KHAT -- ruk na paaunga~~~ Saahil:Shayri-E-Dard

salil2002

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doston yeh ek aise bande k emotions hai jo cancer kii last stage par hai....jiski zindgi kissii bhi pal khatam ho sakti hai.... shayad aap sabko pasand aaye

ekkhat likh raha hoon main tere naam ka
jab na rahoonga main toh pad lena ise
chaha tha tujhko dil se maine har lamha
jab kabhi mohabbat pe na ho aetbar pad lena ise

mere jaane ka matlab nhin kii khatam ho gayi duniya
nhin isk matlab nahin kii tu apni saanson ko rok le
maine kiye thay jo vade, kar na saka unka poora
iska matlab nahin kii tu duniya se mooh mod le

mujhe kya ilm tha kii ab chand lamhon kii jindgani hai
kudrat k aage chali kiski manmaani hai
mujhe bhula kar , ghar basa lena tu
is duniya main jo chala gaya, oose yaad rkhna bemaani hai

is baar nahin ho saka tera , magar agli baar jab aaunga
apne khuda se meri dulhan maang tujhe hi aaunga
tab poore karoonga tere sapne aur teri khwahishe
abhi jaane de, farishte aye hi ab aur ruk na paaunga

is khat ko bhi pad kar jala dena
warna yeh tumhe yaad meri dilaayega
nahin chahta mere baad bhi tu mujhe yaad kar k roye
tera har aansu, "saahil" ko hazaar maut maar jaayega


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angel4u

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Re: KHAT -- ruk na paaunga~~~ Saahil

«Reply #1 on: May 01, 2009, 06:51:19 AM »

Beautiful Salil.
Tum har baar ek naya topic laate ho, jisse hum usi situation ko imagne karne lagte hia jis situation ki ye poem hoti hia. and that really counts when you get deeply involved in the poem and start putting yourself in that particular situation. You always do that by your wonderful structure of words and amazing emotions.

Keep writing...
Waiting for the nextpoem by you...


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dead heart

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Re: KHAT -- ruk na paaunga~~~ Saahil

«Reply #2 on: May 01, 2009, 08:02:06 AM »

Quote from: salil2002 on May 01, 2009, 06:47:11 AM

doston yeh ek aise bande k emotions hai jo cancer kii last stage par hai....jiski zindgi kissii bhi pal khatam ho sakti hai.... shayad aap sabko pasand aaye

What a marvellous piece this is...beautiful...Its appreciatable and i would like to say that Saahil bro...u must rite more n more...Well done...


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: KHAT -- ruk na paaunga~~~ Saahil

«Reply #3 on: May 01, 2009, 08:19:36 AM »

Bohat khoob Salil... agar koi ise sachche dil se padhe to jo gile shikwe hain mita kar apno ko gale se laga le.....Bohat khoob. Khuda tumhe khush rakhe....


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pankshivam

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Re: KHAT -- ruk na paaunga~~~ Saahil

«Reply #4 on: May 01, 2009, 08:44:20 AM »

Very Nice Salil Bhai


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syednaami

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Re: KHAT -- ruk na paaunga~~~ Saahil

«Reply #5 on: May 01, 2009, 11:42:26 AM »

Bahut kamaal ka likha hai dear bro... so agonizing...

Kyun dard men likh rahe ho devaanavaar,
Kya kisi ne dukh puhunchaya tumken bar bar,
Khush rahne se hi zindagi barhti hai,
Gham men jiyoge to rote rahoge zaron-zar...

Syed


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salil2002

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Re: KHAT -- ruk na paaunga~~~ Saahil

«Reply #6 on: May 01, 2009, 12:25:26 PM »

Quote from: {Angel} on May 01, 2009, 06:51:19 AM

apne toh bahut hi zyda izzat de di mujhe huzen.......koshish kroonga kii pko ge aur bhi behtr padne ko deta rahoon


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salil2002

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Re: KHAT -- ruk na paaunga~~~ Saahil

«Reply #7 on: May 01, 2009, 12:26:34 PM »

Quote from: dead heart on May 01, 2009, 08:02:06 AM

What a marvellous piece this is...beautiful...Its appreciatable and i would like to say that Saahil bro...u must rite more n more...Well done...

shukriy rahim bhai apko apni thread par dekh kar yekeen aata hai ki sach main maine achcha likha hai


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salil2002

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Re: KHAT -- ruk na paaunga~~~ Saahil

«Reply #8 on: May 01, 2009, 12:34:59 PM »

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on May 01, 2009, 08:19:36 AM

Bohat khoob Salil... agar koi ise sachche dil se padhe to jo gile shikwe hain mita kar apno ko gale se laga le.....Bohat khoob. Khuda tumhe khush rakhe....

Quote from: pankshivam on May 01, 2009, 08:44:20 AM

Very Nice Salil Bhai

shukriya sajid bhai jo aapne is kadar baareeki se pada aur saraha mujhe,,,,,,,,,,,

pank bhai aapkii daad ko sar jhuka kar qabool karte hain


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salil2002

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Re: KHAT -- ruk na paaunga~~~ Saahil

«Reply #9 on: May 01, 2009, 12:39:07 PM »

Quote from: syednaami on May 01, 2009, 11:42:26 AM

syed bhai kaise ho aap bahut dino k bad aaye hain meri thread par....bahut hi khoobsurat tareeke se sawaal kiya hai jawaab bhi waise hi dene kii koshish karta hoon

zindgi oosi roz khatam kar di jab hath mohabbt mein nakami aayi
yeh dard jo bayaan karta hoon , yeh mer nahin kissii aur ka hai
apni toh zindgi ko har gham se azaad kar diya maine
ab toh likhta hoon oos dard ko,jo sabki nazar se dikhta hai


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syednaami

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Re: KHAT -- ruk na paaunga~~~ Saahil

«Reply #10 on: May 01, 2009, 12:45:25 PM »

Bahut khoob javab paish kiya hai...
Arz hai...

Ilaaj kuchh is tarah kar ke dard mite,

Marz ko bayaan karne se dil hi dukhe...


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salil2002

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Re: KHAT -- ruk na paaunga~~~ Saahil

«Reply #11 on: May 01, 2009, 12:53:20 PM »

jawaab nahin bhai jaan aapka mujhe lajawab kar dete ho par aise hi haar nahin maanoonga

dard ka ilaaj hota, toh har koi yoon na mohtaaj hota
har heer kisi ki mehbooba, har ranjha kissii ka sartaaj hota
yahan toh mohabbat ko pesha banaya hai logon ne
bayaan na karta dard ko , toh deewana aaj bhi rota


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syednaami

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Re: KHAT -- ruk na paaunga~~~ Saahil

«Reply #12 on: May 01, 2009, 01:14:43 PM »

Aise hi dhava bolte raho, haar aur jeet ka savaal to paida hi nahin hota, main to sath de raha hun dear...

Falsafi baaton se zakhm bhare nahin jaate,
Aashiqon ki misaalon se ilaaj kiye nahin jaate,
Naam-e-muhabbat itna chhota nahin mere yaar,
Hosh kho kar kabhi dard mitaye nahin jaate...


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salil2002

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Re: KHAT -- ruk na paaunga~~~ Saahil

«Reply #13 on: May 05, 2009, 01:30:28 PM »

Quote from: syednaami on May 01, 2009, 01:14:43 PM

dard mit jaaye mere dil ka toh hosh main aaun
mit jaaun mohabbat mein toh misaal ban jaun
yoonhi nahin kehta kii duniya mein dard bahut hai
muskurata hoon ek wajah se, tu kahe toh ashq dikhaun


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