~~"KHAMOSH REHTE HAM TO AACHA THA"~~

by k.shael on October 16, 2008, 10:45:59 AM
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NA KARTE JO MOHABBAT KA TUMSE IQRAAR TO AACHA
THA, NA KARTE TUMSE SAREAAM PYAR TO AACHA
THA,

NA HOTE DIWAANE TERI YAADO ME NA JALTE MEHFIL
ME PARWAANE TO AACHA THA, NA U MEHFIL ME TERI
RUSWAIYAAN HOTI TO AACHA THA,

TU CHALA GAYA CHOD KE JABB TO DUNIYA HAM CHOD
DETE WO AACHA THA, GAMM AAPNE KISI KO NA BATLATE
TO AACHA THA,

NA KIYA HOTA ZIKAR JHAKHMO KA DOSTO SE TO AACHA
THA, NA WO MARHAM LAGATE AUR NA DEKH PAATE UNHE
TO AACHA THA,

NA UNKI HASSI HOTHON SE KHAMOSH HOTI,MERE AANSOO
NA WO AAPNI AANKH ME LAATE TO AACHA THA, NA U
SHIKWE GILE HOTE TO AACHA THA,

KHULTE NA DARD KE RAAJ TO AACHA THA, MARR CHUKE
HOTE HAM AAJ TO AACHA THA...

BY. K.SHAEL

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«Reply #1 on: October 16, 2008, 11:20:44 AM »
 
Wah wah shally bohat khoob likha hai aapne..  ApplauseThumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: October 16, 2008, 11:26:12 AM »
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SHUKRIYA HONEY DIDI,
BY. K.SHAEL
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Talat
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«Reply #3 on: October 16, 2008, 11:29:56 AM »
Very Nice Shael Applause
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«Reply #4 on: October 16, 2008, 11:33:41 AM »
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SHUKRIYA CELMIRA JI,
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #5 on: October 16, 2008, 12:52:39 PM »
BOHAT BOHAT KHOOB SHAEL JI! KHOOB KAHA AAPNE.... Applause Applause


"WO KAATIL THA MAGAR DILDAAR AUR ACHCHHA THA,
 KARTA MERA BHI KATL MAIN SHIKAAR TO ACHCHHA THA.

 RAAT KAT_TI AANKHON MEIN FIR ZARA ZARA,
 GHAM BHI HOTE DO-CHAAR TO ACHCHHA THA.

 KHELTE WO BHI ISHQ KA KHEL KAI BAR MUJHSE,
 AUR MAIN HAARTA HAR BAAR TO ACHCHHA THA.

 NA JAANE KYUN TOOTA NAHI YE ABTAK 'TANHA',
 USKA MERE DIL PE WAAR TO ACHCHHA THA."


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«Reply #6 on: October 16, 2008, 01:40:49 PM »
shallyy, as always, nicely said... tanha... kya baat hai!
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«Reply #7 on: October 16, 2008, 01:45:09 PM »
Nice One Good Work By All,.
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«Reply #8 on: October 16, 2008, 01:56:48 PM »
BAHUT ACCHA LIKHA HAI SHAEL
AAPKA KALAM PADHKAR KUCH NA HI LIKHA JAAYE TO ACCHA HAI
SHAYAD KAABIL HI NAHIN HAIN ISKE
Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: October 16, 2008, 01:58:33 PM »
BOHAT BOHAT KHOOB SHAEL JI! KHOOB KAHA AAPNE.... Applause Applause


"WO KAATIL THA MAGAR DILDAAR AUR ACHCHHA THA,
 KARTA MERA BHI KATL MAIN SHIKAAR TO ACHCHHA THA.

 RAAT KAT_TI AANKHON MEIN FIR ZARA ZARA,
 GHAM BHI HOTE DO-CHAAR TO ACHCHHA THA.

 KHELTE WO BHI ISHQ KA KHEL KAI BAR MUJHSE,
 AUR MAIN HAARTA HAR BAAR TO ACHCHHA THA.

 NA JAANE KYUN TOOTA NAHI YE ABTAK 'TANHA',
 USKA MERE DIL PE WAAR TO ACHCHHA THA."


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BAHUT KHOOB SAURABH JI AAPNE BHI BAHUT ACCHA LIKHA HAI Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: October 16, 2008, 02:07:38 PM »
TUMSE MILKAR KHUSHI TO HAIN LEKIN
TUMSE MILNE KA KHAYAL ISSE ACHCHA THA

TUM AA GAYE TUMKO AANA THA EK DIN LEKIN
TERE LIYE JO GUZRA WOH INTEZAR ISSE ACHCHA THA

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«Reply #11 on: October 16, 2008, 02:15:13 PM »
Nice One Sajid,.
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k.shael
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«Reply #12 on: October 17, 2008, 05:46:47 AM »
BOHAT BOHAT KHOOB SHAEL JI! KHOOB KAHA AAPNE.... Applause Applause


"WO KAATIL THA MAGAR DILDAAR AUR ACHCHHA THA,
 KARTA MERA BHI KATL MAIN SHIKAAR TO ACHCHHA THA.

 RAAT KAT_TI AANKHON MEIN FIR ZARA ZARA,
 GHAM BHI HOTE DO-CHAAR TO ACHCHHA THA.

 KHELTE WO BHI ISHQ KA KHEL KAI BAR MUJHSE,
 AUR MAIN HAARTA HAR BAAR TO ACHCHHA THA.

 NA JAANE KYUN TOOTA NAHI YE ABTAK 'TANHA',
 USKA MERE DIL PE WAAR TO ACHCHHA THA."


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SHUKRIYA TANHA JI,
BAHUT KHOOB LINES LIKHI HAI AAPNE
BHI...
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #13 on: October 17, 2008, 05:48:05 AM »
shallyy, as always, nicely said... tanha... kya baat hai!


SHUKRIYA ANJAAN SIS...
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #14 on: October 17, 2008, 05:49:23 AM »
Nice One Good Work By All,.


SHUKRIYA JANSHEEN JI,
AAPKO APNE THREAD ME DEKHKAR
AACHA LAGA...
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