~~"KHAMOSH REHTE HAM TO AACHA THA"~~

by k.shael on October 16, 2008, 10:45:59 AM
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«Reply #15 on: October 17, 2008, 05:50:43 AM »
Quote from: diya786 on October 16, 2008, 01:56:48 PM
BAHUT ACCHA LIKHA HAI SHAEL
AAPKA KALAM PADHKAR KUCH NA HI LIKHA JAAYE TO ACCHA HAI
SHAYAD KAABIL HI NAHIN HAIN ISKE Applause Applause Applause


SHUKRIYA DIYA SIS...
BASS U HI PYAR DETI REHNA,
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #16 on: October 17, 2008, 05:52:07 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on October 16, 2008, 02:07:38 PM
TUMSE MILKAR KHUSHI TO HAIN LEKIN
TUMSE MILNE KA KHAYAL ISSE ACHCHA THA

TUM AA GAYE TUMKO AANA THA EK DIN LEKIN
TERE LIYE JO GUZRA WOH INTEZAR ISSE ACHCHA THA
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BAHUT AACHI LINES HAI SAJID
BY. K.SHAEL
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baadal102
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«Reply #17 on: October 17, 2008, 06:37:09 AM »
bahut khoob bahut aacha likha hai shael ji




Baadal
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«Reply #18 on: October 17, 2008, 06:41:32 AM »
Quote from: baadal102 on October 17, 2008, 06:37:09 AM
bahut khoob bahut aacha likha hai shael ji




Baadal

SHUKRIYA BAADAL JI,
BY. K.SHAEL
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #19 on: October 19, 2008, 12:48:57 AM »
Just wonderful presentation shael ji  Applause Applause Applause

Bahut kabiley tarif hai ye nazm
Mujhe to soochte lagega ek janm
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«Reply #20 on: October 19, 2008, 05:39:01 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on October 16, 2008, 10:45:59 AM
NA KARTE JO MOHABBAT KA TUMSE IQRAAR TO AACHA
THA, NA KARTE TUMSE SAREAAM PYAR TO AACHA
THA,

NA HOTE DIWAANE TERI YAADO ME NA JALTE MEHFIL
ME PARWAANE TO AACHA THA, NA U MEHFIL ME TERI
RUSWAIYAAN HOTI TO AACHA THA,

TU CHALA GAYA CHOD KE JABB TO DUNIYA HAM CHOD
DETE WO AACHA THA, GAMM AAPNE KISI KO NA BATLATE
TO AACHA THA,

NA KIYA HOTA ZIKAR JHAKHMO KA DOSTO SE TO AACHA
THA, NA WO MARHAM LAGATE AUR NA DEKH PAATE UNHE
TO AACHA THA,

NA UNKI HASSI HOTHON SE KHAMOSH HOTI,MERE AANSOO
NA WO AAPNI AANKH ME LAATE TO AACHA THA, NA U
SHIKWE GILE HOTE TO AACHA THA,

KHULTE NA DARD KE RAAJ TO AACHA THA, MARR CHUKE
HOTE HAM AAJ TO AACHA THA...

BY. K.SHAEL



Bahut umda qalaam hai aapka..
khush rahein hamesha...
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«Reply #21 on: October 19, 2008, 05:40:44 AM »
khwaabon ke jungal mein kho gaya hai wajood mera,
khwaabon ka koi phool palkon pe na sajate to achha tha,
Kho gaye hai ab is pathrili raah pe chalte chalte,
is dard bhare safar ka aagaaz na karte to achha tha...
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«Reply #22 on: October 21, 2008, 10:59:29 AM »
Nice One sabne Kamaal ka Likha hai,.
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«Reply #23 on: October 21, 2008, 11:02:55 AM »
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on October 19, 2008, 12:48:57 AM
Just wonderful presentation shael ji  Applause Applause Applause

Bahut kabiley tarif hai ye nazm
Mujhe to soochte lagega ek janm

BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA RAJESH JI,
U HI SARAHTE RAHIYEGA...
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«Reply #24 on: October 21, 2008, 11:04:55 AM »
Quote from: angel4u on October 19, 2008, 05:39:01 AM
Bahut umda qalaam hai aapka..
khush rahein hamesha...

SHUKRIYA ANGEL,
AACHA LAGA AAPKO APNE THREAD
ME DEKHKAR...
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«Reply #25 on: October 21, 2008, 11:11:04 AM »
Quote from: angel4u on October 19, 2008, 05:40:44 AM
khwaabon ke jungal mein kho gaya hai wajood mera,
khwaabon ka koi phool palkon pe na sajate to achha tha,
Kho gaye hai ab is pathrili raah pe chalte chalte,
is dard bhare safar ka aagaaz na karte to achha tha...


BAHUT PYARI LINES LIKHI HAI AAPNE
ANGEL...
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«Reply #26 on: October 21, 2008, 11:13:24 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on October 21, 2008, 10:59:29 AM
Nice One sabne Kamaal ka Likha hai,.

SHUKRIYA JANSHEEN JI,
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«Reply #27 on: October 21, 2008, 03:11:53 PM »
U Are Welcome Ji,.

Khamosh Rehkar Jo Dil Ki Baat, Maine Dabaai Hai,.
Is Liye Dekho, Kitni Badi Sazaa Paai Hai,.

Tumne Kehdiya, Dil Ka Haal "Shael,.
Aur Tumhaare Hisse Mein Bhi Tanhaai Hai,.

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«Reply #28 on: October 21, 2008, 03:31:18 PM »
bahut bahut khoob shally!! Applause Applause Applause

bahut khoob saurabhji, azeem bro, angel, sajid saheb..
aap sab ne bhi khoob likha  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #29 on: October 21, 2008, 03:40:28 PM »
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