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***
duur tak andhera hai
dilfarebiyon ka bhi pehra hai
ek haseen khaab jaise
kadwa koi sachh lagta hai!
khamosh sanso se bhi bula raha koi lgta hai
ghutti si ek cheekh num aankho se bhi
muskura raha ho koi lgta hai!
umeed ki kiran koi ab bhi hai maddham si
Pinzaro.n ki iss deh me ab bhi hai ruh ki ek bandhan si!
saanse bhi jaise ab khamosh si hain
dhadkane fir bhi chalti hain!
kisi ki beshumaar chahat ka asar hai yaron
jee rahe hain jaise
marr marr ke ab roz lagta hai
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«Reply #1 on: December 26, 2010, 08:30:18 AM » |
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kya kahun Kb iss kavita k liye main....... ek ajeeb si ghutan mehsus hui hai ise padhkar...  |
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«Reply #2 on: December 26, 2010, 08:36:52 AM » |
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hmm:( ajeeb baat hai Kasak.. jab kabi mene koi feel se likha wo saddy ho gaya. |
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«Reply #3 on: December 26, 2010, 08:55:43 AM » |
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Kb....dont b sad re.....jo andar hoga wahi bahar aayega na.... jo tumne feel kiya wahi bahar aaya.... smile plzzz....tum saddy achche nahin lagte..masti karte hi achche dikhte ho...  |
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«Reply #4 on: December 26, 2010, 09:07:07 AM » |
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hahaha sady aur Subbu ka koi mel nhi. ye to apna style hai masti krne ka nd mera ye jhuta feel safal rha i thnk re-- huhaaaa.. |
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«Reply #5 on: December 26, 2010, 09:07:48 AM » |
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mukhote pe mukhota.....
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«Reply #6 on: December 26, 2010, 09:11:25 AM » |
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haha mukhota nhi Kasak ji sachhhhh or sachhh sirf.
mera sachh koi blive nai krta or jhut koi pakad hi nai paata.
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tumne daad nhi dia ab tak
kuch to hausala hi badha deti ...
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«Reply #7 on: December 26, 2010, 09:34:31 AM » |
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lo ji hausla badha dete hain aapka KB ji....shayad hum hi na samjh paye aapke sach aur jhut ko....
lekin bht achch alikha hai ye jhut aur sach aapne...isily dil me feelings aai na ....smjha karo reeeeee
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«Reply #8 on: December 26, 2010, 09:44:01 AM » |
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bahut bahut dhanyabaad aapka ji. me hi thoda sa nasmjh hu shayd. nai samjh paya:)  *** khus rahiye ji |
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«Reply #9 on: December 26, 2010, 12:50:18 PM » |
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""
dil me ek tuufaan sa gahra hai
uss pr bhi khamosh sanso ka pahra hai
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«Reply #10 on: December 27, 2010, 04:34:56 AM » |
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Good one Subbu
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«Reply #11 on: December 27, 2010, 10:51:23 AM » |
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kya ye sad song hai ??
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«Reply #12 on: December 28, 2010, 11:10:17 AM » |
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dhanyabaad Guruji..
aapka bhi sukriya Nirala ji
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«Reply #13 on: December 28, 2010, 11:16:00 AM » |
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nice lines kb...
par mujhey to tumhare two liners jyada acche lagte hai..
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«Reply #14 on: May 13, 2011, 10:01:21 AM » |
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nice lines kb...
par mujhey to tumhare two liners jyada acche lagte hai..
thanx priya… ab se 2 line hi likhunga fir se ok |
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