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khat ko unke

by saahill on January 23, 2011, 10:46:24 AM

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ek ek nishaan main uske pyar ka mitaana chahta hoon
tasveer hai jo dil mein lagi usko jalaana chahta hoon
kya karun main yeh bhi to main kar nahin sakta
ek ek yaad ko uski main yaadgaar banna chahta hoon


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Re: khat ko unke

«Reply #1 on: January 23, 2011, 05:30:30 PM »

Sahil Jee Aadaab!

Bahut khub likha hai janab daad......
But pahle do lines ki thinking alag hai..
Aur dusre do lines ki alag ...

Gar baat bhulaane ki kahi jaa rahi hai to
wohi puri karni chahiye... Aisa humara sochna hai
Baki aapke ashaar to waqai behad khoob hai..

Chaliye is chahata huN ke radiff par hum bhi kuch kahne
ki Gustaqui karte hai...

Zindagi jeena ka fakhat bahaana chahata huN
Dard samne hai mere maiN muskurana chahata huN

Mujhe dar nahi ghamoN ka mousam badalte youN hi
Gardish e rawaan hai waqt jo bitaana chahta huN

Nahi maiN kamzarf o khudgaraz bhi mera mayar alag hai
Dekh lena mayyat pe meri maiN jo dikhaana chahta huN

Aate rahiye janab..
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez...