamaai Hai ..
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«Reply #5 on: September 06, 2006, 02:47:57 PM » |
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Azzem Dost....
Jis jagah baith jatein hain
kuch lamhon ko yaad karte hain
Na dhalti hai sakoon se zindagi ki sham
aor mehfil mein Jam pe Jam Chalakte hain....
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«Reply #6 on: September 06, 2006, 02:52:01 PM » |
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Azzem Dost....
Jis jagah baith jatein hain
kuch lamhon ko yaad karte hain
Na dhalti hai sakoon se zindagi ki sham
aor mehfil mein Jam pe Jam Chalakte hain....
Nice One Again Bhai,..
Tumne Dekha Hai Mehfil Mein Chalakte Jaamo Ko,..
Humne To Bujhti Hui Shama Aur Tadapte Hue Parwaane Ko Dekha Hai,.
Kehte Ho Tum Hume Ke Doston Par Yakheen Kar Lo,..
Humne To Yaar Aazmaane Is Zamaane KO Dekha Hai..
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«Reply #7 on: September 06, 2006, 02:57:18 PM » |
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Rangat wahi hai mehfil mein
par andaz-e-byaan hai kuch alag sa
dil-e-taradap wahi hai,dost
par dard-e-nazar hai kuch alag sa....!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: September 07, 2006, 05:57:08 AM » |
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apne naseeb ki lakeeron ko kaise chupaoge
humse dur ab kaise ja paoge
hum to khusbu ki tarah teri saanson main hai base
dur jaane ke liye humse,apni saanson ko kaise mitaoge
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«Reply #9 on: September 07, 2006, 01:35:39 PM » |
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bohot khoob deepak ji...janasheen and jeet..
jal gaye the aaj hum jazbon ki aag se
alfaaz dar rahe hai aaj ye kis khayaal se
zakhmo ke saath hum yun paidal hi chal gaye
pochein pata tera hum apne hi aap se
dard ka yeh safar hume le jaiyega kahan?
laot ayenge fir bhi khali haath tere daar se
khwaab main bhi hum dhondte the chehra jiska
dekh ke woh choop gaya paas ki diwaar se
maangte hi reh gaye pyaar ka iqraar unse
woh milne aye the aaj kisi aur yaar se
ret ke pairo ke nisha denge tujhko mera pata
tum milne ajana kabhi apne beete pyaar se....
~roshni~
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«Reply #10 on: September 07, 2006, 03:08:35 PM » |
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wakai aapki baat mere dil ko chu gayi hai aur aapke agle nagme ka intejaar karunga. Thx for this wonderful share of your heart.
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«Reply #11 on: September 07, 2006, 03:12:12 PM » |
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wakai aapki baat mere dil ko chu gayi hai aur aapke agle nagme ka intejaar karunga. Thx for this wonderful share of your heart. aap kiske nagme ki baat karrahe ho???  |
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«Reply #12 on: September 07, 2006, 03:33:20 PM » |
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aapke nagme ki roshni ji
hosh me nahi hun na hi be hosh hun main
Be wajah nahi per ha khamosh hun main
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«Reply #13 on: September 08, 2006, 12:34:18 PM » |
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aapke nagme ki roshni ji
hosh me nahi hun na hi be hosh hun main
Be wajah nahi per ha khamosh hun main yeh maine apni ek saheli k saath likhi hai...! unhe mere dil ki awaaz suna de
khuda mujhko meri mohabbat dila de
main hun ab akeli woh hogaye juda kyu?
mere maliq mujhe mera pyaar dila de
unhe mere dil ki tadapti pukaar suna de
tuta mera dil kyu mere sanam se
meri wafa ki laaj bachale
door mujhse kyu mera pyaar hawa hai
khuda tu hi jane hai ye pyaar hai sacha
mere moala tu unhe ye ehsaas dila de
main kab tak yuhi rooz rooz marungi
bina unke main ab kaise jiyungi
rahem mujhpe kar allah koi raasta dikhade
unhe mere dil ki awaaz suna de
ye dil ki ghutan meri na ab sahoon main
ho bimaar unki...unhise dawa dila de
jo kerte the pyaar woh kyu aaj dil ko dukhate hain??
woh mudat se humko kyu na milpate hain??
unhe mere paas tu wapis bula de
mere rab meri mohabbat se tu na juda kar
rahem karne wala hai tu rahem bas itna dikhade
meri khushi meri zindagi hai jo
un khushiyon se mujhko rabba milade
tujhpe aqida hai tu mera khuda hai
ye gum ke saye allah ab hatade
main kisse kahun jo dard mujhe hota hai
bina unke har aanso mujhe chubta hai
unhe bas ey khuda phir mera banade
tu hai karishme wala tu hai harsu
mujhe ye karishma tu allah dikhade
unhe mere dil ki awaaz suna de
khuda mujhko meri mohbbat lautade
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