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Muflisi lafzo me kaha bayaa.N hoti hai
Jinko yeh de dikhayee kam aisi nigaah hoti hai
Bolti hai koi bhookh kaha apne bare me
Kehte tumko hai kamzor badan jo ishare me
Paibandh laga kya dekha tumne koi aachal
Hai jawani magar nahi aakh me koi kajal
Koi dost tumhara bhi aisa hoga
Jooni chappal koi joona sa kurta hoga
Tumse kehta nahi hoga woh koi dard apna
Dekhta hoga magar woh bhi koi sapna
Koi chat tumne tapakti hui dekhi hogi
Zindagi tumne sisakti hui dekhi hogi
Baap koi jo pareshaa.N tumse takraaya hoga
Yeh alag baat woh tumse na kuch keh paya hoga
Kitni hai behnein nahi jinki hai uth payee doli
Kabhi tumne bhi suna hoga lagi hai unki boli
Yeh sab sunne na sunane ki batein hai
Aur na samajhne na samjhane ki batein hai
Jo karo mehsoos to sunaiee de tumko
Har aah har dard har bhookh dikhayee de tumko
Tum to masroof ho khud me tumhe fursat hi kaha
Aur yeh bahana koi humse kuch kehta hai kaha
Yeh to achcha hai khamosh hai muflisi jaha me
Sun pate nahi warna tum hasi jaha me
Sun pate nahi warna tum hasi jaha me…………….
Sajid Ghayel
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«Reply #3 on: September 19, 2010, 01:40:54 PM » |
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«Reply #4 on: September 19, 2010, 05:22:00 PM » |
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Muflisi lafzo me kaha bayaa.N hoti hai
Jinko yeh de dikhayee kam aisi nigaah hoti hai
Bolti hai koi bhookh kaha apne bare me
Kehte tumko hai kamzor badan jo ishare me
Paibandh laga kya dekha tumne koi aachal
Hai jawani magar nahi aakh me koi kajal
Koi dost tumhara bhi aisa hoga
Jooni chappal koi joona sa kurta hoga
Tumse kehta nahi hoga woh koi dard apna
Dekhta hoga magar woh bhi koi sapna
Koi chat tumne tapakti hui dekhi hogi
Zindagi tumne sisakti hui dekhi hogi
Baap koi jo pareshaa.N tumse takraaya hoga
Yeh alag baat woh tumse na kuch keh paya hoga
Kitni hai behnein nahi jinki hai uth payee doli
Kabhi tumne bhi suna hoga lagi hai unki boli
Yeh sab sunne na sunane ki batein hai
Aur na samajhne na samjhane ki batein hai
Jo karo mehsoos to sunaiee de tumko
Har aah har dard har bhookh dikhayee de tumko
Tum to masroof ho khud me tumhe fursat hi kaha
Aur yeh bahana koi humse kuch kehta hai kaha
Yeh to achcha hai khamosh hai muflisi jaha me
Sun pate nahi warna tum hasi jaha me
Sun pate nahi warna tum hasi jaha me…………….
Sajid Ghayel
Sach Ka Aainaa Dikhaati ... Sajid Bhai ... aapki yeh nazm mujhe behad pasand aai... iska fikR o khayal aur bayaani ne mujhe bahut prabhaavit kiya... ehsaas dil par dastak dete nazar aaye... bahut khoob ....very nice creation .. dil se daad hazir hai... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi... khush rahen ... duaaon ke saath.... |
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«Reply #6 on: September 20, 2010, 05:51:26 AM » |
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«Reply #7 on: September 20, 2010, 07:36:58 AM » |
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI SAJID GHAYEL JI......
MAR MAR KE JEENE KO MAJBOOR KARTI HAI MUFLISI
EK ZINDA LAASH BANA KAR RAKHTI HAI MUFLISI
HAR SAPNO SE DOOR KAR DETI HAI MUFLISI
KAR DETI HAI ZINDAGI "KHAMOSH MUFLISI".....
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«Reply #8 on: January 18, 2011, 05:56:12 AM » |
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«Reply #9 on: January 19, 2011, 03:54:14 PM » |
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sajid yaar......
aaj shabd talash karne pad rahe hain ki is beshkeamti pesh-kash ki kya kah ke tareef karun....kya likhun...... har ek safe ke liye, har ek alfaaz ke liye bepanah daad...
bahoot hi behtreen....
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«Reply #10 on: January 19, 2011, 04:45:38 PM » |
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mai koi daad dene ka haq nhi rakhta aapke kalaam ko...
bas ye kah sakta hu --
Sazid ji aapko aur aapki shayri ko Salaam..sirf aap jese shayr hi itni parkhi se sach ko kagaz pr utaar sakte hain.
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thanx
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«Reply #12 on: March 15, 2011, 08:19:38 PM » |
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«Reply #13 on: March 25, 2011, 08:30:10 PM » |
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Aapko apni thread par dekhkar bohat bohat khushi hui. Allah aapko har buraiee se mehfooz rakhe AAMEEN |
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«Reply #14 on: March 26, 2011, 01:15:12 AM » |
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Sajid jee !ye kyaa?  ?? muflisi lafz kee bukkal odhe saamne aa khdee hui hai.....ye nazm dil me kaheeN andar tak utartee chalee gayee.......bebasee na jaane kitane jharokoN se ek saath jhaankne lagee...jaise kisi taar taar libaas se kisi bachche kaa badan... ahsas kee in gahraiyoN ko chhoo lenaa aap jaise samvedansheel rachnaakaar ke liye hee mumkin hai...... |
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