***KHATA***:Shayri-E-Dard

baadal102

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Zannat samjha tha daaman hummne jinka,
Waqt aane pe wo humme taar taar mila,

Khata ker baithe hum jindgaani se apni,
Jo humme wo apni mahobbat ke layak laga,

Samjhe the wo hamesha saath dega raho main,
Lakin hamesha wo dur khada humme mila,

Yakeen karte rahe har baat pe us ki,
Hamesha lakin sab jhoot hi mila,

Sahara diya humesha waqt pe use,
Lakin humme kabhi sahara na mila,

Khata ker baithe hum jindgaani se apni,
Jo humme wo apni mahobbat ke layak laga.......

Baadal


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: ***KHATA***

«Reply #1 on: August 21, 2008, 08:19:25 AM »

bohut khoob baadal ji

kasur kuch nigahon ka raha hoga
tabhi tumhe wo pyaar k layak laga hoga

bhola mann hai baadal tumahara
isliye tumne uspar aitbaar tha kiya hoga

chal rahe the soch tum k wo saath nibhayega
wo hai koi apna shayd ye bharam tumko tha ho chala hoga

na ab duhai do tum k wo kyu bewafaa ho gaya
wo tha kabhi wafaadar ye tumko dhoka hua hoga

ye jaan le baadal har kisi ki kahani yahan adhuri hai
mohobbat ghayal hai karti chupke se ye churi hi aisi hai


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k.shael

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Re: ***KHATA***

«Reply #2 on: August 21, 2008, 08:25:18 AM »

BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI AAPNE,
BAADAL JI,
KEEP GOING...
BY. K.SHAEL


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ANKIT RAO

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Re: ***KHATA***

«Reply #3 on: August 21, 2008, 08:54:11 AM »

BAHUT KHOOB BAADAL JI.BAHUT AACHA LIKHA HAIN APNE.


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Talat

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Re: ***KHATA***

«Reply #4 on: August 21, 2008, 07:06:39 PM »

Bohot Khoob Baadal, Bhawna


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Muhammed

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Re: ***KHATA***

«Reply #5 on: August 22, 2008, 04:53:38 AM »

Quote from: baadal102 on August 21, 2008, 08:03:32 AM

Jee baadal Fir se aapne ik aisi Nazm Likhi hai jis k har ash'aar Dard-e-Bayaa'n Karta Hai..alfaaz bhi saaf va suffaf liye hai aapne..B'khoobi aapne dil ki baat ko rakha hai
bahut Hi duswaar hota hai kuch is andaaz se likhna bhi,,Mein khoob jaanta hun.allaah aapko sukun-e-qalb de ye dua hai Meri


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baadal102

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Re: ***KHATA***

«Reply #6 on: August 22, 2008, 07:54:46 AM »

Bahut hi aacha likha hai aap ne bhawna ji Clapping Smiley

And thanx a lot all of u

shael ji
ankit ji
celmira ji icon_salut

N
muhammed ji

thanx a lot again
kaash aap jaise dost har kisi ko mile

Baadal


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: ***KHATA***

«Reply #7 on: August 22, 2008, 08:07:47 AM »

thnk u baadal ji


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baadal102

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Re: ***KHATA***

«Reply #8 on: August 23, 2008, 06:46:32 AM »

welcome bhawna ji icon_salut

Baadal


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syednaami

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Re: ***KHATA***

«Reply #9 on: August 23, 2008, 06:52:10 AM »

Wah Baadal miyan, you are really creating piercing poems.

Kaushik Bhavana jee, beautiful creation, keep writing.


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baadal102

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Re: ***KHATA***

«Reply #10 on: August 23, 2008, 07:15:11 AM »

thanx syednaami ji

Baadal


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syednaami

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Re: ***KHATA***

«Reply #11 on: August 23, 2008, 06:09:36 PM »

Welcome Baadal, thanks


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sayani kuri

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Re: ***KHATA***

«Reply #12 on: August 23, 2008, 06:46:07 PM »

good work welldon Clapping Smiley


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syednaami

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Re: ***KHATA***

«Reply #13 on: August 23, 2008, 08:24:16 PM »

O jee Sayani kuri, tuseen vekho oh je shayari likhya wo main nain seen.
Thanks SK


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baadal102

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Re: ***KHATA***

«Reply #14 on: August 25, 2008, 05:15:24 AM »

thanx a lot sayani ji

Baadal


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